The start was so weird when his first thoughts were basically that he found his mate. This is a contemporary romance WHY is this man saying she's the reason he's alive after 10 seconds of knowing her and 5 seconds of kissing? I felt like I was going insane because she was equally as feral. Like wdym you would give up your virginity in an ally full of trash to a man you know for less than five minutes while there are threats to your life everywhere. This woman couldn't care less about her safety, it was a tad concerning. She really needed to get laid if THIS was the reaction to a kiss from a stranger.
The writing was so confusing because it constantly changed between a werewolf-fantasy, frat boy vibes and deep emotional awereness no one in a book like this should have. Nothing felt natural or not forced. It was so uncomfortable to read.
His feeling of self importance was so off putting right from the start. The author outdid herself with trying to set the scene and just mentioned his cv a couple hundred times to make sure we know he's in the army and he can fight. Okay? He's a bodyguard like sorry but keeping her safe literally his job description.
The "reveal" that he likes to be dominant was also so glaringly obvious from the start. It was so disappointing to see the cliché come to life. You mean to tell me the dude who got off on giving orders all his life wants to boss women around as well? Shocking. I don't know if it was his off putting persona and his conufsing obssession with her that he had zero reason for whatsoever or just the fact that i'm over the trope but calling her a "spoiled princess" and wanting to be the boss of her was the opposite of hot. They seemed to be a match made in hell tho because everytime he was near her (so always) she was ready to hump his leg like a dog in heat.
I'm all for empowering women and expressing their sexuality but my girl was so desperate it was just weird. Because literally why.
I nearly gagged when she called him alpha male. Instead of doing the only reasonable thing since he followed her when they met (talk about stalker), which would be running for the hills and never look back, she continued to sing his praises. "A real man" sureeee
It was concerning how often he felt the need to say he "never felt this way before". At this point I'm convinced he just lacked proper enrichment acitvities as a baby. Each time he said it another part of my soul withered away. It was so repetitive I wanted to bang my head against a wall.
She was so delusional, as welll, I have no idea why she felt what can only be described as instant love towards this man. He was creepy when he followed her, he was dumb when he didn't recognize her, he was unprofessional when he got a boner every other minute and he was rude when he diminsihed her just because he didn't like hearing the truth. I would be sorry for her to be stuck with that man but she was as unlikeable as he in her own way so they truly were a match made in an ally full of trash.
On top of it all, it's always SO romantic when they say "a few seconds more and they wouldn't have been able to stop". Not creepy or concerning at all. Like what the fuck. It's such a weird way of saying they are attracted like why bring rape talk into this. I sure hope he'll be able to stop any given time lol.
》This woman is so willful, I have a good mind to spank her… Only, I don’t dare.《
He better not??? Cast aside that they met a day prior and he doesn't know her, she is literally the princes and his employer lol
The second they tried to have a seemingful deeper conversation that didn't sound like I have to reduce my brain cells in half to listen they got horny and instead eye-fucked the hell out of each other. It was exhausting.
Every single time they opened their mouth the words that came out were either atrocious, so corny it should be a torture technique or such a random attempt to sound smart it was truly a wild ride.
The threats were lowkey so funny tho. They became better in the end when they tried to shoot her and stuff but the beginning was so unserious.
》“I agree. Understanding the severity of the threat you’re under will help you understand why I need to implement certain security protocols.” He pulls out his phone, swipes the screen, and hands it to me. I survey the picture open on the screen. It’s a printout which simply states: Princess Aurelia, you will die.《
That's some bullshit ass threat. Literally any teenager could've written that. I just expected something more ... creepy? I don't know but this was hilarious.
An another note...it was kinda crazy that he was happy his wife died. I understand not loving her and wanting to leave her but being happy that a fully formed person who proctected people the same way he did died during said task is just evil. He can feel relief he's no longer married but not even being a little sad about her death after being married is insane. She was a human being and she deserves to be viewed as more than just baggage of his past.
Some stuff in this book also made even less sense than the rest.
》I approach him, eying the machine and the gorgeous man astride it with suspicion. “How did you guess—”
“That you’ve never been on a bike before but have always wanted to?” He grins, looking all too pleased with himself. “Another lucky guess?”
He scans my features. “You wanted to get ice cream from a fast-food chain when you could have asked for one from any gourmet restaurant or brand, but you didn’t.”《
Literally nothing in this sentence could let anyone belief that she wanted to ride a bike... It felt like the author tried to prove they have a connection by letting him literally read her mind out of nowhere.
Another few highlights of this book:
》We might be on bikes, but he’s keeping his security formation. I can’t help but be impressed. He’s not going to compromise my safety, even now.《 She is literally on a bike out in the open in public. Some would say her safety is already compromised.
》And despite the danger of the situation, my body was drawn to hers. I was painfully hard, and my cock insisted on nestling happily between her thighs.《 Meanwhile there was someone SHOOTING at her. They were so desperate it's almost sad.
》I might be royalty, but he’s the king of all he surveys. He's an alpha male used to getting his way. An apex beast, at the top of the food chain.《 ew.
》I wore him down. I’m finally going to get my way. He’s going to make me submit to him. To someone who’s earned the right to be my master.《 This was truly unhinged.