I am writing this review for the SFINCS3 competition. These thoughts are my own and do not reflect those of any of the other judges.
A very good novella on all accounts. The themes and vibes are perfect, and I'm utterly enthralled by the idea of the Venomborn. I read this novella knowing it might have ties to one of the author's novels, though I'm not sure if this novella is a prequel or a side story. There are hints all around to more in the world, but it works well here. It's a taste, a little tease, of more available if you want some, while also standing well on its own. And as a teaser, it sunk its claws into me effortlessly. I absolutely want to read the Venomborn novels now, to learn more about these people who take on the abilities of monsters. Moreover, I want to know more about the women who turn their babies into Venomborn. It's the sort of dark fantasy content I live to consume. Give me all the horrors and brutalities of a medieval fantasy world, give me the heroes and the hunters, the monsters and the mysteries. This novella is pure medieval fantasy goodness and I'd easily recommend it to any fantasy fanatic, especially if they have a preference for the darker, grittier, war-focused stories.
Overall, the writing is competent and full of emotion. Sometimes it can be a bit cheesy about honor and heroes, but honestly, I like a little bit of cheese now and then. I'm not going to criticize it for wearing its heart on its sleeve.
I am knocking it a point because there were times the dialogue felt… off. I understand it's hard to write children characters. As an author, I've struggled with it myself. Heroes of Ferth is told mostly from the perspective of a 12 year old girl and there were times I felt her dialogue was either too young or too old… or that the way other people spoke to her wasn't right for the scene.