SOME KEY WORDS
* Four POVs, and a fifth character with a narrative set to the past.
* Drama and intrigue
* Secrets and lies
* Trust
* Friendship
* Brits in Bali
* Thriller
* uncertainty with regards to the characters' credibility
* Some good twists, and some lesser good
SOME OPINIONS AND THOUGHTS
I was so close to giving just two and a half (and maybe that's actually what I'll do and just round it up) because this was such a let down.
First off: the cover says "two couples, one secret" - it's more like "two couples, twenty-ish secrets".
Second "problem", which is just an annoyance, but a huge one for me: the excessive use of " 'd " as in "had". "She'd said that xxx" "She'd eaten xx" "He'd showered" ... This is used multiple times on every single page. Why?! Why not just write "She said", "she ate" "he showered" in simple, strait forward past tense? This just drove me nuts. I've never seen this before, at least not in with the excessive (insane!) frequency as in this book.
Third issue: the characters! I don't need all characters to be loveable and sympathetic, but I need there to be something about them that makes me care, and here, there's just nothing. They all seem a bit lacking in personality, except what we're directly told ("Sophie is xzy" - type of person), their personalities are never SHOWN, just told to us directly. There are four of them, main characters, that is, and except for having different jobs and interests, they don't really stand out from each other. Rather they seem like pieces in a board game being moved around to create a narrative/story, deliver some lines and do some actions. That none of them seem to actually care genuinely for anyone else but themselves, doesn't help much either.
The plot is okay, but way too drawn out, and at times lacking in development. There are some twists and it has a lot of things going on that I would usually enjoy, but in this book, the writing style and the characters stood in the way for my enjoyment of the story itself.
I did, however, enjoy the conclusion/explanation of how the storyline from the past fitted into the present.