"A true masterpiece for generations to cum... Agatha Crispy ★★★★ "True power comes from the heart (and chest) ... Tiktok reviewer ★★★★★ "My life is better for reading this... Kate Nugget ★★★★
Emily always dreamed of having a superpower. She thought she was on the verge of becoming a skilled hypnotist... but fate had a different plan. Instead, she got something a little more... unexpected.
This had the potential to be really great silly erotica. But it was trying too hard to be something else. The plot was all over the place. Wayyyy too much was tried to cram into 50 pages. Everything felt rushed as a result.
The smut was nonexistent. The romance was also nonexistent.
I’m just a little confused as to what this is trying to be lol.
Also, the first two chapters are in 1st POV, and the rest of the book is in 3rd POV. Think that might have been an oops. 😅
I did, however, really appreciate all the different boob verbiage. 🤌🏼😂