IOMG, this story was good and so intense! MarKila found love with her brother's best friend, Derrick. Her brother Marcus, acted a complete fool, because his sister was off limits to his friend. And his sister went against his demands and orders. Here she was, a 28 yr old woman, and he treated her like she was 12 and his daughter.
This got messy! MarKila ends up pregnant and she and Derrick had already established how they felt. Her brother disowns her, refers to her as a whore, has Derrick arrested, keeps her from their family, and locks her out of her account he sets up. He was a complete jerk until the end.
It was hard for her to see how her brother treated her and along with her sister-in-law, who set up the blind date.
Marcus had some skeletons of his own that Derrick didn't spill but could have, and I wished he had. Was there something else that happened to make the brother this possessive? I'm just asking.
Perfectly written story.