6th from burke for me...2002...white doves at morning, a hardcover version...he thanks a pamela arceneaux and a c.j. labauve for their help w/historical detail...
a dedication: for dracos and carrie burke
story begins:
1837
the black woman's name was sarie, and when she crashed out the door of the cabin at the end of the slave quarters into the fading winter light, her lower belly bursting with the child that had already broken her water, the aftermath of the ice storm and the sheer desolate sweep of leaf-bare timber and frozen cottage acreage and frost-limned cane stalks seemed to combine and strike her face like a braided whip.
sarie begat flower, not the man-child she hoped for...
anyway, i'm like 42-pages in at this point...beginning of chapter five...and interesting is the use of adjectives...black...negro...white...white trash...nigger...& a bit later (p96) darkies. "black" and "negro" are used interchangeably...and "nigger" is used only in dialogue by characters that willie burke calls "white trash".
"white trash" is also used in the narrative to describe, and that betrays something on the part of burke, i believe, what with this omniscient multiple-character p.o.v. "nigger" as yet is not used save in dialogue. man of color is also used.
since white trash, cracker, redneck, trailer trash...since those seem to be some of the few pejoratives still in vogue...(i've yet to see anyone get called on them...)...and...you will recall the somewhat recent use of the pejorative third world nation/country...that has fallen silently out of favor for the more flavor-able developing nation...ummm, i visited the dictionary to what see
my o.e.d., a version i acquired some twenty years ago, has no variation of "white trash"...not in the supplement that was part of the whole, nor in a supplement that i acquired after the initial purchase.
so...i wiki it...and t'would appear that "white trash" has been around at least as long back as this story begins...was in full use by the time of the civil war...but by slaves for poor whites...and then some.
i don't think that "black" came into vogue until...ummm, perhaps the 50s, more so the 60s...meh...could be wrong, but more often than not, "negro"...or perhaps "colored" is used, more so...fiction etc prior to the 50-60s...or did faulkner use "black"...ellison? wright?
anyway, i thought what we have here is another apologist for the white presence in the world...which i always want to tell them to kiss my ass, as my time in this country...roots i'm talking here...didn't happen until the turn of the last century...so don't throw your guilt trip on me....jackass. men have been beat the world over and it is not an american invention.
but even w/the war on christianity...and, yes, there IS a war on christianity, we have not lost our judeo-christian roots and retribution will be visited upon man...white man we're talking here...verily, to the 7th generation. hallelujah. amen. that shithead in the white house can publicly degrade a people, clinging to their guns and religion, and get elected, verily, to the 8th and 9th generation. that previous shithead gets caught w/his pecker in the mouth of an intern and what does the media do? make light of big hair and trailer trash, verily, to the 10th and 11th generation.
oh! but lo! we are diverse and ever-loving!
it is interesting that "white trash" came into usage around the time of the the years prior to the civil war...and that it is the one pejorative still in use. may it do ya fine. it is not included on any list of "hate crimes" and that speaks volumes. 'nother words, kiss my ass, jack. i mean, look at the description, the free use of white trash therein...and we congratulate ourselves on our diversity, how noble in deed...all the while afixin' labels to those we deem less deserving than ourselves...and the hoot is that so many are blind to this...taxed-enough-already?
the title of the piece
comes from a song that is included herein, 4-lines from same...
white doves come at morning/ where my soldier sleeps in the ground./
i placed my ring in his coffin,/ the trees o'er his grave have all turned brown.
time place scene settings
*1837, the time of flower's birth, chapter one
*1861, chapter two begins
*april 12, 1861...fort sumter, begins
*august, 1861
*april 5-6, 1862, shiloh
*winter, 1862 and the following spring
*1864-1865...april, 1865
*the summer days of 1865
*carrie's past, 1845, paris
*august, 1865...
*five years after that...for willie
*then, the epilogue, w/dates as late as 1900 give or take...though the initial date in the epilogue is 1868
*louisiana
*cabin at the end of the slave quarters
*a lean-to where sarie finds shelter
*bayou teche, from an atakapa indian word that meant snake
*the shadows, a plantation home
*new iberia...
*only bordello, owner carrie larose
*a brick saloon
*laundry where flower works
*a flat boat w/blacks & whites
*court, a water-stained loft above the saloon
*camp moore
*johnson island, ohio, a p.o.w. camp, mentioned, not visited
*shanendoah virginia, mentioned, not visited
the cast in order of appearance
*sarie, black woman, pregnant
*marse ira jamison (and by appearance, it could be by name only), angola plantation original farm, he is a widower by 1861
*man in a stovepipe hat, rufus atkins
*two other mounted men, clay hatcher & jackson
*drunkards and white trash
*negroes
*sarie's mother & a wet nurse
*a girl baby, spring...no, flower...flower jamison
*william "willie" burke
*his mother...'s boardinghouse, her name, ellen lee
*his father's survival at the goliad massacre during the texas revolution 1836
*a dozen negro men, wage slaves
*a constable
*a dozen soldiers from camp pratt out by spanish lake
*nathan bedford forest, memphis slave market...also seen at the battle of shiloh...although a wiki look-see has bare mention of him.
*carrie larose, new iberia's only bordello owner
*may, a dark-haired chub of a girl, whore
*jim stubbefield, willie's friend/acquaintance, killed at shiloh
*flower...grown now in 19861, flower jamison, works the laundry
*a free man of color w/slaves
*a man in a silk hat
*a white woman on main
*some other girls are ironing (black) but understood
*angel of goliad...past
*ladies who lived in the most elegant plantation homes
*acadian boys who spoke no english
*robert perry...father owns over 100 niggers...protects willie burke, who is head-strong & such...later, to the 8th lou'sana vols, camp moore...starts out a private...later he is a sergeant...still later he is a lieutenant
*captain rufus atkins...here in 1861...earlier too
*clay hatcher, corporal, here in 1861...earlier, too...and later on, he is a sergeant
*abigail dowling, a nurse from massachusetts, came south as nurse, is an abolitionist...she was also a deacon of a quaker church/she resigns by letter in the telling
*john brown...just a name, at present...qqc to do w/abolition it is understood, not explained, as yet
*a neighbor was boiling crabs
*jean-jacques larose, carrie's brother, also called "scavenger jack" and t'would appear he is a kind of pirate, him (the clock, she is wrong, her)
*secessionists...copperheads (perhaps some form of tea partiers? wingers? some name as all names have been, are, will be used)
*a member of town council, part owner of the bank
*a lady in st martinville & her cook
*the negro male population
*our women
*the men at the billiard table
*the piano player
*two naked people (doing it)
*a horseman...the paddy rollers...6 riders...a 7th man
*two negroes sat on the dirt floor
*five black people...two white boatmen (quakers)...a white woman
*judge
*a white woman driving hogs
*a child kicking a stuffed football
*a card sharp
*a drowned nigger (female) aunt of flower
*the black driver
*a black man emerging from a barn
*a black woman in a gray dress...ruby...one of marse ira jamison's servants/slaves...house servant
*a white baptist minister
*jubal labiche, a free man of color (w/slaves)
*the widow who ran the laundry for ira jamison
*abigail dowling's father, who was a physician & a quaker
*mr leblanc...and t'would appear he is robert perry's father?...that seems to be the grist of it...also the postmaster
*a black deliveryman
*two white men
*bounty hunters
*a runaway slave woman & her 2 small children
*other soldiers
*barefooted negro children
*mounted zouaves...?
*women threw flowers
*prostitutes from congo square
*five men & a drummer boy from the 6th mississippi/shiloh
*3 soldiers w/a banjo, fiddle & jew's harp
*tige mcguffy, the 11-yr-old drummer boy
*tennesseee infantry
*a redheaded, barrel-chested sergeant
*a confederate colonel
*colonel alfred mouton
*a dead man...another
*a union officer
*the standard bearer
*two blue clad pickets
*a huge black bearded union private
*a whiskered signal corpsman
*a white clad nun
*union sentry...confederate prisoners
*general butler..."spoons butler"
*a disheveled & terrified white man
*a creole woman
*an angola plantation overseer
*mr guilbeau, governor's assistant
AND I'M GOING TO STOP LISTING ALL OF THEM AT THIS POINT...'BOUT PAGE 100 OR SO...BUT YOU GET THE FLAVOR
*pinky strunk...tiny yellow teeth
*todd mccain, owner of the hardware store
*jarrette....rode w/quantrill & bloody will anderson
*jawhawkers & guerrillas
*uncle royal...ija jamison's father's house servant
*general nathaniel banks
*sgt. quintinius earp
*sheriff hipolyte gautreau
*elias rachet...returns to shiloh w/willie to retrieve the remains of jim
*isaac, boy student of flower...throws rocks at a squirrel
a quote: god fashions the pranksters to keep the rest of us honest...
update, at page-115, 6 feb 13, wednesday afternoon
yeah, and so the story--i'm not going to call it a "historical novel" as yes, the story has a historical context--but it is a story...nothing more, nothing less...
...and the story is focused through the eyes of a half-dozen characters at this point--willie burke, flower jamison, abigail dowling, rober perry...the civil war has been happening...new orleans is occupied by union troops
an idea
"mind-forged manacles"...attributed to an english poet in the story, although...only william blake, a book or his poetry, has been included in the story, as yet...hundred pages from the end.
another quote
"sometimes we're all tempted to think of our own race as being superior to others...then we meet someone such as yourself and immediately we're beset with the terrible knowledge that there's something truly cretinous at work in the caucasian gene pool."
--abigail to atkins
--and it does play well in the apologist's theory that retribution shall be visited, verily, to the 12th of never...and that's a long long time.
update, finished, 7 feb 13, thursday morning, 10:05 a.m. e.s.t.
good read...a gripping tale...argh! the epilogue, after the story, seems...i dunno...quaint...the various characters getting their due, or not, years later...the sense that the story could have followed them to that point...decades later in some instance. dunno how to take epilogues like that, conclusions. why not simply end it before that? seems cheap somehow, after the telling.
in the end...and this is unlikely unfair, but so be it...but, in the end, i imagine burke's politics are like stephen king's politics, who recently degraded honest gun owners in his essay...and got a free pass for it...was applauded by the people too blind to see that once you rub a proud peoples' nose in the shit you fling in their face, once that is done...just as abigail's murder of ira jamison in this piece is minimized and dismissed...bad things happen. i've seen the same thing here at goodreads, a book that is not worthy of the mention...had this shithead written about anyone other than "whites" he deemed lowly, it would be classified as a hate-crime.
...look at what happened to the serbs...world war one began because a hoity-toity ruler rubbed their noses in something...why? why because they can get away with it...although we know the outcome.
ira's end here...bringing us back to what set me off to begin, his thoughts on those he saw as "white trash"...there's something at work here...some kind of...what? dismissal of the rich's transgressions in the manner in which ira is played? can't quite articulate it at the moment...but i think it is seen in the patronizing, condescending attitude of the rich, a-la stephen king, calling gun owners yeehaws....seen in the minimizing of that shithead in the white house, seen in his degrading of a people w/his remarks that were minimized...marginalizing a people...as if that will set things right...
all i can say is that there's more than a few that believe we are in the early stages of civil war two. dismiss others are your peril.
an addendum thingie
...twice, burke provides some "past" for a character, twice, once for ira jamison and another time for connie larose. i dunno if it works or not, for ira i mean, him witnessing the old man nailing one of the slave girls once upon a time...this provided, i guess, as possible probably motive reason for the way he is now...the whole as the twig is bent so shall it grow thingie...does it work?
i dunno...from my time in the south, the mighty south...i'd say it could have been left out, or provided, either way, as all my experience has shown that...as the twig is bent, so shall it grow. as in...if the old man (and the mother, too) exhibits whatever traits to the child, the child is likely to take those traits on. verily
and the other, about carrie...that is a bit more...something...acceptable, her baiting her jailer in paris w/sex so that he takes another in her stead to the sharp female...off w/her head...and she has carried a certain amount of guilt w/her since then...so yeah...okay.
but why only those two? there's willie...abigail...well, there's flower, and once she learns more about her "past" she wants too...and that brings me to the gun...flower had it...somehow abigail got it toward the end, although she did buy it for flower, who wanted to put the hurt on the bad men...abigail the one pulling the trigger. i dunno. still...all in all, a good read. smoke em if you got em.