2.25 stars. Started well. Really well, actually. There was a nice, wonderfully dramatic opening confrontation that got me hooked.
I absolutely loved the H…for the most part. Yes, he drove me crazy. And he was maddeningly quick at answering back and acting all cool as if the h was a hysterical ninny. But there was something really interesting about how his actions shone through despite his words. I liked his reaction to finding out he was the father.
I also have to say, all the old-school harlequins who say things like “the H is so intelligent” and then proceed to have him behave exactly the same way as a petulant 5 year old need to take a leaf out of this book!!!
Yes, it did say the H is so intelligent, and he still proceeded to behave in exactly the same way as a petulant 5 year old child…but for once we actually got to see evidence of his intelligence! ‘He answered by rote but his mind was focused on something else’…and ‘he composed his speech, choosing his words very carefully in the back of his mind while spending quality time focusing on the babies.’ Not direct quotes…anyways, it was such a nice touch and I feel it really needs to be acknowledged.
Then…as the book progressed it sort of degraded. There was some character growth, more for him and not her, and I did believe their HEA, but there were high-school melodrama elements that took away from my confidence that she, especially, had changed for good.
One other note - The twins. What is up with these twins? Are they even people???
This became a major distraction. Partly because she didn’t seem to mentally be living a “I have kids” lifestyle, at least not after the traveling scene. And partly because there was a huge gap in the story that I just couldn’t get my head around.
She is a mom, for goodness sakes; and, by all accounts, a good one. Suddenly having a nanny would be a HUGE life change. She would have to get out of the habit of having her automatic “are the babies ok” radar on. To take time off and be herself, to evaluate how much she’s grown, to get some sleep, even??? To not have any of that character growth happen was just…weird.
And when did she even feed these kids?? I mean, seriously? No mention of juggling bottles or baby food, no mention of diaper changes, daring escapes, pulled hair, drool…I’m telling you, this was a HUGE missed opportunity for her to play the “DH, I love you but I can’t pay attention to you because I’m so busy help me PLEASE the twins are insane” card…
She could have potentially had to deal with a jealous husband who had to learn to share…but no, she became jealous when he played with them! I mean, feelings are feelings and I would probably have felt the same way too, but you are talking about baby twins here! This is what goes through my head “…Um…hold on. You are a perfectly capable adult who can be trusted around children for a few moments, and you want to play with them??? Oookay! Well then. Let me go…um…check on something …I’ll be right back” << runs away at top speed, falls in bed fully clothed and proceeds to catch up on as much desperately needed sleep as possible >>
Yea, yes, ok, this is a harlequin. The babies are fluffy imaginary angels and I just have to deal with it.
My point is, once the “hold on, these are MY kids” moment happened, there really wasn’t a point to them being there.
Then I got a BRILLIANT idea. I started substituting the words “toy poodles” for “babies” when she mentioned them and switched out “harness” for “car seat” and suddenly I felt WAY better about the entire story.
Anyways, that’s about it…towards the end it got really frilly and happy-go-lucky which dropped down the stars a bit.
There were some nice moments, so I can’t grade it down too harshly.
2.25 stars