After re-reading book one, and now finishing this one, I’m not really sure where I sit with this series. There are parts of it I love, but the more I read, the less I seem to be able to pin point what, exactly, the plot is and through that, where the story is going. I just feel like the series as a whole needed another round of editing to make it a little clearer in parts. But that being said, there was still so much I enjoyed, so let’s start with the good.
Alma! We finally got her POV and I won’t lie, but I found her infinitely more interesting than Kat. She’s got this internal anger that always seems to leave her on the edge, something that is completely understandable when you realise what happened to her as a child. She will do anything to protect those she loves, especially Kat, the person who has never left her, even knowing all of her scars both physical and mental, but that does mean she puts herself in danger more than she should. She almost feels like her life is worth less for some reason, and I just found myself really connecting with her emotionally, and desperately wanting more of her chapters.
Kat stays a very similar character from book one, which meant there wasn’t really any character growth, and because of that she just felt a little flat for me. Her whole character seemed to focus around Emrys, how she wanted to protect him, how she loved him, and while I get that this is a romance, a little development outside of that would be nice. There were a few reveals relating to her character and history, one that I guessed in the first book, but they didn’t hit emotionally the way I would have expected them too. They seemed there for the shock value more than anything. We do get to meet a new character in this one, Gideon, Emrys’ half brother, and we get more Thean who we met in the first book. Thean quickly became a favourite character of mine, not just for their snark and inherent danger, but because of how the manage to rile up Alma at every turn.
It’s obvious to us as outsiders that there are feelings, feelings that go deeper than simple attraction. Thean’s ability to be wherever Alma needs them to be, their willingness to help Emrys and Kat even though it might be going against their mistress’s wishes. I would absolutely love to get their pov in the next book because firstly, I need them to explain some of their decisions in this book (that ending), but also because I feel their romance with Alma would hit that much more knowing just how much they care about her. This became the romance of the book for me with Kat and Emrys taking a backseat, even though their romance plays a heavier part in the book. If I had one issue with both of the romances though it was how easily they would flit from mortal peril to sexy time. There is a time and a place guys, and sometimes I felt they became ruled more by their hormones than sense.
I’m still not 100% sure what the plot of this series is meant to be? Like Delaney kept throwing in these big plot points, twists and reveals etc and I just found myself getting more and more confused. This could absolutely be a me thing, but I’m really not sure where the story is supposed to be going. I understand it’s a romantasy, so heavy on the romance, but it’s so plot heavy as well that I feel I should have a better understanding of where it’s going? I also felt that, while prosaic, Delaney’s writing became a little bit repetitive and nonsensical in places. I get wanting flowery and lush writing, but at some points it just felt like she was putting words in to made it sound prettier, without it making that much sense?
But, despite my issues I will probably be picking up the third book. I’m intrigued to see what actually happens with the plot, but more than that this book ended up a horrific cliffhanger, leaving my fave in peril and I need to know that they end up ok.