2* - please be advised of mild spoilers
Lucius is the third book in the Lunar Lodge series and the third book that I have read. While I was willing to give this series a go, unfortunately, for me this book became the end of that road. Beside the fact that this series is really quite formulaic, the characters are losing all of the credibility and any appeal that they had. There are also certain trends and turns that I just don’t have any more tolerance for. Here are some of them:
Excessive moaning and groaning
Constant, exasperating, aggravating sighing (it started with second book,” Titus”, but in this book it reached an epidemic proportion. Really, with all that sighing going on, someone please check the characters for the impaired pulmonary functions)
How often everyone either whispers or shouts.
The fact that this book feels like it was edited by a word-processing and use of spell – check, but without any human interaction. Forget about punctuations, confusing his and hers – any proof reader surely would have noticed words with correct spelling, but wrong in the context, e.g. the guards keep checking and walking the “parameter” and not perimeter of the compound. There are also frequent losses in continuity of the action which resulted in rather bizarre sequences of events.
Now then, about Hannah. Please, don’t get me wrong, I am all for the girl – power, however it was incredulous how Hannah, our rather curvy heroine, ended up being practically an embodiment of a superwoman. There is agility and super strength – she is constantly jumping and even manages to do so while having sex, with our hefty hero firmly imbedded between her thighs. There is extreme speed – she hops out of the car, but then the next moment our hero is helping her out of the same car ( obviously, faster than a speeding bullet , she got back in to that car so her honey could be gallant or, most likely, see the loss of continuity comment). Her flexibility appears to be phenomenal – after being kidnapped, with her hands tied with cable ties (mind you, we are never told if her hands were tied at the front or at the back which is significant in view of what comes next) she manages to crack open the pendant that contains a vile with secret potion and lodge the pendant between her breasts, then she bends her head, reaches for the vile (which is still held between her breasts) with her teeth, opens it with same teeth and drinks the potion ! Wow!!!! Either she’s got monumental gazungas that sit right under her chin or she can give Mister Fantastic from Fantastic Four a run for his money. Obviously, if her hands were tied in the front, such feat of contortionism would not be required, and we would not be gifted with a scene that overstretches boundaries of credibility, not to mention the laws of physics and anatomy.
One last thing – in the middle of military compound surrounded by scores of soldiers and highly trained super – duper hybrids, a bunch of women could not have a get together for girl’s night in because it was not considered to be safe. Well, not surprising, since the most these super-duper hybrids were doing was moaning, groaning, growling, sighing and having sex. It appears that all of their training has gone to seed and more often than not boys were rescued by the girls and frankly, I just could not care less. Maybe in the following books our heroes will get off their duffs and start being heroic but this reader is not interested enough to find out.