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Rise of the Arcane Aristocrat #1
Rift Magus Reborn
This is book one of the Rift Magus Reborn series. You can find book two
I was the Rift Magus—master of space and time, protector of worlds. For decades, I defended my realm with unmatched power. But when an unspeakable creature threatened everything I held dear, I was forced to create a rift to nowhere—a trap designed to seal it away for all time.
It worked, but the creature was not without power itself. It warped my magic, twisting the rift I made to take me back home, and I woke instead in the frail body of a young noble, Lucian Alastair Eldraine. Beaten, ransomed, and on the brink of death, Lucian's spark was barely a flicker, his power nothing to speak of.
But I am not Lucian. I am the Rift Magus, and though my strength is diminished, my knowledge remains. Now, I must rebuild my power from the ground up, reclaim the magic that was lost, and rise once more before the darkness that haunts me finds its way into this world.
I’ve reached the pinnacle of power once before.
I can do it again.
I was the Rift Magus—master of space and time, protector of worlds. For decades, I defended my realm with unmatched power. But when an unspeakable creature threatened everything I held dear, I was forced to create a rift to nowhere—a trap designed to seal it away for all time.
It worked, but the creature was not without power itself. It warped my magic, twisting the rift I made to take me back home, and I woke instead in the frail body of a young noble, Lucian Alastair Eldraine. Beaten, ransomed, and on the brink of death, Lucian's spark was barely a flicker, his power nothing to speak of.
But I am not Lucian. I am the Rift Magus, and though my strength is diminished, my knowledge remains. Now, I must rebuild my power from the ground up, reclaim the magic that was lost, and rise once more before the darkness that haunts me finds its way into this world.
I’ve reached the pinnacle of power once before.
I can do it again.
334 pages, Kindle Edition
First published September 10, 2024
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December 19, 2024
Mediocre at best
I do my best to leave positive reviews, as I know it creates an impact for any future readers. Despite my best efforts, I cannot leave a positive review for this book.
This book suffers from a multitude of problems, whether it be the insufferable main character, the idea that nobles deserve respect due to the “blood in their veins”, or the fact that everyone in this book, besides the main character, is as interesting as a wet paper bag. I thought the concept was interesting, but it did not capitalize on it. I would recommend avoiding this book at all costs.
I do my best to leave positive reviews, as I know it creates an impact for any future readers. Despite my best efforts, I cannot leave a positive review for this book.
This book suffers from a multitude of problems, whether it be the insufferable main character, the idea that nobles deserve respect due to the “blood in their veins”, or the fact that everyone in this book, besides the main character, is as interesting as a wet paper bag. I thought the concept was interesting, but it did not capitalize on it. I would recommend avoiding this book at all costs.
November 3, 2024
4 When Escalating To Violence I Preferred Certainties Instead Stars
Rift Magus Reborn is the first book in the Rise of the Arcane Aristocrat series by Sam Winton.
I am honestly surprised how much I enjoyed this book. It seems none of my usual tastes towards reading have been even remotely satisfying. This is the first book in a long time that I don't regret reading.
Mostly, I enjoyed the cadence of the authors writing. I can not think of another way to describe it. The way in which the words on the page flowed together so steadily was most satisfying. Not having to continue trying to overcome this obstacle allowed me to truly delve into the plot.
I can not help but be drawn to stories of similar premises. An experienced and formidable person of power wakes from the end of their life, natural or no, to find themselves suddenly possessing the body of a young, unfortunate, and recently departed person to later set out to raise their status to that of their previous life. It almost reeks of second chance, and I can devour such topics of fiction with ease.
In our MC's case, the uncommon Gift of rift magics is fascinating. It speaks of almost teleportation style abilities, with vastly more applications. The few that have been employed in this series thus far have been mind opening and fascinating.
I am somewhat disappointed with how little time has transpired before the end of this first book. That paired with the underwhelming amount of forward momentum in our protagonists' improvement and understanding of this new world is the main cause for the reduced rating. Which, however, does leave me excited to discover what this unique individual is capable of and where his ventures will lead in the continuation of this series.
Rift Magus Reborn is the first book in the Rise of the Arcane Aristocrat series by Sam Winton.
I am honestly surprised how much I enjoyed this book. It seems none of my usual tastes towards reading have been even remotely satisfying. This is the first book in a long time that I don't regret reading.
Mostly, I enjoyed the cadence of the authors writing. I can not think of another way to describe it. The way in which the words on the page flowed together so steadily was most satisfying. Not having to continue trying to overcome this obstacle allowed me to truly delve into the plot.
I can not help but be drawn to stories of similar premises. An experienced and formidable person of power wakes from the end of their life, natural or no, to find themselves suddenly possessing the body of a young, unfortunate, and recently departed person to later set out to raise their status to that of their previous life. It almost reeks of second chance, and I can devour such topics of fiction with ease.
In our MC's case, the uncommon Gift of rift magics is fascinating. It speaks of almost teleportation style abilities, with vastly more applications. The few that have been employed in this series thus far have been mind opening and fascinating.
I am somewhat disappointed with how little time has transpired before the end of this first book. That paired with the underwhelming amount of forward momentum in our protagonists' improvement and understanding of this new world is the main cause for the reduced rating. Which, however, does leave me excited to discover what this unique individual is capable of and where his ventures will lead in the continuation of this series.
September 24, 2024
Not bad just not for me
I liked how it started, but quickly got tired of being told how powerful his old body was and how great he was. While not necessarily a "bad" person, he became a very arrogant noble which made it hard to relate or like the MC. I struggle to like people (MCs) who feel entitled to respect or deference based on just luck of birth.
I liked how it started, but quickly got tired of being told how powerful his old body was and how great he was. While not necessarily a "bad" person, he became a very arrogant noble which made it hard to relate or like the MC. I struggle to like people (MCs) who feel entitled to respect or deference based on just luck of birth.
August 1, 2025
Book one
Ever notice how none of the characters that wake up in someone else's body never seem bothered by it and just roll with it? Well here is another one of those stories.
I gave it three stars for two main reasons and one minor reason that you have already read.
Main reason number one: He threw his sword in a life or death fight.
Main reason number two: I was expecting rifts to other worlds for monster hunting and loot.
Instead I got wormholes used for sword fighting.
Not what I wanted or expected.
5/10 if you like it it is being written over on Royalroad.
Ever notice how none of the characters that wake up in someone else's body never seem bothered by it and just roll with it? Well here is another one of those stories.
I gave it three stars for two main reasons and one minor reason that you have already read.
Main reason number one: He threw his sword in a life or death fight.
Main reason number two: I was expecting rifts to other worlds for monster hunting and loot.
Instead I got wormholes used for sword fighting.
Not what I wanted or expected.
5/10 if you like it it is being written over on Royalroad.
April 5, 2025
"Rift Magus Reborn: Rise of the Arcane Aristocrat," written by Sam Winton and brought to life in its 2025 audiobook form by narrators Christian J. Gilliland and (very little by) Amber Hartt, is a captivating plunge into the world of progression fantasy. This 1st installment of the series introduces us to a protagonist with a storied past and a fragile present, weaving a tale that’s as much about self-reclamation as it is about magical prowess. The audiobook, published by Royal Guard Publishing LLC, stands out for its imaginative premise.
The story centers on the Rift Magus, a once-peerless master of space and time who safeguarded his realm for decades. When an unspeakable creature threatens all he holds dear, he crafts a rift to banish it - a desperate act that goes awry, hurling him into the body of Lucian Alastair Eldraine, a beaten and powerless young noble teetering on death’s edge. What follows is a journey of rebirth, as the Rift Magus, armed with his vast knowledge but stripped of his former strength, sets out to rebuild his power in a world unfamiliar yet brimming with potential. Winton excels at blending the high stakes of epic fantasy with the granular satisfaction of a character leveling up from scratch, a hallmark of progression narratives.
One of the audiobook’s key highlights is its magic system, centered on the Rift Magus’s ability to manipulate rifts in space and time. Winton takes this seemingly simple concept and stretches it to its creative limits - portals become weapons, shortcuts, and shields, each use more inventive than the last. This ingenuity keeps the pacing brisk and the stakes palpable, as the protagonist navigates a noble society rife with intrigue and danger. The world-building, while not overwhelmingly detailed, provides a solid backdrop of rival houses and looming threats, hinting at a broader darkness that keeps listeners hooked.
The narration by Christian J. Gilliland and (very little by) Amber Hartt elevates the experience significantly. Gilliland’s deep, resonant tone captures the Rift Magus’s gravitas and determination, lending weight to his internal monologues and past grandeur - he also brings a lighter, more emotive touch to the supporting cast, particularly in scenes of tension or camaraderie, creating a balanced contrast that enriches the storytelling. This ensures that the shift between perspectives - whether the Magus’s calculated resolve or the fleeting voices of those around him - feels seamless and immersive.
However, the audiobook isn’t without flaws. The protagonist’s frequent reminders of his former glory can grate, occasionally stalling the momentum with repetitive introspection. Yet, this is a minor quibble in an otherwise engaging tale. Based on its inventive magic, strong narration, and promising setup, I’ll say it’s a compelling start to a series that fantasy fans, especially those who relish a blend of reincarnation and arcane ambition, will find enjoyable.
The story centers on the Rift Magus, a once-peerless master of space and time who safeguarded his realm for decades. When an unspeakable creature threatens all he holds dear, he crafts a rift to banish it - a desperate act that goes awry, hurling him into the body of Lucian Alastair Eldraine, a beaten and powerless young noble teetering on death’s edge. What follows is a journey of rebirth, as the Rift Magus, armed with his vast knowledge but stripped of his former strength, sets out to rebuild his power in a world unfamiliar yet brimming with potential. Winton excels at blending the high stakes of epic fantasy with the granular satisfaction of a character leveling up from scratch, a hallmark of progression narratives.
One of the audiobook’s key highlights is its magic system, centered on the Rift Magus’s ability to manipulate rifts in space and time. Winton takes this seemingly simple concept and stretches it to its creative limits - portals become weapons, shortcuts, and shields, each use more inventive than the last. This ingenuity keeps the pacing brisk and the stakes palpable, as the protagonist navigates a noble society rife with intrigue and danger. The world-building, while not overwhelmingly detailed, provides a solid backdrop of rival houses and looming threats, hinting at a broader darkness that keeps listeners hooked.
The narration by Christian J. Gilliland and (very little by) Amber Hartt elevates the experience significantly. Gilliland’s deep, resonant tone captures the Rift Magus’s gravitas and determination, lending weight to his internal monologues and past grandeur - he also brings a lighter, more emotive touch to the supporting cast, particularly in scenes of tension or camaraderie, creating a balanced contrast that enriches the storytelling. This ensures that the shift between perspectives - whether the Magus’s calculated resolve or the fleeting voices of those around him - feels seamless and immersive.
However, the audiobook isn’t without flaws. The protagonist’s frequent reminders of his former glory can grate, occasionally stalling the momentum with repetitive introspection. Yet, this is a minor quibble in an otherwise engaging tale. Based on its inventive magic, strong narration, and promising setup, I’ll say it’s a compelling start to a series that fantasy fans, especially those who relish a blend of reincarnation and arcane ambition, will find enjoyable.
November 19, 2024
This was a short but enjoyable read. As other reviews have noted, the call backs to his former power level are a bit annoying and there is always one more way he can use his power despite his absolute lack of any real progress. Annoying, but I very much appreciated that the author doesn't have an ax to grind and or some agenda to hit us over the head with. It did what books are supposed to do, it gave me a few hours in another world.
November 4, 2024
What if you had to take a leap?
A man was in a fight but at the end of his rope, in desperation he did what many wouldn't he took a leap. Now he in another body without his powers. This is the start of his journey to reclaim as much as he can.
A man was in a fight but at the end of his rope, in desperation he did what many wouldn't he took a leap. Now he in another body without his powers. This is the start of his journey to reclaim as much as he can.
September 25, 2024
It’s a fun read as far as fantasy fulfillment goes though certainly nothing deep. If you’ve read the last life series it’s got a similar feel to that albeit with a bit less overarching plot or complexity. I’m hoping for more complex political intrigue, perhaps some situations where the protagonist doesn’t just happen to have the perfect solution at all times so there’s some stakes and a few more side character with depth in the sequel but that remains to be seen. I will also say that while I enjoyed this read for what it was the ending bit was hilariously convenient (really that just shows up at the end huh) and pulled me out of the story a bit souring my overall impression a little. Still I’m a sucker for this type of story which I did enjoy and I’ll likely pick up the sequel. If the description picks your fancy and you don’t mind the protagonist generally being the smartest and most capable in the room then you’ll likely enjoy this.
April 23, 2025
DNF at 61%
Main character has a deeply skewed sense of morality, and it’s not clear the author is aware of it. What pushed me to DNF was the main character torturing an innocent man in one paragraph and a few paragraphs later launching into a monologue on the importance and responsibilities of nobles like Donald to protect those weaker than them. While this was a particularly egregious example, it matches the general tenor of the book, and thus far the author has not shown any evidence that they are aware of the moral inconsistency. That’s a hard pass for me.
Main character has a deeply skewed sense of morality, and it’s not clear the author is aware of it. What pushed me to DNF was the main character torturing an innocent man in one paragraph and a few paragraphs later launching into a monologue on the importance and responsibilities of nobles like Donald to protect those weaker than them. While this was a particularly egregious example, it matches the general tenor of the book, and thus far the author has not shown any evidence that they are aware of the moral inconsistency. That’s a hard pass for me.
October 29, 2024
This is one of those standard Isekai stories with an OP protagonist. It's well written and the MC starts his journey at a particularly low point. Thus it's fun to watch him leverage knowledge for power while beating arrogant bullies at their own game.
Note: I have my doubts that the series can sustain itself once our hero regains his original god-like powers.
Note: I have my doubts that the series can sustain itself once our hero regains his original god-like powers.
May 22, 2025
Brilliantly written, with a unique, very likeable main character🤗
THANK YOU for this gift of an absolutely brilliant, suspended-belief, WTH-just-happened, supremely wicked and unquestionably enthralling adventure! This book was, without a doubt, one of the most fascinating and captivating I've had the pleasure to read to date, particularly in this genre. Around mid-February, I gave in to my longtime curiosity about the increasing number of writers releasing an influx of LITRPG, Progressive Portal/Realm Jumping Fantasy novellas, sagas, graphic novels, and so on, and discovered Michael Anderle, Jonathan Brooks, and James Haddock as well as other fair to pretty talented writers (now adding Sam Winton to my favorites list). My point is, I found I didn't necessarily love everything in this genre; I gravitate toward compelling drama, plot-based stories that combine magic, para- or supernatural elements and characters. I enjoy an author who invests in and.includes lots of historical, environmental or cultural research, thoughtful insights, carefree, ingenious imagination that isn't too depraved, or repulsively disgusting, and humor without forcing it too much.
At any rate, the characters, scenes and world building were thoughtfully and skillfully developed; the added humor, attention to little details, segues, and transitions between dialogue/conversations/internal monologue, plot twists, and other scenes all flowed nicely. I made the mistake of opening this book after I finished Stand In Place (M. Calmes) -- I was hooked after the narrator told me he had landed inside of Lucian, and he wasn't sure if Lucian was still with him. How was I supposed to stop after that? I couldn't put it down, even after noting it was 03:45. . .a couple to three hours later, I finished it, and looked up to daylight. Great book ~ five stars ~ and yes, I highly recommend this book, as well as the series!
THANK YOU for this gift of an absolutely brilliant, suspended-belief, WTH-just-happened, supremely wicked and unquestionably enthralling adventure! This book was, without a doubt, one of the most fascinating and captivating I've had the pleasure to read to date, particularly in this genre. Around mid-February, I gave in to my longtime curiosity about the increasing number of writers releasing an influx of LITRPG, Progressive Portal/Realm Jumping Fantasy novellas, sagas, graphic novels, and so on, and discovered Michael Anderle, Jonathan Brooks, and James Haddock as well as other fair to pretty talented writers (now adding Sam Winton to my favorites list). My point is, I found I didn't necessarily love everything in this genre; I gravitate toward compelling drama, plot-based stories that combine magic, para- or supernatural elements and characters. I enjoy an author who invests in and.includes lots of historical, environmental or cultural research, thoughtful insights, carefree, ingenious imagination that isn't too depraved, or repulsively disgusting, and humor without forcing it too much.
At any rate, the characters, scenes and world building were thoughtfully and skillfully developed; the added humor, attention to little details, segues, and transitions between dialogue/conversations/internal monologue, plot twists, and other scenes all flowed nicely. I made the mistake of opening this book after I finished Stand In Place (M. Calmes) -- I was hooked after the narrator told me he had landed inside of Lucian, and he wasn't sure if Lucian was still with him. How was I supposed to stop after that? I couldn't put it down, even after noting it was 03:45. . .a couple to three hours later, I finished it, and looked up to daylight. Great book ~ five stars ~ and yes, I highly recommend this book, as well as the series!
August 5, 2025
Rating 4.0 stars
This type of story is right in my wheelhouse. I do like it when someone either goes back in time or wakes up in a younger body and now has been super competent at everything. I love the reactions from the surrounding characters freaking out about the MCs new abilities. This one was pretty good, though there were some repetitive things that I that was too much. The MC kept stating he was a grandmaster, a rift magus over and over again. It was narrated in the first person so by the end of the book I didn't need to be reminded about his background. The MC also mentioned pretty much every other paragraph that he was a noble. If I made a drinking game of everytime he mentioned he was a noble or grandmaster I would die of alcohol poisoning. I am being over the top with my review. It wasn't really that bad, it was just something I noticed and then once I did, I couldn't stop. It didn't take away from my enjoyment of the story, just distracted it a little.
The story itself was pretty standard. Older guys wakes up in the body of a younger man. He is weak but has all the knowledge from his previous life and he still has the one unique gift from his previous world. He is still a rift magus, even if his power is pretty weak. He knows how to increase his power and he uses his magic in a unique way. He doesn't have the power to portal himself place to place, which is what I expected. Instead he uses very small rifts so he can do things like move his sword blade a few inches past armer. There were also other interesting way the MC used his power. By far that was the best part of the story. Characters were okay, nothing special.
This type of story is right in my wheelhouse. I do like it when someone either goes back in time or wakes up in a younger body and now has been super competent at everything. I love the reactions from the surrounding characters freaking out about the MCs new abilities. This one was pretty good, though there were some repetitive things that I that was too much. The MC kept stating he was a grandmaster, a rift magus over and over again. It was narrated in the first person so by the end of the book I didn't need to be reminded about his background. The MC also mentioned pretty much every other paragraph that he was a noble. If I made a drinking game of everytime he mentioned he was a noble or grandmaster I would die of alcohol poisoning. I am being over the top with my review. It wasn't really that bad, it was just something I noticed and then once I did, I couldn't stop. It didn't take away from my enjoyment of the story, just distracted it a little.
The story itself was pretty standard. Older guys wakes up in the body of a younger man. He is weak but has all the knowledge from his previous life and he still has the one unique gift from his previous world. He is still a rift magus, even if his power is pretty weak. He knows how to increase his power and he uses his magic in a unique way. He doesn't have the power to portal himself place to place, which is what I expected. Instead he uses very small rifts so he can do things like move his sword blade a few inches past armer. There were also other interesting way the MC used his power. By far that was the best part of the story. Characters were okay, nothing special.
November 10, 2024
I recommend this book
I don't recall ever coming across this author before. I do tend to take it easy on the first book of any series as it has been my experience that the first of a new story can be shaky sometimes even from tried and true authors. I don't feel that I got to do that with this book. Oh don't get me wrong there is one or two sour scenes for lack of a better descriptor. But all in all I think that might be tied more to my personal taste and even then I still enjoy 90% of the book. I definitely do intend to return When the sequel is released. As of the time of this review the release date is set for December 15th. I'm a little saddened that it's not already out and I do find myself getting a little annoyed did I didn't check to make sure the second one was already out before starting the first one. In the grand scheme of things A month's not all that long, but when you're ready to go for book two it might as well be an eternity. With that I'll simply say Well done to everybody who had a hand in bringing the story to us, the Amazon readers.
I don't recall ever coming across this author before. I do tend to take it easy on the first book of any series as it has been my experience that the first of a new story can be shaky sometimes even from tried and true authors. I don't feel that I got to do that with this book. Oh don't get me wrong there is one or two sour scenes for lack of a better descriptor. But all in all I think that might be tied more to my personal taste and even then I still enjoy 90% of the book. I definitely do intend to return When the sequel is released. As of the time of this review the release date is set for December 15th. I'm a little saddened that it's not already out and I do find myself getting a little annoyed did I didn't check to make sure the second one was already out before starting the first one. In the grand scheme of things A month's not all that long, but when you're ready to go for book two it might as well be an eternity. With that I'll simply say Well done to everybody who had a hand in bringing the story to us, the Amazon readers.
January 13, 2025
This book is okayish.
Good:
The writing is solid and the story and worldbuilding is okay.
Bad:
The characters are poorly and lame written imo.
A lot gets repeated: I swear if i have to read one more time "because he used to be a Magus..."
I understand its normal to explain things but please use different wording from time to time.
Once the reader understood how powerful the Character was in his previous life its not necessary to repeat that over and over and over.
My problem with the characters is that I never really felt sympathy to anyone.
The new Lucian can do anything and the whole book is like a walk in the park. This kinda makes sense when you look at his former life but nevertheless it makes the book really boring. If he doesn't has problems with fighting and politics etc. atleast let him struggle with the social life or something. It is just hard to get through this book that way because there are legit zero challenges.
I dont wanna be toxic or negativ. I firmly believe this can help the author to prevent mistakes (atleast imo) in the future.
Good:
The writing is solid and the story and worldbuilding is okay.
Bad:
The characters are poorly and lame written imo.
A lot gets repeated: I swear if i have to read one more time "because he used to be a Magus..."
I understand its normal to explain things but please use different wording from time to time.
Once the reader understood how powerful the Character was in his previous life its not necessary to repeat that over and over and over.
My problem with the characters is that I never really felt sympathy to anyone.
The new Lucian can do anything and the whole book is like a walk in the park. This kinda makes sense when you look at his former life but nevertheless it makes the book really boring. If he doesn't has problems with fighting and politics etc. atleast let him struggle with the social life or something. It is just hard to get through this book that way because there are legit zero challenges.
I dont wanna be toxic or negativ. I firmly believe this can help the author to prevent mistakes (atleast imo) in the future.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
December 23, 2024
liked idea but too many plot holes
I like the idea behind the story since it avoided the zero to hero in a few days approach most MCs in Litrpg’s experience. Unfortunately some of the stuff didn’t make sense like other characters completely accepting the authority of not only a 17 year old but a 17 year old that was a complete loser days before. Going so far as one character who had zero respect for him and abandoned him giving him a task that no sane person would considering the skill set he was known to have up until that point. Combine that with at times illogical drama like a shady money lender that was fleecing them needing help with an orphanage of all things and you get a story that tries to create suspense when it doesn’t make sense. Not a fan of the short length either. Get the feeling there must be review farms out there since this is the second book with a ton of positive reviews that disappointed me.
I like the idea behind the story since it avoided the zero to hero in a few days approach most MCs in Litrpg’s experience. Unfortunately some of the stuff didn’t make sense like other characters completely accepting the authority of not only a 17 year old but a 17 year old that was a complete loser days before. Going so far as one character who had zero respect for him and abandoned him giving him a task that no sane person would considering the skill set he was known to have up until that point. Combine that with at times illogical drama like a shady money lender that was fleecing them needing help with an orphanage of all things and you get a story that tries to create suspense when it doesn’t make sense. Not a fan of the short length either. Get the feeling there must be review farms out there since this is the second book with a ton of positive reviews that disappointed me.
January 5, 2025
We are in a "standard" Isekai/reincarnation story. It reads easily despite the frequent repetitions (I am the Rift Magus... If I had my Rift Magus powers... I am an expert Rift Magus... If I had my Rift Magus powers...).
As he was OP in his previous life, he retains the flaws from that life related to arrogance. And if you've read other comments of mine, this is where the book will lose half of its points, even though I read the first two, which shows that the author didn't emphasize this trait too much in the character's behavior. In the second volume, we will already see him living "unrelated" adventures. I think there's already so much to do, so if he has to start living side adventures by book 2, where are we headed?
Apart from that, it's standard, so a standard rating.
As he was OP in his previous life, he retains the flaws from that life related to arrogance. And if you've read other comments of mine, this is where the book will lose half of its points, even though I read the first two, which shows that the author didn't emphasize this trait too much in the character's behavior. In the second volume, we will already see him living "unrelated" adventures. I think there's already so much to do, so if he has to start living side adventures by book 2, where are we headed?
Apart from that, it's standard, so a standard rating.
January 25, 2025
Written for people with issues. While I tolerated the main-character's genuine "nobles are superior nonsense" because I was hoping it was just an especially unrelatable main-character, the successfully-tortured-out-information scene makes it rather clear this is a book for particularly dumb people with aggressive power fantasies.
Additionally, this fails as a progression fantasy novel because the main-character starts over-powered with essentially no progression. MC is essentially a bully in a world of weaker stupider bullies.
Writing itself is mediocre. I've seen worse, but it's not impressive.
I strongly recommend not supporting this book or author. The target audience shouldn't have their perspectives glorified or fantasies fulfilled. It's kinda insane.
Additionally, this fails as a progression fantasy novel because the main-character starts over-powered with essentially no progression. MC is essentially a bully in a world of weaker stupider bullies.
Writing itself is mediocre. I've seen worse, but it's not impressive.
I strongly recommend not supporting this book or author. The target audience shouldn't have their perspectives glorified or fantasies fulfilled. It's kinda insane.
February 11, 2025
This was a fast read for a book with over 500 pages! I really enjoy the magic system and the plot is actually pretty interesting! The only thing I can pretty much say is that I'm not really emotionally invested on Lucian. Yeah I like him as a character, he's smart and has a good head on his shoulders, but I also don't know anything about him other than him being a Rift Magus in his past life. Maybe we'll dive deeper into the character in the next books and balance it better with the plot and world-building. Oh, almost forgot....this book needs better editing.
P 4/5
E 3/5
A 2/5
C 3/5 (I really like the side characters, actually)
H 2/5 (not super invested, but i can see myself getting there)
14/5 3 stars
P 4/5
E 3/5
A 2/5
C 3/5 (I really like the side characters, actually)
H 2/5 (not super invested, but i can see myself getting there)
14/5 3 stars
March 8, 2025
Overall good, but some annoyances.
Overall it was a decent story, but there were a few things that annoyed me enough that I won't be bothering with the rest of the series.
Most egregious was the constant "in my old life I could move mountains with my rifts, but now moving a pebble will have to suffice" nonsense.
I can't think of a single instance where he wanted to do something new with his rifts that he didn't preface with that kind of statement. Doing that every once in a while is fine to establish the premise of the story, but I read the story to see what the character can do, not what he could have done had the story actually been a different story.
It really got on my nerves by the end.
Overall it was a decent story, but there were a few things that annoyed me enough that I won't be bothering with the rest of the series.
Most egregious was the constant "in my old life I could move mountains with my rifts, but now moving a pebble will have to suffice" nonsense.
I can't think of a single instance where he wanted to do something new with his rifts that he didn't preface with that kind of statement. Doing that every once in a while is fine to establish the premise of the story, but I read the story to see what the character can do, not what he could have done had the story actually been a different story.
It really got on my nerves by the end.
June 13, 2025
This was a fun read with engaging characters. Lucian was fun to follow and had great characterization. The only thing that got a bit tiresome was the constant reminder of "I was once a great Rift Magus" in all its forms. After the first couple of chapters, I was already firmly aware of that particular fact, and having it brought up in each fight sequence or encounter where Lucian used magic sort of made the appeal wear off.
That said, the world building and magic system were great to dig into. All the characters felt believable and unique, even side characters felt as though they were well thought out instead of just being side characters.
Overall, the author did a great job creating a believable world with an engaging story that kept me coming back.
That said, the world building and magic system were great to dig into. All the characters felt believable and unique, even side characters felt as though they were well thought out instead of just being side characters.
Overall, the author did a great job creating a believable world with an engaging story that kept me coming back.
November 2, 2024
Overall 2.5/5 Disappointing.
Main character 2/5 - nothing impressive or interesting. He keeps on talking on how he was so great, how no one would have dared the fight him, how easy it will be for him to return to power. A cop out copy of "cool" OP (but I am not OP yet) MC.
Side characters 2/5 - very mediocre
Plot 2/5 - very cliche and basic
Grammar 4/5 - not perfect, but the few mistakes don't ruin the experience.
Style 1/5 - it takes four seconds to google the synonyms for but. For Godsakes, it is used twice in the summary... The author's choice of using first perspective is interesting, but not used well enough and makes the text more repetitive.
Main character 2/5 - nothing impressive or interesting. He keeps on talking on how he was so great, how no one would have dared the fight him, how easy it will be for him to return to power. A cop out copy of "cool" OP (but I am not OP yet) MC.
Side characters 2/5 - very mediocre
Plot 2/5 - very cliche and basic
Grammar 4/5 - not perfect, but the few mistakes don't ruin the experience.
Style 1/5 - it takes four seconds to google the synonyms for but. For Godsakes, it is used twice in the summary... The author's choice of using first perspective is interesting, but not used well enough and makes the text more repetitive.
December 14, 2024
Really enjoyed the story, it was fun, fast, simple and enjoyable.
Enjoyable read, one of the better books I've read in the genre. The main character is likable, with a good dialogue that's logical and to the point. Sometimes the author repeatedly States the obvious that the character has passed knowledge. This can be overdone at times and it's repetitiveness. The world building was simple and the system of magic being slowly revealed as the character continues through the plot line. Overall the story was well paced with fun characters, that keeps your attention enough to want to read the pages to find out what's going to happen next. I look forward to book two.
Enjoyable read, one of the better books I've read in the genre. The main character is likable, with a good dialogue that's logical and to the point. Sometimes the author repeatedly States the obvious that the character has passed knowledge. This can be overdone at times and it's repetitiveness. The world building was simple and the system of magic being slowly revealed as the character continues through the plot line. Overall the story was well paced with fun characters, that keeps your attention enough to want to read the pages to find out what's going to happen next. I look forward to book two.
August 25, 2025
have at you
Smart guy gets dropped into a new world in the body of a young noble, quickly runs circles around the townsfolk.
Quite the apologia for a feudal system, where nobles are supposed to, in exchange for their privileges, provide a benefit to the common people. Though in a world of body cultivation, seems like anyone can improve themselves enough to take care of basic needs, so they don’t need an administrative class guiding the distribution of wealth (to themselves).
Knowledge of the systems (both magical and political) means an older guy can hop into the body of a dying native of a new world and ride that meatsuit to fame and fortune.
Smart guy gets dropped into a new world in the body of a young noble, quickly runs circles around the townsfolk.
Quite the apologia for a feudal system, where nobles are supposed to, in exchange for their privileges, provide a benefit to the common people. Though in a world of body cultivation, seems like anyone can improve themselves enough to take care of basic needs, so they don’t need an administrative class guiding the distribution of wealth (to themselves).
Knowledge of the systems (both magical and political) means an older guy can hop into the body of a dying native of a new world and ride that meatsuit to fame and fortune.
November 5, 2024
Had to buy the book first
I was all ready to write this review but realized that I was just borrowing the book through Kindle Unlimited, so I slipped over and purchased it so that my review could have “ verified purchase” beside it.
I really enjoyed the story, the way the main character ended up in the New World was unique. The characters were fantastic and the world well explained, and not in a talking head kinds way! Can’t wait for the next book to come out. I’ve already pre-ordered it. Yea!
I was all ready to write this review but realized that I was just borrowing the book through Kindle Unlimited, so I slipped over and purchased it so that my review could have “ verified purchase” beside it.
I really enjoyed the story, the way the main character ended up in the New World was unique. The characters were fantastic and the world well explained, and not in a talking head kinds way! Can’t wait for the next book to come out. I’ve already pre-ordered it. Yea!
November 17, 2024
great start but with some inconsistencies throughout
The story is pretty good, I do enjoy the OP reincarnation trope. However there is some sloppy writing in a few areas regarding grammar and a small segment that went from 1st to 3rd person for seemingly no reason whatsoever.
In addition I do think the story could benefit from a few 1st person perspectives from other characters to expand the story and make it more immersive for the reader.
But overall the story is solid I would recommend giving no it a read; can’t wait for the next one!
The story is pretty good, I do enjoy the OP reincarnation trope. However there is some sloppy writing in a few areas regarding grammar and a small segment that went from 1st to 3rd person for seemingly no reason whatsoever.
In addition I do think the story could benefit from a few 1st person perspectives from other characters to expand the story and make it more immersive for the reader.
But overall the story is solid I would recommend giving no it a read; can’t wait for the next one!
December 21, 2024
An intelligent protagonist
Often, books of this genre either have a morally ambiguous but brilliant protagonist or one with some knowledge, but bumbling about. This story has an intelligent AND originally overpowered MC that, upon incarnation as a weak youth, immediately proceeds with plans to get stronger quickly in a fashion equating to noble actions. While moderately arrogant, he gains respect from those about him via decisive actions and words.
Overall, a good, quick read.
Often, books of this genre either have a morally ambiguous but brilliant protagonist or one with some knowledge, but bumbling about. This story has an intelligent AND originally overpowered MC that, upon incarnation as a weak youth, immediately proceeds with plans to get stronger quickly in a fashion equating to noble actions. While moderately arrogant, he gains respect from those about him via decisive actions and words.
Overall, a good, quick read.
February 6, 2025
This looks like a Legend of the Arch Magus Knockoff, I mean inspired book.
I hope it is well written.
Hmm. I'm getting some vibes that this also "borrowed" from Russian progression books, that also borrowed from Legend of the Arch Magus. Books like The Order of Architects and Bastard.
This was enjoyable, and I don't mind reading a sequel.
3/5 Stars
I hope it is well written.
Hmm. I'm getting some vibes that this also "borrowed" from Russian progression books, that also borrowed from Legend of the Arch Magus. Books like The Order of Architects and Bastard.
This was enjoyable, and I don't mind reading a sequel.
3/5 Stars
March 1, 2025
2,5 stars
The protagonist is a gary stu who consistently rambles how great and mighty he used to be. It doesn't help that he grows his power ridiculously fast and easily wins all fights. As a character he is rather uninteresting and his fights despict beta male power phantasies.
World building, plot and side characters are all rather rudimentary and the story is overly linear. The protagonist gets major boons from every fight and ends overpowered very soon.
I was no fan of the first person perspective.
The protagonist is a gary stu who consistently rambles how great and mighty he used to be. It doesn't help that he grows his power ridiculously fast and easily wins all fights. As a character he is rather uninteresting and his fights despict beta male power phantasies.
World building, plot and side characters are all rather rudimentary and the story is overly linear. The protagonist gets major boons from every fight and ends overpowered very soon.
I was no fan of the first person perspective.
December 23, 2025
Stuff happens. It doesn't grip you. You've read this story three times before.
It's following powerfantasy-101 without deviating. I usually like it, but this time it wasn't imaginative enough for more than background noise or something to fall asleep to.
The world is uninteresting. The MC is uninteresting. The magic in uninteresting...
As always in the litRPG genre, the amount of stars has no meaning over the book itself. There must be a big group of people who mindlessly choose 5 stars when reviewing any litRPG book. Other genres have better readers. :P xD
It's following powerfantasy-101 without deviating. I usually like it, but this time it wasn't imaginative enough for more than background noise or something to fall asleep to.
The world is uninteresting. The MC is uninteresting. The magic in uninteresting...
As always in the litRPG genre, the amount of stars has no meaning over the book itself. There must be a big group of people who mindlessly choose 5 stars when reviewing any litRPG book. Other genres have better readers. :P xD
November 27, 2024
It's readable If not great
Have you ever wanted to be reminded every other page about how powerful someone used to be but currently isn't? And this is definitely your book because the author goes over that information every other page! Besides that it's pretty typical super overpowered protagonist slightly weakened by reincarnation but it's pretty much the exact same story that's been done over and over everywhere. No particularly interesting twist for this one.
Have you ever wanted to be reminded every other page about how powerful someone used to be but currently isn't? And this is definitely your book because the author goes over that information every other page! Besides that it's pretty typical super overpowered protagonist slightly weakened by reincarnation but it's pretty much the exact same story that's been done over and over everywhere. No particularly interesting twist for this one.
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