Well. This is the longest review I’ve ever written for a book.
I feel I’m in the minority here regarding this book and that’s fine.
I really enjoyed parts of this novel. It was a fun read, and a major plus I have to give the author was the historical accuracy.
That being said, convenient plot explanations in the last 15 pages to explain big plot threads set up through the ENTIRE STORY, the kidnapped part of the book (the opening scene and entire premise!) being like 30-40 pages, uhhh. We needed an extra 100 or so pages of development. What happened to Owen? Last we saw he was bleeding out on a table? Okay? Like whatever? No significant backstory for Marie who ended up being a key player, I didn’t even know who the guy that died at the end was because he’s apparently the big bad but so irrelevant to the character’s struggles that I forgot he existed.
Why was Stephen so okay with Georgia’s excuse in her letters? Why was Georgia partially redeemed in 3 sentences when she’s an evil, evil, EVIL lady? Why did Stephen get 10-15 pages of spotlight at the end when 3/5ths of the entire book has been Celia curled up in a ball crying about him? Why did Celia not try to move on? (Except she apparently had THOUGHTS about it, as we find out in, you guessed it, the last 10-15 pages pre-epilogue!) And I get that sure, it’s more historically accurate, but why did we have a white man save Celia from all her troubles at the very end? Felt like this sent the wrong message and was NEVER addressed negatively or critically in the epilogue, only with praise for Stephen (which, by the way, the epilogue is WAYYY too short). Why was your protagonist so rash and thoughtless for a majority of the book?
This is one of those books that has good bones but ends up just being the protagonist suffering for hundreds of pages. Just misery and agony, awful things happening. I mean, a BROTHEL? Raising a child while hearing people getting railed a room away??? This is just tough, and while I understand it’s accurate and I do like books that have challenging moments, we HAVE to counteract misery with some light scenes (not even necessarily hopeful!) that can flesh out our protagonist rather than making them suffer. Even the one moment I thought would be fun, Celia going window shopping with Lettie turned into agonizing sadness after 2 pages of fun. At some point your need to depict every possible societal issue a person could face in the 1800’s within the span of only 360 pages stunts your character’s development.
(Side note - one thing that fried me was that the author changed around dates of actual historical events that were previously covered up for hundreds of years. CHANGE YOUR STORY, NOT HISTORY. Let’s not alter real historical massacre trials and only state the changes in the author’s note!)
I also thought the author’s depiction of other societal issues besides anti-Chinese sentiments (LGBTQ+ issues, women’s rights, court manipulation, etc.) could’ve been handled with more time and care. These issues are all given maybe one page of discussion and nothing more, because it does not directly affect Celia - which is fine, but these felt like they served as pity points to paint Celia as a compassionate person, rather than heartfelt discussion.
Not even going into it because this review has been a character and general plot critique but the entire swashbuckling adventure the second half has is completely and utterly unbelievable and is as convincing as a Mission Impossible film lmao.
Why was my understanding of the theme and POINT of the story dependent on the author’s note and reader’s guide questions?
If I could give this book like a 2.2-2.3 I would. I won’t give it less because this book does do a great job of honoring heritage and exploring the time period through the lens of a mixed-race woman; there was care here, and the idea and it’s initial explorations are good.
I just truly believe that this book needed a lot more development and maybe an extra year in the oven. That being said, I would recommend, if not just for the learning you can gather from this book.