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The Art of Apology: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
You have made me view the world about me and the people in it with greater clarity, and I shall forever be grateful, especially because it means I have had the chance to know you.WHEN ELIZABETH BENNET IS INSULTED by Mr Fitzwilliam Darcy at the Meryton assembly, she is determined to despise him forever. How could she do otherwise, given what an arrogant, rude man he is? She intends to forget about what happened, but she finds it is not so easy when faced with incessant scorn from her neighbours in the weeks following.
DARCY IS SHOCKED when Mr Bennet confronts and reprimands him about his actions, but afterwards admits it was rather ungentleman-like behaviour. He condescends to apologise but, startlingly, Elizabeth rebuffs him, claiming he must learn to apologise properly if he truly wants her forgiveness. Darcy is ready to dismiss her, but when Mr Charles Bingley also questions his recent actions, he realises he must reform himself, beginning with making amends to Elizabeth.
ELIZABETH WATCHES WITH AMAZEMENT as she sees not only Mr Darcy but also her own father attempt to ameliorate their connexions to the friends and family about them. Still, she keeps her distance from Mr Darcy, stubbornly clinging to her first impression of him, until an unexpected meeting ends with her wondering if there might be more to him than she had supposed. But just how far can an apology go?
The Art of Apology is a clean, enemies to friends to lovers historical regency romance.
DARCY IS SHOCKED when Mr Bennet confronts and reprimands him about his actions, but afterwards admits it was rather ungentleman-like behaviour. He condescends to apologise but, startlingly, Elizabeth rebuffs him, claiming he must learn to apologise properly if he truly wants her forgiveness. Darcy is ready to dismiss her, but when Mr Charles Bingley also questions his recent actions, he realises he must reform himself, beginning with making amends to Elizabeth.
ELIZABETH WATCHES WITH AMAZEMENT as she sees not only Mr Darcy but also her own father attempt to ameliorate their connexions to the friends and family about them. Still, she keeps her distance from Mr Darcy, stubbornly clinging to her first impression of him, until an unexpected meeting ends with her wondering if there might be more to him than she had supposed. But just how far can an apology go?
The Art of Apology is a clean, enemies to friends to lovers historical regency romance.
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Published November 18, 2024
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Lucy Marin
26 books93 followersLucy Marin developed a love for reading at a young age and whiled away many hours imagining how stories might continue or what would happen if there was a change in the circumstances faced by the protagonists. After reading her first Austen novel, a life-long ardent admiration was borne. Lucy was introduced to the world of Austen variations after stumbling across one at a used bookstore while on holiday in London. This led to the discovery of the online world of Jane Austen Fan Fiction and, soon after, she picked up her pen and began to transfer the stories in her head to paper.
Lucy lives in Toronto, Canada surrounded by hundreds of books and a loving family. She teaches environmental studies, loves animals and trees and exploring the world around her.
Lucy lives in Toronto, Canada surrounded by hundreds of books and a loving family. She teaches environmental studies, loves animals and trees and exploring the world around her.
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November 8, 2024
Nicely imagined story where changes in two characters' responses to Mr. Darcy's insult of Elizabeth Bennet at the Meryton assembly and his obvious disdain of the local society changes the entire trajectory of the plot.
Darcy is in a particularly foul mood after Ramsgate, and he doesn't care to impress any of Bingley's unrefined neighbors. He's very intentional about discouraging the notion that he might dance with a country nobody. While Elizabeth shrugs it off, the insult becomes a topic of local gossip, and THAT makes her uncomfortable. Those who envy the beauty of the Bennet sisters are happy to spread word that a gentleman of high standing found Elizabeth merely "tolerable."
When Mr. Bennet finds out about it, his indignation on her behalf also provokes self-reflection: if such a man found his most admirable daughter wanting, what did that portend for his truly ill-behaved family? Upon contemplation, he realizes that, as their father and husband, he must do better to protect them as well as to steer them toward proper behavior. And he does.
Mr. Bennet's first step is to confront the dunderhead, give him a dressing down, and demand that he apologize to his daughter. Mr. Darcy does take the next opportunity to reluctantly do so. Instead of accepting the apology, Elizabeth gives him another reprimand for his obvious insincerity and condescension. When she describes the encounter to her father, he forbids her to speak with Darcy.
Meanwhile, Mr. Bingley has observed how his friend's behavior has deteriorated over the summer and is appalled at his extreme rudeness toward Netherfield's neighbors. Although sympathetic, he confronts Darcy, too, telling him to either be the gentleman he knows him to be or to leave. Having found his backbone, Bingley becomes more assertive with Caroline and Louisa.
The one-two-three punch of Mr. Bennet, Elizabeth Bennet, and Bingley finally gets Darcy's attention and leads him to do some self-reflection of his own. The result is similar to his attitude adjustment in Pride and Prejudice after Elizabeth's refusal of his marriage proposal.
Ms. Marin always writes beautifully, and that is true again here. Characters behave believably, and I especially like the way Darcy and Elizabeth tentatively get to know each other and eventually realize they're in love.
But the real fun here is the way familiar P&P scenes move in brand new directions because this Bennet family and this Mr. Darcy are now somewhat different. In the case of the former, it's apparent that they're a work-in-progress; Mrs. Bennet still slips and says things that are a bit inappropriate, and Lydia is especially prone to pushing beyond the edge of the boundaries her father has set.
My main criticism is similar to what I've found in many of Ms. Marin's other books - there are few obstacles, which are overcome early, and the rest of the book loses momentum, becoming a very extended HEA. Lady Catherine makes one last ditch effort to prevent ODC from marrying, but there's no anticipation in advance and she's immediately quashed, making it pretty much a nothing-burger.
Still, it's an enjoyable read.
Content is clean.
I received a free book via BookSprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Darcy is in a particularly foul mood after Ramsgate, and he doesn't care to impress any of Bingley's unrefined neighbors. He's very intentional about discouraging the notion that he might dance with a country nobody. While Elizabeth shrugs it off, the insult becomes a topic of local gossip, and THAT makes her uncomfortable. Those who envy the beauty of the Bennet sisters are happy to spread word that a gentleman of high standing found Elizabeth merely "tolerable."
When Mr. Bennet finds out about it, his indignation on her behalf also provokes self-reflection: if such a man found his most admirable daughter wanting, what did that portend for his truly ill-behaved family? Upon contemplation, he realizes that, as their father and husband, he must do better to protect them as well as to steer them toward proper behavior. And he does.
Mr. Bennet's first step is to confront the dunderhead, give him a dressing down, and demand that he apologize to his daughter. Mr. Darcy does take the next opportunity to reluctantly do so. Instead of accepting the apology, Elizabeth gives him another reprimand for his obvious insincerity and condescension. When she describes the encounter to her father, he forbids her to speak with Darcy.
Meanwhile, Mr. Bingley has observed how his friend's behavior has deteriorated over the summer and is appalled at his extreme rudeness toward Netherfield's neighbors. Although sympathetic, he confronts Darcy, too, telling him to either be the gentleman he knows him to be or to leave. Having found his backbone, Bingley becomes more assertive with Caroline and Louisa.
The one-two-three punch of Mr. Bennet, Elizabeth Bennet, and Bingley finally gets Darcy's attention and leads him to do some self-reflection of his own. The result is similar to his attitude adjustment in Pride and Prejudice after Elizabeth's refusal of his marriage proposal.
Ms. Marin always writes beautifully, and that is true again here. Characters behave believably, and I especially like the way Darcy and Elizabeth tentatively get to know each other and eventually realize they're in love.
But the real fun here is the way familiar P&P scenes move in brand new directions because this Bennet family and this Mr. Darcy are now somewhat different. In the case of the former, it's apparent that they're a work-in-progress; Mrs. Bennet still slips and says things that are a bit inappropriate, and Lydia is especially prone to pushing beyond the edge of the boundaries her father has set.
My main criticism is similar to what I've found in many of Ms. Marin's other books - there are few obstacles, which are overcome early, and the rest of the book loses momentum, becoming a very extended HEA. Lady Catherine makes one last ditch effort to prevent ODC from marrying, but there's no anticipation in advance and she's immediately quashed, making it pretty much a nothing-burger.
Still, it's an enjoyable read.
Content is clean.
I received a free book via BookSprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
March 23, 2025
Mr. Bennet is affronted.
Moving from first impressions to heartfelt transformations, The Art of Apology uses that notorious moment when Mr Darcy insults Elizabeth at the Meryton assembly and an inartful apology to lead two stubborn people on a journey of self-reflection… and maybe even love.
Unlike in the original Pride and Prejudice, Elizabeth doesn’t let the insult slide, and neither does her father. Mr Bennet, often known for his indolent attitude, is truly rattled by the public slight against his daughter and wonders:
“If Mr Darcy could insult Elizabeth, what did that mean for her sisters? Might other gentlemen have a low opinion of them?” —quote from book
This prompts him to look inward and step up as a father and begin to parent, which I loved seeing—he’s firmer with his younger daughters and doesn’t hesitate to keep his wife in check. Elizabeth, too, gets a nudge from him to reconsider her tendency to judge on first impressions and never let them go.
Darcy is surprised when Mr Bennet directly confronts him about his behaviour. He’s used to getting away with his arrogance, so it’s a shock to have his manners questioned—not just by Elizabeth but by her father and even his friend Bingley. I enjoyed Bingley’s stronger portrayal, as he adds to Mr Bennet’s criticism of his behaviour by letting Darcy know he doesn’t always have to be so disagreeable, and he doesn’t let his sisters influence his decisions.
As Darcy begins to reflect on his behaviour, he tries to make amends, but Elizabeth isn’t easily won over—she doesn’t feel his apology is sincere.
“An apology given under duress is not an apology, Mr Darcy. A true apology must be felt here.” She tapped her chest above her heart. “You do not regret what you said. The lack of sincerity in your tone told me as much. I do not believe you even regret that I heard you. The only reason you have spoken to me today is because my father dared to tell you that you behaved inappropriately. Am I mistaken?” —quote from book
Darcy and Elizabeth reassess their opinions of each other—slowly, cautiously, and with plenty of hesitation along the way. There’s a lovely scene involving Darcy’s lazy dog, Budge, that softens Elizabeth’s view of him just a bit, hinting at the man he might truly be, and Darcy seeing her gentle and loving manner with Budge softens his heart towards her even more.
While the story is full of moments where three characters in particular must look inward, face up to their flaws, and find the courage to change—even when it’s hard—the romance is definitely not lost. Marin’s writing kept me hooked as I watched Mr. Bennet, Darcy, and Elizabeth change their attitudes. This all leads Darcy to a heartfelt apology, as well as both a surprising proposal and a swoon-worthy one.
Of course, it’s not all serious soul-searching. Mr Bennet, with his usual dry wit, can’t resist a few well-placed barbs, and Darcy eventually shows an “increasingly obvious sense of humour.” These lighter moments bring a delightful touch of levity to the story, showing that even the most stubborn characters have their playful sides.
Kisses only, clean and sweet.
Highly recommend.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review. I also purchased the published version for my Kindle library, as well as the audiobook version.
March 22, 2025 - Audiobook
Stevie Zimmerman once again performs her craft in a most pleasing and outstanding way. Never a disappointment and an an auto-buy for me. There’s no story or character she cannot perform well.
Moving from first impressions to heartfelt transformations, The Art of Apology uses that notorious moment when Mr Darcy insults Elizabeth at the Meryton assembly and an inartful apology to lead two stubborn people on a journey of self-reflection… and maybe even love.
Unlike in the original Pride and Prejudice, Elizabeth doesn’t let the insult slide, and neither does her father. Mr Bennet, often known for his indolent attitude, is truly rattled by the public slight against his daughter and wonders:
“If Mr Darcy could insult Elizabeth, what did that mean for her sisters? Might other gentlemen have a low opinion of them?” —quote from book
This prompts him to look inward and step up as a father and begin to parent, which I loved seeing—he’s firmer with his younger daughters and doesn’t hesitate to keep his wife in check. Elizabeth, too, gets a nudge from him to reconsider her tendency to judge on first impressions and never let them go.
Darcy is surprised when Mr Bennet directly confronts him about his behaviour. He’s used to getting away with his arrogance, so it’s a shock to have his manners questioned—not just by Elizabeth but by her father and even his friend Bingley. I enjoyed Bingley’s stronger portrayal, as he adds to Mr Bennet’s criticism of his behaviour by letting Darcy know he doesn’t always have to be so disagreeable, and he doesn’t let his sisters influence his decisions.
As Darcy begins to reflect on his behaviour, he tries to make amends, but Elizabeth isn’t easily won over—she doesn’t feel his apology is sincere.
“An apology given under duress is not an apology, Mr Darcy. A true apology must be felt here.” She tapped her chest above her heart. “You do not regret what you said. The lack of sincerity in your tone told me as much. I do not believe you even regret that I heard you. The only reason you have spoken to me today is because my father dared to tell you that you behaved inappropriately. Am I mistaken?” —quote from book
Darcy and Elizabeth reassess their opinions of each other—slowly, cautiously, and with plenty of hesitation along the way. There’s a lovely scene involving Darcy’s lazy dog, Budge, that softens Elizabeth’s view of him just a bit, hinting at the man he might truly be, and Darcy seeing her gentle and loving manner with Budge softens his heart towards her even more.
While the story is full of moments where three characters in particular must look inward, face up to their flaws, and find the courage to change—even when it’s hard—the romance is definitely not lost. Marin’s writing kept me hooked as I watched Mr. Bennet, Darcy, and Elizabeth change their attitudes. This all leads Darcy to a heartfelt apology, as well as both a surprising proposal and a swoon-worthy one.
Of course, it’s not all serious soul-searching. Mr Bennet, with his usual dry wit, can’t resist a few well-placed barbs, and Darcy eventually shows an “increasingly obvious sense of humour.” These lighter moments bring a delightful touch of levity to the story, showing that even the most stubborn characters have their playful sides.
Kisses only, clean and sweet.
Highly recommend.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review. I also purchased the published version for my Kindle library, as well as the audiobook version.
March 22, 2025 - Audiobook
Stevie Zimmerman once again performs her craft in a most pleasing and outstanding way. Never a disappointment and an an auto-buy for me. There’s no story or character she cannot perform well.
November 21, 2024
Mr. Bennet takes a stand with his family
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***
>>Rating: clean per author: I’d suggest this as a mature teen due to language/cursing and behaviors of an adult nature
>>Angst Level: The angst was not as bad as I expected. I considered this book tame compared to her previous stories. I found that I missed the uproar. My beautician, manicurist, and dentist, however, were thrilled. I didn’t pull my hair, bite my nails, or grind my teeth.
>>Source: I received a free copy via Booksprout [10-15-24] and volunteered to leave a review. 36 chapters [4.5 stars] Book 4 in the Happiness in Marriage Series. Read again via KU [11-19-24]
Trope: Enemies to friends to lovers: Historical Regency romance: Pastiche Fiction: per the blurb
After hearing about the insult to his favorite daughter, Mr. Bennet went to Netherfield and took Mr. Darcy to task for his behavior at the Meryton Assembly. Darcy condescendingly assured him he would apologize to the lady. Bennet told him, in modern terms, good luck with that. Darcy didn’t understand the man’s smirk as he said it. Little did Darcy know what he was up against, but he would soon find out.
After Bennet left, Bingley took Darcy to task for his behavior toward his Meryton neighbors. Bingley was trying to establish himself with the local gentry and didn’t need someone in his house causing him to be disliked or shunned. He had enough trouble reining in his sisters’ attitudes and behaviors. He didn’t need his friend contributing to the fray.
Darcy stewed over the matter but decided it needed to be done quickly so he could get it over with. He was self-assured that the lady would simper and blush but would happily accept his apology and then, fawn all over him. That was the usual way with the ladies of the ton [including Miss Bingley]. He expected that behavior and was resigned thinking he would endure it for Bingley’s sake. His friend was quite upset and Dary needed to assure him he could be a gentleman even in this back-country setting.
When Darcy finally attempted to apologize, Miss Elizabeth Bennet looked him straight in the eye and refused to accept his words until he offered a genuine apology. Thus, Mr. Fitzwilliam Darcy learned, the hard way, that not every woman in the Kingdom would fall at his feet. Thus began the journey of Darcy discovering what it took to appease a woman worthy of being pleased. This was so much fun.
In his dealings with Mr. Darcy, Bennet was forced to open his eyes to the neglect of his estate, family, and especially his younger daughters. He was surprised to discover they were no longer little girls scampering here and there. He wondered when they had grown up. They were now young ladies capable of getting into trouble and ruining the family. His intervention began as a gentle cascade but soon became an avalanche as changes were made at Longbourn. Not everyone would be happy with those changes. Marin knows how to raise the angst level in a story. This was no different.
Happiness in Marriage Series [each is a standalone]
Book 1: Being Mrs. Darcy
Book 2: The Marriage Bargain
Book 3: Mr. Darcy: A Man with a Plan
Book 4: The Art of Apology
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***
>>Rating: clean per author: I’d suggest this as a mature teen due to language/cursing and behaviors of an adult nature
>>Angst Level: The angst was not as bad as I expected. I considered this book tame compared to her previous stories. I found that I missed the uproar. My beautician, manicurist, and dentist, however, were thrilled. I didn’t pull my hair, bite my nails, or grind my teeth.
>>Source: I received a free copy via Booksprout [10-15-24] and volunteered to leave a review. 36 chapters [4.5 stars] Book 4 in the Happiness in Marriage Series. Read again via KU [11-19-24]
Trope: Enemies to friends to lovers: Historical Regency romance: Pastiche Fiction: per the blurb
After hearing about the insult to his favorite daughter, Mr. Bennet went to Netherfield and took Mr. Darcy to task for his behavior at the Meryton Assembly. Darcy condescendingly assured him he would apologize to the lady. Bennet told him, in modern terms, good luck with that. Darcy didn’t understand the man’s smirk as he said it. Little did Darcy know what he was up against, but he would soon find out.
After Bennet left, Bingley took Darcy to task for his behavior toward his Meryton neighbors. Bingley was trying to establish himself with the local gentry and didn’t need someone in his house causing him to be disliked or shunned. He had enough trouble reining in his sisters’ attitudes and behaviors. He didn’t need his friend contributing to the fray.
Darcy stewed over the matter but decided it needed to be done quickly so he could get it over with. He was self-assured that the lady would simper and blush but would happily accept his apology and then, fawn all over him. That was the usual way with the ladies of the ton [including Miss Bingley]. He expected that behavior and was resigned thinking he would endure it for Bingley’s sake. His friend was quite upset and Dary needed to assure him he could be a gentleman even in this back-country setting.
When Darcy finally attempted to apologize, Miss Elizabeth Bennet looked him straight in the eye and refused to accept his words until he offered a genuine apology. Thus, Mr. Fitzwilliam Darcy learned, the hard way, that not every woman in the Kingdom would fall at his feet. Thus began the journey of Darcy discovering what it took to appease a woman worthy of being pleased. This was so much fun.
In his dealings with Mr. Darcy, Bennet was forced to open his eyes to the neglect of his estate, family, and especially his younger daughters. He was surprised to discover they were no longer little girls scampering here and there. He wondered when they had grown up. They were now young ladies capable of getting into trouble and ruining the family. His intervention began as a gentle cascade but soon became an avalanche as changes were made at Longbourn. Not everyone would be happy with those changes. Marin knows how to raise the angst level in a story. This was no different.
Happiness in Marriage Series [each is a standalone]
Book 1: Being Mrs. Darcy
Book 2: The Marriage Bargain
Book 3: Mr. Darcy: A Man with a Plan
Book 4: The Art of Apology
February 5, 2026
Mr Darcy's dark mood triggers Mr. Bennet's awakening.
Darcy needs to figure lots of things out, his behavior is atrocious and has mitigating effects on one family in particular.
That being the Bennets. Mr. Bennet becomes aware of his daughters' reputations as seen through the eyes of his neighbors and potential suitors. This brings him to acknowledge the lacking behavior of his wife and three youngest.
Through little changes and the desires to learn from mistakes and be better, subtle and major things happen in Meryton, including in regards to Collins and Wickham.
Our dear couple grows to know each other, become friends and slowly, slowly fall in love.
Bingley seems to have more of a backbone and his sisters aren't quite as bad, either.
I always marvel at how one small change in canon brings us an entirely different story. In this case, I feel it is two:
Both Bennet and Bingley call Darcy out on his behavior and very early on, and Bennet's eyes are opened. The story this unfolds is sweet, soft and tenderly full of love. Both romantic and familial. I can't tell if I adore Darcy more, or Mr. Bennet - as he always should have been.
Mr. Darcy's apologies are affected in words, Mr. Bennet's are done through actions.
A low-angst, slow burn, lovely story.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Darcy needs to figure lots of things out, his behavior is atrocious and has mitigating effects on one family in particular.
That being the Bennets. Mr. Bennet becomes aware of his daughters' reputations as seen through the eyes of his neighbors and potential suitors. This brings him to acknowledge the lacking behavior of his wife and three youngest.
Through little changes and the desires to learn from mistakes and be better, subtle and major things happen in Meryton, including in regards to Collins and Wickham.
Our dear couple grows to know each other, become friends and slowly, slowly fall in love.
Bingley seems to have more of a backbone and his sisters aren't quite as bad, either.
I always marvel at how one small change in canon brings us an entirely different story. In this case, I feel it is two:
Both Bennet and Bingley call Darcy out on his behavior and very early on, and Bennet's eyes are opened. The story this unfolds is sweet, soft and tenderly full of love. Both romantic and familial. I can't tell if I adore Darcy more, or Mr. Bennet - as he always should have been.
Mr. Darcy's apologies are affected in words, Mr. Bennet's are done through actions.
A low-angst, slow burn, lovely story.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
January 16, 2025
My Rating: 4.5*
This was a beautifully written and heartfelt story that is a wake-up call to not only Mr. Darcy but also to Mr. Bennet and to some degree, Elizabeth Bennet. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
“An apology given under duress is not an apology, Mr. Darcy. A true apology must be felt here. She tapped her chest above her heart. You do not regret what you said. The lack of sincerity in your tone told me as much.” (quote from the book)
Not only does Mr. Bennet call out Darcy’s behaviour, but Mr. Bingley does as well. After Miss Elizabeth’s words to him that he is not sincere, he begins his journey back to the man his father and mother would be proud of.
“As though thick clouds parted before his eyes, he understood that his girls need him to…teach them. Guide them.” (quote from the book}
Through Mr. Bennet confronting Mr. Darcy, he has his own awakening as to his indolence and behavior towards his wife and daughters. I enjoyed his journey just as much as Darcy’s and would even say, I wish there was more of it provided.
“He recollected an important lesson his father had imparted to him. If you find you have made a mistake, the gentlemanly response is to set about correcting it as soon as possible.” (quote from the book)
I highly recommend this gentle story of becoming the best person you can be. Watching Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet work through their issues was very enjoyable. Watching Mr. Bennet become a better father made it that much sweeter. I think my only quibble would be that the book could have ended sooner than it did.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving my review
August 18, 2025
Very sweet, low-angst, at times very funny, flawlessly edited... I finished it in one sitting.
Steam level: Safe for work.
Steam level: Safe for work.
January 5, 2025
In this variation on Pride and Prejudice, when Mr. Bennet hears of Mr. Darcy's insult of Elizabeth Bennet at the assembly, he takes umbrage, and calls on the gentleman the following day, insisting that he apologize to his daughter. This confrontation is something that Mr. Bennet himself realizes is totally out of character for him, but he feels compelled, and even begins to wonder whether he's doing enough to help all his daughters be more acceptable to society.
Darcy takes offense at first, and offers only a perfunctory apology, which Elizabeth Bennet refuses to accept, saying she can tell he doesn't mean it. He thinks about what she says to him at that point, and is later confronted by Bingley about his behavior so far in Hertfordshire. Darcy begins to realize how he has let the events of the past summer - Wickham's attempted elopement with his sister Georgiana - affect his mood and his behavior toward others, even his sister. He realizes he needs to reform.
While it's a good story, I had trouble staying with it after the halfway point, because so much takes place in characters' heads, which is fine if kept to a minimum, but in this story even interrupts dialog so much that I sometimes couldn't keep track of what was being said. At one point I seem to recall someone asking a question, and after several paragraphs of thinking about it and even a little mind wandering, the other character replies. That seems like a big interruption for the reader, and avoidable. Later, Lady Catherine's sudden appearance and behavior seems over the top, even for her, and since she wasn't introduced at all before that, and Mr. Collins did not visit Longbourn in this story with all his mentions of her, I can imagine that anyone not wholly familiar with P&P might be taken by surprise or confused.
There are two things I like a lot about this book. One is Mr. Bennet's character arc, which I delighted in. It's well presented, as having a gradual but positive effect on him, his wife, and his younger daughters, as he takes it on himself to guide them in their education and behavior. The romance is well handled too, given time to develop first into friendship and then love. And I like, in spite of my problem with Lady Catherine's part in it, the outcome for more than one couple.
Darcy takes offense at first, and offers only a perfunctory apology, which Elizabeth Bennet refuses to accept, saying she can tell he doesn't mean it. He thinks about what she says to him at that point, and is later confronted by Bingley about his behavior so far in Hertfordshire. Darcy begins to realize how he has let the events of the past summer - Wickham's attempted elopement with his sister Georgiana - affect his mood and his behavior toward others, even his sister. He realizes he needs to reform.
While it's a good story, I had trouble staying with it after the halfway point, because so much takes place in characters' heads, which is fine if kept to a minimum, but in this story even interrupts dialog so much that I sometimes couldn't keep track of what was being said. At one point I seem to recall someone asking a question, and after several paragraphs of thinking about it and even a little mind wandering, the other character replies. That seems like a big interruption for the reader, and avoidable. Later, Lady Catherine's sudden appearance and behavior seems over the top, even for her, and since she wasn't introduced at all before that, and Mr. Collins did not visit Longbourn in this story with all his mentions of her, I can imagine that anyone not wholly familiar with P&P might be taken by surprise or confused.
There are two things I like a lot about this book. One is Mr. Bennet's character arc, which I delighted in. It's well presented, as having a gradual but positive effect on him, his wife, and his younger daughters, as he takes it on himself to guide them in their education and behavior. The romance is well handled too, given time to develop first into friendship and then love. And I like, in spite of my problem with Lady Catherine's part in it, the outcome for more than one couple.
December 2, 2024
When Fitzwilliam Darcy joins his friend Bingley in Hertfordshire, he is unimpressed by local society.
At the Meryton Assembly he speaks disparagingly about Elizabeth Bennet. In a private conversation, yes. But too loud and with little care who heard.
Elizabeth tries to brush it off but when it becomes clear that her neighbours heard and either pity or scoff at her, it is hard.
She is stunned when her lackadaisical father is furious and demands that Darcy make amends.
Darcy has rarely been challenged on his behaviour and is shocked by Mr Bennet's attitude.
The insult becomes a catalyst for both men.
Bennet realises that he has neglected his daughters and makes some huge changes within the family. Elizabeth is delighted that he is finally dealing with the behaviour of her younger sisters and even Mrs Bennet.
Darcy is initially resistant to change but when Bingley also berates him for his churlish manners, he accepts his faults.
Time will tell if the captivating Elizabeth Bennet will accept his apologies and maybe his heart!
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
At the Meryton Assembly he speaks disparagingly about Elizabeth Bennet. In a private conversation, yes. But too loud and with little care who heard.
Elizabeth tries to brush it off but when it becomes clear that her neighbours heard and either pity or scoff at her, it is hard.
She is stunned when her lackadaisical father is furious and demands that Darcy make amends.
Darcy has rarely been challenged on his behaviour and is shocked by Mr Bennet's attitude.
The insult becomes a catalyst for both men.
Bennet realises that he has neglected his daughters and makes some huge changes within the family. Elizabeth is delighted that he is finally dealing with the behaviour of her younger sisters and even Mrs Bennet.
Darcy is initially resistant to change but when Bingley also berates him for his churlish manners, he accepts his faults.
Time will tell if the captivating Elizabeth Bennet will accept his apologies and maybe his heart!
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
October 30, 2024
4.5* rounded up
Darcy is at his haughty hottiest (or hotty haughtiest) until his long-buried and yet unrealized charm begins to surface about 30% into the story. From that point onward, both his and Elizabeth's sallies beguiled me so much that I entirely forgot his surlishness at the book's start. This is a low-angst variation, where the Meryton assembly's happenings spur on not only Darcy but Mr. Bennet as well. This collective self-realization has a significant impact on the other characters and the trajectory of the plot. The story lacks a true antagonist; instead, the foe is an individual's journey toward reforming their own behaviour. Bingley is an upstanding man with a spine, and Mr. Bennet leaves his study for the benefit of his family. I found the book a pleasure to read and recommend it for anyone who is looking for a thoughtful and romantic story. I’ve already pre-ordered the e-book.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Darcy is at his haughty hottiest (or hotty haughtiest) until his long-buried and yet unrealized charm begins to surface about 30% into the story. From that point onward, both his and Elizabeth's sallies beguiled me so much that I entirely forgot his surlishness at the book's start. This is a low-angst variation, where the Meryton assembly's happenings spur on not only Darcy but Mr. Bennet as well. This collective self-realization has a significant impact on the other characters and the trajectory of the plot. The story lacks a true antagonist; instead, the foe is an individual's journey toward reforming their own behaviour. Bingley is an upstanding man with a spine, and Mr. Bennet leaves his study for the benefit of his family. I found the book a pleasure to read and recommend it for anyone who is looking for a thoughtful and romantic story. I’ve already pre-ordered the e-book.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
November 24, 2024
Delightful
An absolutely delightful and entertaining variation inspired by Jane Austen’s classic novel Pride and Prejudice by the talented Lucy Marin. I enjoyed it.
An absolutely delightful and entertaining variation inspired by Jane Austen’s classic novel Pride and Prejudice by the talented Lucy Marin. I enjoyed it.
May 1, 2025
When Darcy insults Elizabeth at the Meryton Assembly she is determined to think ill of him and forget the incident. But when she is constantly reminded of his cruel words by her neighbours her father is determined to act. He demands an apology of Darcy but when Darcy is about to deliver his apology, Elizabeth tells him in no uncertain terms that she will only accept an apology that comes from the heart.
Darcy, after Bingley reprimands him of his behaviour, too, finally sees that he has not acted in an acceptable way and begins to correct his behaviour. He then tries to approach Elizabeth to apologize again and get to know her but she stubbornly keeps her distance and avoids him. Only after an unexpected encounter things change and the two start to get to know each other better.
Will they be able to leave the past behind? Will Darcy be able to apologize in a way Elizabeth can accept? And will this apology change their relationship to friendship or even love?
The book is very well written by the author Lucy Marin. The main change in this story is that Mr Bennet, after Darcy's insult, finally decides to act like a caring father. He looks after his daughters and guides and corrects their behaviour and he interacts in a caring way with his wife. I like this version of Mr Bennet very much. He finally does his duty and with this he achieves more harmony in the family and a better standing of his family in society. Due to his actions all family members, even Lydia and Mrs Bennet become more likable and sensible. I like this change very much.
At the beginning Darcy is even more grumpy than ever and, for the first pages, I thought I would not be able to like him. Fortunately he changes for the better and when he finally tries to earn Elizabeth's forgiveness he is the same honourable, kind and considerate gentleman Elizabeth comes to admire.
Elizabeth on her part is, thanks to Mr Bennet's attempt of improvement, is less stubborn and clings not so long on her first impression of Darcy. She is therefore at an earlier point able to acknowledge that she may like Darcy and wishes for more than friendship.
I really like the development of Darcy and Elizabeth's relationship as well as the relationship of Jane and Bingley. Due to Mr Bennet's improvement Mrs Bennet is not pressuring her daughters to marry well and they both have therefore the time to get to know their suitors better and fall in love without interference of others. A lovely alteration.
There are the usual villains in this story but their appearance is only of short duration. Due to the changed behaviour of Mr Bennet things unfold otherwise and therefore the villain have not much opportunity to interfere. There is nothing that really kept Darcy and Elizabeth apart, they only take their time to really know each other before committing to one another.
If you like to know how the relationship of Darcy and Elizabeth develops after Mr Bennet insists on an apology of Darcy you should definitely read this excellent book.
I highly recommend it.
I received a free copy of this book via booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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Addition for the audiobook
The audiobook was narrated by the exceptional Stevie Zimmerman. She is one of my favourite narrators. She has the talent to give all characters their unique voices and therefore you are able to identify every person at every point of the story due to their voices. I have already read the book and loved it very much. But the audiobook was, due to Stevie Zimmerman's performance, even better.
Darcy, after Bingley reprimands him of his behaviour, too, finally sees that he has not acted in an acceptable way and begins to correct his behaviour. He then tries to approach Elizabeth to apologize again and get to know her but she stubbornly keeps her distance and avoids him. Only after an unexpected encounter things change and the two start to get to know each other better.
Will they be able to leave the past behind? Will Darcy be able to apologize in a way Elizabeth can accept? And will this apology change their relationship to friendship or even love?
The book is very well written by the author Lucy Marin. The main change in this story is that Mr Bennet, after Darcy's insult, finally decides to act like a caring father. He looks after his daughters and guides and corrects their behaviour and he interacts in a caring way with his wife. I like this version of Mr Bennet very much. He finally does his duty and with this he achieves more harmony in the family and a better standing of his family in society. Due to his actions all family members, even Lydia and Mrs Bennet become more likable and sensible. I like this change very much.
At the beginning Darcy is even more grumpy than ever and, for the first pages, I thought I would not be able to like him. Fortunately he changes for the better and when he finally tries to earn Elizabeth's forgiveness he is the same honourable, kind and considerate gentleman Elizabeth comes to admire.
Elizabeth on her part is, thanks to Mr Bennet's attempt of improvement, is less stubborn and clings not so long on her first impression of Darcy. She is therefore at an earlier point able to acknowledge that she may like Darcy and wishes for more than friendship.
I really like the development of Darcy and Elizabeth's relationship as well as the relationship of Jane and Bingley. Due to Mr Bennet's improvement Mrs Bennet is not pressuring her daughters to marry well and they both have therefore the time to get to know their suitors better and fall in love without interference of others. A lovely alteration.
There are the usual villains in this story but their appearance is only of short duration. Due to the changed behaviour of Mr Bennet things unfold otherwise and therefore the villain have not much opportunity to interfere. There is nothing that really kept Darcy and Elizabeth apart, they only take their time to really know each other before committing to one another.
If you like to know how the relationship of Darcy and Elizabeth develops after Mr Bennet insists on an apology of Darcy you should definitely read this excellent book.
I highly recommend it.
I received a free copy of this book via booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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Addition for the audiobook
The audiobook was narrated by the exceptional Stevie Zimmerman. She is one of my favourite narrators. She has the talent to give all characters their unique voices and therefore you are able to identify every person at every point of the story due to their voices. I have already read the book and loved it very much. But the audiobook was, due to Stevie Zimmerman's performance, even better.
November 22, 2024
I loved it!
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. You have made me view the world about me and the people in it with greater clarity, and I shall forever be grateful, especially because it means I have had the chance to know you. When Elizabeth Bennett is insulted by Mr Fitzwilliam Darcy at the Meryton assembly, she is determined to despise him forever. How could she do otherwise, given what an arrogant, rude man he is? She intends to forget about what happened, but she finds it is not so easy when faced with incessant scorn from her neighbours in the weeks following. Darcy is shocked when Mr Bennet confronts and reprimands him about his actions, but afterwards admits it was rather ungentleman-like behaviour. He condescends to apologize, but, startlingly, Elizabeth rebuffs him, claiming he must learn to apologize properly if he truly wants her forgiveness. Darcy is ready to dismiss her, but when Mr Charles Bingley also questions his recent actions, he realises he must reform himself, beginning with making amends to Elizabeth. Elizabeth watches with amazement as she sees not only Mr Darcy but also her own father attempt to ameliorate their connexions to the friends and family about them; still, she keeps her distance from Mr Darcy, stubbornly clinging to her first impression of him, until an unexpected meeting ends with her wondering if there might be more to him than she had supposed, but just how far can an apology go? So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. You have made me view the world about me and the people in it with greater clarity, and I shall forever be grateful, especially because it means I have had the chance to know you. When Elizabeth Bennett is insulted by Mr Fitzwilliam Darcy at the Meryton assembly, she is determined to despise him forever. How could she do otherwise, given what an arrogant, rude man he is? She intends to forget about what happened, but she finds it is not so easy when faced with incessant scorn from her neighbours in the weeks following. Darcy is shocked when Mr Bennet confronts and reprimands him about his actions, but afterwards admits it was rather ungentleman-like behaviour. He condescends to apologize, but, startlingly, Elizabeth rebuffs him, claiming he must learn to apologize properly if he truly wants her forgiveness. Darcy is ready to dismiss her, but when Mr Charles Bingley also questions his recent actions, he realises he must reform himself, beginning with making amends to Elizabeth. Elizabeth watches with amazement as she sees not only Mr Darcy but also her own father attempt to ameliorate their connexions to the friends and family about them; still, she keeps her distance from Mr Darcy, stubbornly clinging to her first impression of him, until an unexpected meeting ends with her wondering if there might be more to him than she had supposed, but just how far can an apology go? So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
December 13, 2024
Light and pleasing
Darcy delivers the infamous insult at the Meryton assembly, and the gossip about it spreads until Elizabeth is hearing about it from almost everyone. The next day, Mr Bennett is upset that his favorite daughter was disparaged, and he has an epiphany that if a wonderful woman like Elizabeth is looked down on by an outsider like Darcy, his other daughters must be way more likely to be abused by boorish men. Mr Bennett confronts Darcy, scolding him for verbally harming Elizabeth, and demands an apology. When Darcy eventually apologizes, Elizabeth doesn't accept it as sincere, and insists that he can only earn her forgiveness by coming to know her better. After Darcy is also called on the carpet by Bingley, he realizes that maybe he needs to improve his behavior.
The most important aspect of this storyline is the change in Mr Bennett. The insult to Elizabeth wakes him up to the fact that his family has dire need of his intervention. He begins to notice how he can improve each of his daughters, and even his wife, with a judicious investment of a little time and attention. Mr Bennett, with Elizabeth's help, is also key to improving Darcy, and they eventually come to respect each other. It's nice when the younger Bennett daughters aren't so cartoonishly bad, and Mrs Bennett is allowed to be somewhat reasonable. This is a swoon worthy Darcy, and a strong and courageous Elizabeth. The romance is lovely.
The book is well written and well edited. This is a low angst, romantic tale, and I recommend it highly.
Darcy delivers the infamous insult at the Meryton assembly, and the gossip about it spreads until Elizabeth is hearing about it from almost everyone. The next day, Mr Bennett is upset that his favorite daughter was disparaged, and he has an epiphany that if a wonderful woman like Elizabeth is looked down on by an outsider like Darcy, his other daughters must be way more likely to be abused by boorish men. Mr Bennett confronts Darcy, scolding him for verbally harming Elizabeth, and demands an apology. When Darcy eventually apologizes, Elizabeth doesn't accept it as sincere, and insists that he can only earn her forgiveness by coming to know her better. After Darcy is also called on the carpet by Bingley, he realizes that maybe he needs to improve his behavior.
The most important aspect of this storyline is the change in Mr Bennett. The insult to Elizabeth wakes him up to the fact that his family has dire need of his intervention. He begins to notice how he can improve each of his daughters, and even his wife, with a judicious investment of a little time and attention. Mr Bennett, with Elizabeth's help, is also key to improving Darcy, and they eventually come to respect each other. It's nice when the younger Bennett daughters aren't so cartoonishly bad, and Mrs Bennett is allowed to be somewhat reasonable. This is a swoon worthy Darcy, and a strong and courageous Elizabeth. The romance is lovely.
The book is well written and well edited. This is a low angst, romantic tale, and I recommend it highly.
November 28, 2024
Mr. Bennet Insists
Fairly close to the original but with turns brought on by Mr. Bennet. He is outraged by Darcy’s comment at the assembly and insists on an apology. Elizabeth refuses to accept a perfunctory apology. Mr. Bennet looks at his family and does not want anyone in the future making derogatory comments about them so he becomes more involved. Unfortunately the first half drags with Darcy and Elizabeth tiptoeing around each other. I felt like saying shut up and kiss her.
Fairly close to the original but with turns brought on by Mr. Bennet. He is outraged by Darcy’s comment at the assembly and insists on an apology. Elizabeth refuses to accept a perfunctory apology. Mr. Bennet looks at his family and does not want anyone in the future making derogatory comments about them so he becomes more involved. Unfortunately the first half drags with Darcy and Elizabeth tiptoeing around each other. I felt like saying shut up and kiss her.
December 17, 2024
Hit the spot!
January 21, 2025
Premise: A cute frothy bit of low-angst fun. Darcy makes the assembly insult and Mr Bennet, instead of finding it amusing, is angry and insulted on behalf of his favorite daughter. He goes to Darcy and demands an apology. Darcy makes a weak-ass snobby attempt, which Elizabeth rebuffs and takes him to task over. Then even Bingley calls him out on his dickish behavior, and it finally sinks in. While Darcy is processing this Hunsford-lite epiphany and making efforts to improve himself, Mr Bennet also has a wakeup call and decides he needs to be less indolent and more involved with his family. Everyone improves!
What I liked: This was very sweet and amusing with some good set-downs, which I always enjoy. A warm hug of a story.
Characterization: Improved Mr Bennet. Bingley stands up to his sisters a bit more.
Spice level: Very mild. Some kisses.
Any non-canon parings: Nope, although
Other notes or issues: Very low-angst. If you're expecting some big 80% dark moment, it doesn't happen. Just decent kind people falling in love after a slightly rocky start.
What I liked: This was very sweet and amusing with some good set-downs, which I always enjoy. A warm hug of a story.
Characterization: Improved Mr Bennet. Bingley stands up to his sisters a bit more.
Spice level: Very mild. Some kisses.
Any non-canon parings: Nope, although
Other notes or issues: Very low-angst. If you're expecting some big 80% dark moment, it doesn't happen. Just decent kind people falling in love after a slightly rocky start.
November 28, 2024
Until the last chapter, it was firm 4*. But that last chapter is there, therefore it is 3,5*
November 13, 2024
My only complaint is that Mr Bennett’s name was Rupert. Lovely story.
February 26, 2025
First off: This is one of those P&P variations that I would consider comfort reading. One worth re-reading several times.
There is no heavy angst, no melodrama, no swashbuckling adventures. A simple feel-good story you can sit down to read with a cup of hot drink of your choice.
I feel like this is important to mention to combat some of the unwarranted negative reviews of this book. I certainly don't feel like any part of it drags or that the introspection was too much.
Add to it the fact that when I think of Lucy Marin, Being Mrs Darcy is the first book that comes to my mind. And I hate to say this, but well-written though it might be, that book was far too heavy on the angst and drama for me, far too heavy on familial and marital cruelty, and I was not at all a fan of how the situation was resolved - since I adore happy endings, and dislike toxic family dynamics. So it feels like there needs to be an emphasis how unlike that one this book is.
The premise is simple: Darcy's assembly insult - which, admirably, the narrative doesn't try to soften like we usually see - is heard by more than Lizzy, and spread around the assembly rooms and later Meryton. It is, after all, prime gossip, especially for those few who don't like the Bennets. When Mr Bennet hears of it, he is incensed and the very next day goes to Netherfield to give Darcy a set-down, which Darcy doesn't really take seriously. Until first, Elizabeth dismisses his half-hearted perfunctory apology, and second, Bingley takes him to task because Darcy's behaviour damages Bingley's own reputation. All this forces Darcy to think about his recent behaviour.
Meanwhile, Mr Bennet has had an epiphany: If even his most admirable daughter is insulted and dismissed like that, what does that mean for his other daughters? He realises how much he has eschewed his duties as paterfamilias, and resolves to change. And considering how very little effort on his side was necessary to improve his wife and daughters, it just highlights how much he was previously neglectful. But no matter, better late than too late.
What this means is that Mr Bennet at first forbids Elizabeth from talking to Darcy, and she herself is more than willing to avoid him. At first.
Naturally Darcy does have his own epiphany, regret, and determination to change. And when he does, he seeks out Elizabeth, and a friendship develops.
The HEA for both couples - Jane/Bingley, Elizabeth/Darcy is guaranteed.
The plot is far from what we're used to. There is no Jane falling sick, no Mr Collins visit, no Darcy and the Bingley sisters being able to persuade Bingley away from Jane, no Wickham being able to dupe Elizabeth, no elopement, no Kent visit, no absconding after the Netherfield ball. Instead we have a Bingley with a firm spine, a Caroline and Louisa who, while mean girls, aren't over the top crazy, a Mrs Bennet who is merely silly, not a bad person, a Lydia, Kitty, and Mary who *can* be easily reformed, and a Darcy who neither denies his growing feelings nor insults Lizzy's family to her face. In point of fact, he has several opportunities to defend the Bennets against malicious parties.
There *is* a Lady Catherine confrontation - but a very original and fun one. A scene which alone is reason enough to read this book, so I shall not spoil it.
So in essence: If you want a lot of conflict and drama, this book is not for you, it might feel boring. But if you want a comfort reading for a rainy day to read sitting cosy in front of the window with a hot drink? Look no further.
There is no heavy angst, no melodrama, no swashbuckling adventures. A simple feel-good story you can sit down to read with a cup of hot drink of your choice.
I feel like this is important to mention to combat some of the unwarranted negative reviews of this book. I certainly don't feel like any part of it drags or that the introspection was too much.
Add to it the fact that when I think of Lucy Marin, Being Mrs Darcy is the first book that comes to my mind. And I hate to say this, but well-written though it might be, that book was far too heavy on the angst and drama for me, far too heavy on familial and marital cruelty, and I was not at all a fan of how the situation was resolved - since I adore happy endings, and dislike toxic family dynamics. So it feels like there needs to be an emphasis how unlike that one this book is.
The premise is simple: Darcy's assembly insult - which, admirably, the narrative doesn't try to soften like we usually see - is heard by more than Lizzy, and spread around the assembly rooms and later Meryton. It is, after all, prime gossip, especially for those few who don't like the Bennets. When Mr Bennet hears of it, he is incensed and the very next day goes to Netherfield to give Darcy a set-down, which Darcy doesn't really take seriously. Until first, Elizabeth dismisses his half-hearted perfunctory apology, and second, Bingley takes him to task because Darcy's behaviour damages Bingley's own reputation. All this forces Darcy to think about his recent behaviour.
Meanwhile, Mr Bennet has had an epiphany: If even his most admirable daughter is insulted and dismissed like that, what does that mean for his other daughters? He realises how much he has eschewed his duties as paterfamilias, and resolves to change. And considering how very little effort on his side was necessary to improve his wife and daughters, it just highlights how much he was previously neglectful. But no matter, better late than too late.
What this means is that Mr Bennet at first forbids Elizabeth from talking to Darcy, and she herself is more than willing to avoid him. At first.
Naturally Darcy does have his own epiphany, regret, and determination to change. And when he does, he seeks out Elizabeth, and a friendship develops.
The HEA for both couples - Jane/Bingley, Elizabeth/Darcy is guaranteed.
The plot is far from what we're used to. There is no Jane falling sick, no Mr Collins visit, no Darcy and the Bingley sisters being able to persuade Bingley away from Jane, no Wickham being able to dupe Elizabeth, no elopement, no Kent visit, no absconding after the Netherfield ball. Instead we have a Bingley with a firm spine, a Caroline and Louisa who, while mean girls, aren't over the top crazy, a Mrs Bennet who is merely silly, not a bad person, a Lydia, Kitty, and Mary who *can* be easily reformed, and a Darcy who neither denies his growing feelings nor insults Lizzy's family to her face. In point of fact, he has several opportunities to defend the Bennets against malicious parties.
There *is* a Lady Catherine confrontation - but a very original and fun one. A scene which alone is reason enough to read this book, so I shall not spoil it.
So in essence: If you want a lot of conflict and drama, this book is not for you, it might feel boring. But if you want a comfort reading for a rainy day to read sitting cosy in front of the window with a hot drink? Look no further.
November 25, 2024
This was an enjoyable read. It was an interesting take on Darcy's insult and the way things unfolded due to that insult.
In this story, Elizabeth was not the only one to overhear Darcy's insult of her at the Meryton assembly and it creates quite the fodder for gossip not only at the assembly but in the days following. Elizabeth does not appreciate being the topic of so much gossip. Mr. Bennet also takes a different stand on the situation and finds that he, too, was offended by Darcy's careless and hurtful remarks about his favorite daughter and pays Darcy a visit to tell him so. Mr. Bennet's different reaction is another thread of the story. His reaction to Darcy's insult is a catalyst for some reflection and a little more attention to his family and how they are perceived by others. It creates some opportunities for some positive changes.
I enjoyed the development of the relationship between Darcy and Elizabeth. The change in their feelings was slow and based on many interactions over several meetings. They were both a little stubborn in their opinions in the beginning, but also willing, with time and opportunity, to recognize good qualities in each other and slowly get to know each other and their true selves.
This book was well written and well paced. It kept my interest and was quite enjoyable. I admire this author, but sometimes her books can get painfully angsty. This book was lighter without too much angst and I really enjoyed it. My only complaint was a scene at the climax of the book that had Darcy revealing way too much in a very public way. This is always somethings that makes me cringe a little because in my mind, Darcy is much too private of a person to ever behave in such a manner, but that's really my only criticism. This was a pleasant read that I think any JAFF fan would enjoy.
In this story, Elizabeth was not the only one to overhear Darcy's insult of her at the Meryton assembly and it creates quite the fodder for gossip not only at the assembly but in the days following. Elizabeth does not appreciate being the topic of so much gossip. Mr. Bennet also takes a different stand on the situation and finds that he, too, was offended by Darcy's careless and hurtful remarks about his favorite daughter and pays Darcy a visit to tell him so. Mr. Bennet's different reaction is another thread of the story. His reaction to Darcy's insult is a catalyst for some reflection and a little more attention to his family and how they are perceived by others. It creates some opportunities for some positive changes.
I enjoyed the development of the relationship between Darcy and Elizabeth. The change in their feelings was slow and based on many interactions over several meetings. They were both a little stubborn in their opinions in the beginning, but also willing, with time and opportunity, to recognize good qualities in each other and slowly get to know each other and their true selves.
This book was well written and well paced. It kept my interest and was quite enjoyable. I admire this author, but sometimes her books can get painfully angsty. This book was lighter without too much angst and I really enjoyed it. My only complaint was a scene at the climax of the book that had Darcy revealing way too much in a very public way. This is always somethings that makes me cringe a little because in my mind, Darcy is much too private of a person to ever behave in such a manner, but that's really my only criticism. This was a pleasant read that I think any JAFF fan would enjoy.
November 21, 2024
In the world of Jane Austen variations, Lucy Marin has always been one of my favorites. So, I was excited when I heard that she was coming out with a new book that takes us on the journey of what might’ve happened if Darcy got called out early and resoundingly for his very rude comments after the Meryton assembly!
Marin still gives us a lot of the same initial enemies to lovers tension that Austen does in her original but because Darcy is taken to task by none other than our favorite papa, Mr. Bennet, Darcy comes to his moments of self awareness and and Elizabeth actually start to much earlier than the original and see the true character of each other.
What I loved most about this book was having a very different perspective on Mr. Bennet and how Marin helps us imagine what it would’ve been like if he had stepped up to be more engaged with his family and to defend his favorite daughter! I adored the way that he grew in his role as a father and husband in this book. While initially, he and Darcy are at odds, it was so endearing to see him and Darcy come to really appreciate and understand one another, particualry because they both really care and love Elisabeth. The other character who I think got a nice glow up, was our favorite sunshine resident of Netherfield, Mr. Bingley. It was great to see Bingley stand up to Darcy and call. him out on his actions.
If you love the how Darcy undergoes process to become a better man but wish we'd had an opportunity to see more of that journey and to see how it may have been altered if he and Elizabeth were able to be more candid with each other from the start, then definitely check out this sweet read from Marin!
Marin still gives us a lot of the same initial enemies to lovers tension that Austen does in her original but because Darcy is taken to task by none other than our favorite papa, Mr. Bennet, Darcy comes to his moments of self awareness and and Elizabeth actually start to much earlier than the original and see the true character of each other.
What I loved most about this book was having a very different perspective on Mr. Bennet and how Marin helps us imagine what it would’ve been like if he had stepped up to be more engaged with his family and to defend his favorite daughter! I adored the way that he grew in his role as a father and husband in this book. While initially, he and Darcy are at odds, it was so endearing to see him and Darcy come to really appreciate and understand one another, particualry because they both really care and love Elisabeth. The other character who I think got a nice glow up, was our favorite sunshine resident of Netherfield, Mr. Bingley. It was great to see Bingley stand up to Darcy and call. him out on his actions.
If you love the how Darcy undergoes process to become a better man but wish we'd had an opportunity to see more of that journey and to see how it may have been altered if he and Elizabeth were able to be more candid with each other from the start, then definitely check out this sweet read from Marin!
November 25, 2024
There are a number of long reviews of this story so I will attempt to be short.
The title does hint that there is more to an apology than just saying the words. That is how Darcy handles his apology to Elizabeth after his insult at the Assembly...and after Mr. Bennet confronts him.
I have to say that I liked the development of Mr. Bennet in this story. Learning of this insult of his favorite daughter he takes a look at his role and makes some changes. But he also demands that none of his family speak to Darcy. Nor is Darcy allowed to visit in their home. So we read of changes changes with Mr. Bennet finally taking on his responsibilities.
Bingley has a backbone in this tale! His motive in leasing an estate in Hertfordshire is endearing. He stands up to his sisters and confronts Darcy about his behavior.
When Darcy does apologize Elizabeth REFUSES to accept that saying it was not sincere. So it is that Darcy decides to get to know Elizabeth better so that the next apology will be more because he knows her, respects her and cares about how she is treated.
Thus much of the stories has ODC meeting, accidently at first and then more with expecting to find each other out and about in nature. A dear little dog plays a role in bringing them together.
Lady Catherine's appearance near the end seemed more a need to include her in the story in some way but we heard nothing of her before that point.
I enjoyed this story. For me there was no angst and no surprises.
The title does hint that there is more to an apology than just saying the words. That is how Darcy handles his apology to Elizabeth after his insult at the Assembly...and after Mr. Bennet confronts him.
I have to say that I liked the development of Mr. Bennet in this story. Learning of this insult of his favorite daughter he takes a look at his role and makes some changes. But he also demands that none of his family speak to Darcy. Nor is Darcy allowed to visit in their home. So we read of changes changes with Mr. Bennet finally taking on his responsibilities.
Bingley has a backbone in this tale! His motive in leasing an estate in Hertfordshire is endearing. He stands up to his sisters and confronts Darcy about his behavior.
When Darcy does apologize Elizabeth REFUSES to accept that saying it was not sincere. So it is that Darcy decides to get to know Elizabeth better so that the next apology will be more because he knows her, respects her and cares about how she is treated.
Thus much of the stories has ODC meeting, accidently at first and then more with expecting to find each other out and about in nature. A dear little dog plays a role in bringing them together.
Lady Catherine's appearance near the end seemed more a need to include her in the story in some way but we heard nothing of her before that point.
I enjoyed this story. For me there was no angst and no surprises.
July 27, 2025
A sentimental 4.5 rating :) This was a lovely, low/no angst retelling. The usual 3rd person/past tense, but we get more more into the minds of several characters; Mr. Bennet comes off quite well in this one. The title tie-in ... an apology is central to the variation here (as Mr. Bennet demands one, Darcy offers one, Elizabeth laughingly doesn't accept as she feels it isn't sincere). Lady Catherine as (almost) always is horrible.
Lovely cover image. Audio narrated by Stevie Zimmerman. Text included in KU, audio in AudiblePlus.
For my own personal memory ... SPOILERS Not a real epilogue, but Elizabeth's "vision" of the future was fun at the end.
Got in "curricle" ... ;)
Lovely cover image. Audio narrated by Stevie Zimmerman. Text included in KU, audio in AudiblePlus.
For my own personal memory ... SPOILERS Not a real epilogue, but Elizabeth's "vision" of the future was fun at the end.
Got in "curricle" ... ;)
September 1, 2025
AUDIOBOOK REVIEW
I had not previously read the print version, and I requested this audiobook after winning a Quills and Quartos trivia game since I had not. I love Lucy Marin's variations, and I knew I would never be unhappy with a narration by Stevie Zimmerman. The trend continued with this wonderful story.
This is a "what if" story... what if Mr. Darcy was held to account for his terrible insult at the assembly by Mr. Bennet? What I loved as a bonus is that this didn't just set off a change in Darcy, but Mr. Bennet as well. The Bennet family starts to slowly reform (not without issues) under Mr. Bennet's guidance, thinking if a man of consequence would insult his worthiest daughter, then what could possibly be said about his silly ones? Or his wife?
Everyone is called to account for their behavior and even Mr. Bingley helped to keep his sisters in better alignment. Because the apology required of him isn't an easy one to make or even accepted at first, Darcy has to overcome a lot to get to the point of knowing Elizabeth. In fact, Mr. Bennet tells Elizabeth to stay away from him, which she eventually defies, and their sweet romance begins.
It's because Darcy genuinely knows what he's got that he delivers a proposal worthy of a woman being pleased. It's precious! This relatively low-angst variation was a pleasure to listen to.
I had not previously read the print version, and I requested this audiobook after winning a Quills and Quartos trivia game since I had not. I love Lucy Marin's variations, and I knew I would never be unhappy with a narration by Stevie Zimmerman. The trend continued with this wonderful story.
This is a "what if" story... what if Mr. Darcy was held to account for his terrible insult at the assembly by Mr. Bennet? What I loved as a bonus is that this didn't just set off a change in Darcy, but Mr. Bennet as well. The Bennet family starts to slowly reform (not without issues) under Mr. Bennet's guidance, thinking if a man of consequence would insult his worthiest daughter, then what could possibly be said about his silly ones? Or his wife?
Everyone is called to account for their behavior and even Mr. Bingley helped to keep his sisters in better alignment. Because the apology required of him isn't an easy one to make or even accepted at first, Darcy has to overcome a lot to get to the point of knowing Elizabeth. In fact, Mr. Bennet tells Elizabeth to stay away from him, which she eventually defies, and their sweet romance begins.
It's because Darcy genuinely knows what he's got that he delivers a proposal worthy of a woman being pleased. It's precious! This relatively low-angst variation was a pleasure to listen to.
March 30, 2025
The premise is that Mr Bennet takes his role as a parent more seriously in general following Darcy's insult at the assembly. The insult overall is more substantial in its effect, now being a whole gossip topic and something Mr B won't let go. This makes it harder for D and E to talk early but they eventually get really close. Mr B endeavors to do better with his wife and younger daughters, while Darcy tries to improve his manners and perspective early. Unlike others, I didn't find this book too lacking in conflict--it mostly comes early and resolves early, true, but I thought the marysue-ification of the characters as they change for the better was more of an issue. In JAFF, I think Darcy getting over himself usually happens too quickly and this definitely follows that trend. Mr B and E are pretty humorless early on and kind of get part of their personalities chopped off for plot, even if it returns later when Darcy is cool with them. It just felt like the Mr Bennet's change central to this story's premise was pretty out of nowhere. Still, this is in my reread folder, as it's entertaining and quality throughout. The conflicts are more internal than external which I liked for a change. I'm so sick of crazy Wickham and Caroline drama. This one basically writes Wickham out of the plot which I really liked.
November 13, 2024
The salvation of Mr Bennet. Maybe also the salvation of Darcy. Prpobably even the salvation of Wickham. This is a story that makes all what we as reader of Pride and Prejudice hoped come true.
Can Mr Bennet be a more attentive father?
Can Mrs Bennet be more aware of the decorum and etiquette of the society?
Can Darcy be quicker to realise his heart?
Can Darcy act more upon the situation regarding Wickham in Meryton?
Can Elizabeth be more understanding instead of being only witty?
Can Lydia and Kitty be less silly?
You name it, Ms Marin answers.
(Bingley was given a connection to Hertfordshire, therefore his steadfast and stick-to-the-place does not count as his atonement! XD
However, as I like most of the author’s works. This one drags a bit although everything happened in a few weeks of time. The resolution of Mr Bennet and the chagrin felt by Darcy are both too affected and contrived.
But if you like the theme of from enemies to friends, and always enjoy a lot of conversation between Elizabeth and Darcy, this is the book for you.
Can Mr Bennet be a more attentive father?
Can Mrs Bennet be more aware of the decorum and etiquette of the society?
Can Darcy be quicker to realise his heart?
Can Darcy act more upon the situation regarding Wickham in Meryton?
Can Elizabeth be more understanding instead of being only witty?
Can Lydia and Kitty be less silly?
You name it, Ms Marin answers.
(Bingley was given a connection to Hertfordshire, therefore his steadfast and stick-to-the-place does not count as his atonement! XD
However, as I like most of the author’s works. This one drags a bit although everything happened in a few weeks of time. The resolution of Mr Bennet and the chagrin felt by Darcy are both too affected and contrived.
But if you like the theme of from enemies to friends, and always enjoy a lot of conversation between Elizabeth and Darcy, this is the book for you.
November 26, 2024
This novel is awesome. Mr. Darcy sticks his foot in his mouth, with his comment at the Meryton Assembly. But this time Mr. Bennet intervenes and demands for Mr. Darcy apologize to Lizzy for this comment.
Lizzy overhears as usual and wants to dislike him forever. She greatly dislikes that her father became involved. Lizzy is determined not to accept any apologies from Mr. Darcy. She tells Mr. Darcy that she will not accept any apology that is not intentional. But this time the neighbors give her a hard time. Mr. Darcy has much to make up for to Lizzy, Mr. Bennet, and the neighbors.
I liked this Mr. Bingley. He is more intentional with others especially his sisters and Mr. Darcy. He surprised me with his actions.
This novel can be read in a couple of afternoons with several cups of tea.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Lizzy overhears as usual and wants to dislike him forever. She greatly dislikes that her father became involved. Lizzy is determined not to accept any apologies from Mr. Darcy. She tells Mr. Darcy that she will not accept any apology that is not intentional. But this time the neighbors give her a hard time. Mr. Darcy has much to make up for to Lizzy, Mr. Bennet, and the neighbors.
I liked this Mr. Bingley. He is more intentional with others especially his sisters and Mr. Darcy. He surprised me with his actions.
This novel can be read in a couple of afternoons with several cups of tea.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
February 26, 2025
Lucy Marin's variations either are a hit or a miss as far as I am concerned. This variation clearly is a miss. I couldn't finish it. Darcy is truly despicable at the beginning. It would have been ok if the plot had not gradually lost its steam after Mr Bennet's anger (good idea). Nothing really happens after that and I got bored. This Mr Darcy is not interesting enough for me to be able to get through pages and pages of introspection. Am I really disagreeable? Or just misunderstood? 🙄 Is he really disagreeable or just troubled by who knows what 🙄🙄. Not for me. I prefer to read "Being Mrs Darcy" (by the same author) again : that is my idea of good writing, as Mrs Bennet would say (P&P 1995). I am sure that many readers will like this variation though. I have probably read too many and become a bit blasé!
April 30, 2025
3.5 stars
It has been a while since I read a P&P variation. I heard about this before it was released and was intrigued with the premise. I think I was nervous about it so I checked it out on KU after it was released and it sat there for about 4 months. However, I enjoyed this story. The main conflict is the comment at the assembly and the confrontation from Mr. Bennet reprimanding Mr. Darcy for the behavior and suggesting he apologize to Elizabeth. Which was a relief for me because I kept waiting for the next ball to drop, especially when Wickham showed up.
I will say that the struggle that Darcy is known for in the OG story was not something in this one. The struggle he goes trhough has to do with his behavior at the assembly and correting it (if he will) but he seems more self aware in matters of duty and the heart.
It has been a while since I read a P&P variation. I heard about this before it was released and was intrigued with the premise. I think I was nervous about it so I checked it out on KU after it was released and it sat there for about 4 months. However, I enjoyed this story. The main conflict is the comment at the assembly and the confrontation from Mr. Bennet reprimanding Mr. Darcy for the behavior and suggesting he apologize to Elizabeth. Which was a relief for me because I kept waiting for the next ball to drop, especially when Wickham showed up.
I will say that the struggle that Darcy is known for in the OG story was not something in this one. The struggle he goes trhough has to do with his behavior at the assembly and correting it (if he will) but he seems more self aware in matters of duty and the heart.
November 21, 2024
Darcy's insult at the Meryton assembly becomes the catalyst for not only his own soul searching, but that of Mr. Bennet, who begins to realize that his guidance of his daughters is sorely lacking. Both Bingley and Mr. Bennet give him a much needed dressing down. I appreciated the slow and realistic evolution of Darcy's understanding of his own behavior, and the gradual improvement of Elizabeth's impression of him.
There's no real angst here, or dilemma, or journey to take, or mystery to solve. Just a slow transformation, beneficial to all...except maybe to Lady Catherine. Well-written and appealing, when I didn't want to read about an excess of suffering. 4.5 stars
There's no real angst here, or dilemma, or journey to take, or mystery to solve. Just a slow transformation, beneficial to all...except maybe to Lady Catherine. Well-written and appealing, when I didn't want to read about an excess of suffering. 4.5 stars
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