I did not finish even the third chapter but considering other five star reviews, I felt the need to star it myself and explain.
I was hopeful. The blurb was cute but didn't explain much. I didn't pay much attention to the title but the way it's phrased fits perfectly to the way this book is written.
The three stars I gave are in fact generous because I didn't finish reading, therefore cannot rate the whole book. But I bet if I forced myself to finish, I'd lower the rating.
There was so much chatter. Reading those two and a half chapters felt like listening to a hundred people talking at once. If I was telepathic and could read thoughts of those around me, this book was me standing in a crowd. I couldn't focus for a second because there was so much being spoken by the characters. Dialogue on top of dialogue, people who mean nothing to the story chiming in and nearly zero descriptions. What I read were conversations between people with a few sentences here and there about what one saw or thought. The inner thinking or characters, the world building, the written descriptions of actions and whatnot were majorly lacking. For example, Kingston calls a woman - it's said he picks a number from his cell phone and dials, then it's "spoken', words exchanged by the two people and suddenly the author (from the hero's first POV) describes what the woman is doing.
[[ I scroll through my contacts and press dial once I get to her name. It rings five times before she answers.
"Why, hello there. Is this the handsome Kingston Chase calling me?" she says in her Eastern European accent.
"Hey, darling, how are you?"
"I'm very good. I'm quite surprised to hear from you."
"Why is that?"
"It's been a while," she says.
"I wasn't sure if you were in New York or not. I know your career's been blowing up."
She pushes her shoulders back and tilts her head higher. It’s clear she’s happy at the compliment. She waves her well manicured fingers in the air, flashing a large diamond ring and tosses back her hair. "Well, that's true. ]]
There was nothing that said it was a call on camera, especially since he just finished a different phone convo when the same didn't happen, the caller was only heard and not seen. So confusing and though the reader can realize things on their own, the author should not have forgotten to simply write "...she answers and her face appears on my phone screen." Or something alike. I was not in the mood to forgive this small mistake.
Besides all that, the MCs behavior felt juvenile, I almost expected one to pull the other's ponytail or push them in a playground.
I will not be giving this book a second chance.