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A Bossy Millionaire’s Obsession: A BBW Love Story
Can you outgrow love? Does love have regrets?
Xavier Mohammad has built an empire for himself. Having everything a man could ever hope for except the one thing his money can’t buy. A loyal woman to share his life with. The more he builds the more he realizes how lonely it is at the top. From the day he meets Jewels, Xavier is willing to risk it all to capture the heart of the woman he deems every man's dream. The only problem is she belongs to another.
In support of a successful career and a loving relationship with her fiancé August, the plus-sized beauty Jewels Carrington's world is turned upside down when she encounters Xavier Mohammed. Drawn to Xavier's charismatic presence and undeniable attraction, Jewels finds herself torn between her loyalty to August and the intense connection and attraction she feels with Xavier.
As desires ignite, Jewels becomes entangled in a dangerous game of love, power, and deceit. With each decision she makes, the stakes become higher and the consequences more dire. Will Jewels be able to navigate this treacherous journey without losing everything she holds dear including her self-respect?
Xavier Mohammad has built an empire for himself. Having everything a man could ever hope for except the one thing his money can’t buy. A loyal woman to share his life with. The more he builds the more he realizes how lonely it is at the top. From the day he meets Jewels, Xavier is willing to risk it all to capture the heart of the woman he deems every man's dream. The only problem is she belongs to another.
In support of a successful career and a loving relationship with her fiancé August, the plus-sized beauty Jewels Carrington's world is turned upside down when she encounters Xavier Mohammed. Drawn to Xavier's charismatic presence and undeniable attraction, Jewels finds herself torn between her loyalty to August and the intense connection and attraction she feels with Xavier.
As desires ignite, Jewels becomes entangled in a dangerous game of love, power, and deceit. With each decision she makes, the stakes become higher and the consequences more dire. Will Jewels be able to navigate this treacherous journey without losing everything she holds dear including her self-respect?
254 pages, Kindle Edition
Published September 6, 2024
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January 6, 2025
2.5 ⭐️
This book had good bones, but the execution just wasn’t there all the way! The MMC was not very likable, & some parts of the story just didn’t make sense.
This book had good bones, but the execution just wasn’t there all the way! The MMC was not very likable, & some parts of the story just didn’t make sense.
August 24, 2025
This book hooked me right away. The plot was engaging, the romance was steamy, and I couldn’t put it down—the first 85% had me flying through the pages. I especially loved seeing BBW representation in the genre, which is something we need more of in romance.
That said, the ending felt rushed and jarring. Without giving too much away, we jump from a high-stakes moment to a major life change in just a few pages, which left me wishing for more buildup. (Spoiler: kidnapped to engaged is a big leap!)
The biggest drawback was the editing. Grammar issues, inconsistent point of view (switching from first to third person in the same scene), and even inconsistent spelling of the heroine’s name (“Jewels” vs. “Jewel”) pulled me out of the story. A couple more rounds of editing would have taken this from good to truly great.
Overall, A Bossy Millionaire’s Obsession is an addictive romance with strong characters and representation that matters. It just needed cleaner execution to match the strength of the story itself.
That said, the ending felt rushed and jarring. Without giving too much away, we jump from a high-stakes moment to a major life change in just a few pages, which left me wishing for more buildup. (Spoiler: kidnapped to engaged is a big leap!)
The biggest drawback was the editing. Grammar issues, inconsistent point of view (switching from first to third person in the same scene), and even inconsistent spelling of the heroine’s name (“Jewels” vs. “Jewel”) pulled me out of the story. A couple more rounds of editing would have taken this from good to truly great.
Overall, A Bossy Millionaire’s Obsession is an addictive romance with strong characters and representation that matters. It just needed cleaner execution to match the strength of the story itself.
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September 12, 2024
All over the place
There were so many errors and typos. The story did not flow at all and was so confusing to follow. One second a character is having a convo with one person and then the next second they’re by themselves with no transition or anything. Also I would say only 25 percent of the book includes the main characters actually interacting. This was awful.
There were so many errors and typos. The story did not flow at all and was so confusing to follow. One second a character is having a convo with one person and then the next second they’re by themselves with no transition or anything. Also I would say only 25 percent of the book includes the main characters actually interacting. This was awful.
October 15, 2024
Just Beautiful
I love this book and I can relate with to the moral of the story.
Don't ever sale yourself short, your needs and wants are important.
Never let anyone steal your shine.
Plus, thank you for the steamy parts🤤
I love this book and I can relate with to the moral of the story.
Don't ever sale yourself short, your needs and wants are important.
Never let anyone steal your shine.
Plus, thank you for the steamy parts🤤
September 9, 2024
Great Book
This was agreat Book from beginning to end. Love will have you during some strange things. The best ending
This was agreat Book from beginning to end. Love will have you during some strange things. The best ending
September 29, 2024
This book had me in my feelings, August pissed me off do bad
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