2,25
I just finish it, and i am left with a lot of question. There was a lot question in this, that i let slide, because i thought that they would be answer in the end, they (author didn't answer them). I didn't like this. I had some problem with, the language that the emperor used to describe Sparrow or talk about him, i did find it a bit problematic, even thought there was consent conversation happening all the time. I found that at time, the language was very repetitive, the word "possessive " was used all the time to explain emperor feelings, and i would say that was the main "feeling" he had toward Sparrow, i just wish the author had use different words, or wording, but that was the one word i read again and again, and at some point, you just go "i get it, he is possessive", it was just a lot, especially because i didn't feel like it did something for the plot or for the relationship, i feel like it was suppose to make us feel like he want him that much, that it just a yearning and angst and tension feeling, but for me it just gave lust, and boner. It didn't give the dept, that it was suppose to give. I really love the world in this, at time it was a bit difficult to imagine, but i love the technology and i did wish we could have gotten more event outside the castle, like visiting the city or something like. I generally wish, i could have gotten more dates, that didn't end in sex or started with it, don't know if i am asking to much, but at the end, it felt like they were going at all the time. The end was confusing and totally random. That took me bye surprise. I was introduce to a new person, who was the villain, and it just felt very much who are you??? Like why are you here??? It felt rush and like a second thought, like the author had thought "and now i will end it with a bang". It didn't felt naturally and was just weird in my opinion.