Ehh, I mean, it just wasn’t amazing compared to what has been published since then. From what I understand, Feist is, or perhaps was quite big in fantasy with his Riftwar and Serpantwar Sagas as since this is more traditional fantasy and for several decades ago, I’m certain that this would have been spectacular. I personally loved the Serpantwar Saga when I first read it as apart from Lord of the Rings and Earthsea, it was one of my first entries into adult epic fantasy. The problem is that I feel like compared with modern fantasy, this series so far is starting to feel like it is not up to standard. Now we have authors with beautiful prose like Rothfuss so the most awesome magic systems from Sanderson and the grittiest of stories like Martin’s Song of Ice and Fire.
This book, was not really any of those three, and before anyone yells at me saying that fantasy is not just those things, I know, hang on a moment. The point I am trying to make is that what Feist does in this series, modern fantasy authors do better.
The writing style really does not sit very well for me. It feels quite dry and does not really give me a sense of magic or wonder when I’m exploring these massive fantasy worlds. The dialogue is also often clunky and makes you feel like, people don’t really speak in this manner ever. There are some good moments when some things are handled well but half the time its more like oh no, it’s attacking us, so let’s kill it but look we’re losing, but our magical friends are here to save the day for way too many damn times.
This next thing is not exactly a critique but merely a things I have noted is that Magician and Silverthorn feel like different series whilst being in the same world. Let me explain. Book one, Magician(which is sometimes spilt into Apprentice and Master) focuses on the story of Pug and his friend Tomas. In this book, Tomas gets like two pages of time while Pug gets a few chapters towards the last quarter of the book. Furthermore, due to the first book’s, often years at a time time jumps, these characters all like have children and everything. This book instead focuses on Arutha and Jimmy, which, while are ok characters, also made me wish that we actually do see more of the characters we were first introduced in the first book. I mean imagine starting the first book of a series and falling in love with them but then seeing them only briefly mentioned in the next book. This is done occasionally in The Wheel of Time which different books focussing on different characters, but that is a 14 book series and each of those books is almost double the length of this book.
Anyway, moving on. The gosh dang romances. Every one of them feels like physical attraction than love. Aside from a few kisses there does not seem to be a lot of chemistry between the romantic interests in this book. Yes a year passed between this book and the first one, but even in book one the reader does not get to see as to how the characters fall in love other than the fact that everyone is astoundingly beautiful. I mean, Carline is like the most beautiful woman in the realm and then Anita slender figure and beauty is commented on every single time and then the Elf Queen’s beauty is like out of the world, and just stop. Basically the female characters in this series so far feel like trophy pieces to have children with, which is not ok. I understand that it was written ages ago but from a modern perspective it bothers me.
If I can be honest, I skimmed over some info dumps. Every time a character asks another character about something, you can almost always expect a full lengthy paragraphs of another character explaining something which, again, take a breath people don’t normally rant on for ages all the time.
So in the end, I respect it for what it is though it does fall short to what has been published recently and from what may have been an incredibly story 30 years ago, it does feel pretty average. I will be reading A Darkness at Sethanon over the coming weeks. 5.5/10