Oh man did I want to love this.
I will say a HUGE caveat that this review may be revised after publishing, because I read an early proof and I imagine it will be significantly edited to iron out some of the mistakes/problems in the writing, so I'm reviewing under that assumption. If it's not I will likely be more scathing. Also seriously hoping the cover gets changed or redrawn because it may be the worst cover I have ever seen.
This is billed as a gay romance/haunted house, which is a tall order that it doesn't quite live up to. As is often the case with this kind of description, there's really 2 stories here, and unfortunately the one I ended up really wanting to read was definitely secondary. The two parts also weren't woven in well at all - I almost felt like the haunted house section should have been told from the perspective of an entirely different character or dropped altogether, despite the fact that was by far the thread I was most interested in. At the least it either needs fleshing out or removed from any promotional materials.
The romance I had problems with. It was cute, and people who read a lot of teen gay romance will love it! However, it reads like fan fiction - in fact, most of the book does. This isn't necessarily bad - people love fan fiction - but the point of fan fiction is to flesh out stuff from characters you like that you don't see in the original media representations, due to queer baiting, exploration of characters/plot points/fan theories/in-world logic, or just wanting some warm fuzzies (or hot and heavies) for characters. It inherently fits around already created media. This felt like 3/4 of a book, and specifically not all of a romance. The plot points between the two leads were incredibly artificially contrived, from the first meetings to the inevitable rift (which felt ridiculously contrived even by the standards of actual fanfic). It felt like we were missing the actual plot. If you're used to reading fanfic or romance or similar media I actually think this will be fine - once you know you have to take the development of the relationships with a pinch of salt and create them in your head, you can, and then it's all dandy. The problem is that books aren't traditionally a collaborative media in this way (in fact most media isn't.) Even with nuanced, subtle storytelling - which to be clear, this is not - the actual story is normally laid out on the page in such a way that it leads you through instead of showing you quick snapshots of cute!-pain!-cute! This fails to do that and it would take pretty much a rewrite of the entire book to build that narrative. If you are familiar with those tropes, again, you can build it in your head, but you have to want to. It's a book where you already need to have decided to be invested going in, because you aren't going to get that from the text itself, which is all shallow tropes skipping around - again, this may be perfect for a specific type of reader.
The other problem I have with this is less a problem than a taste clash. This is yet another teen book about a romance between teenage boys written by an adult woman (from what I can tell). The book world seems to have decided not to question this particular trope, or to consider #ownvoices important for gay men, which is a broader issue not related to this book; but what is related is how the romance is written. There is a specific feel to this book that is the same as most other teen m/m romances written by women, one which I didn't really clock until reading more m/m romances written by men attracted to men. If you know, you know is the case with this - either it bothers you and you know or it doesn't and you'll enjoy this. For me, it felt a little fake, a little saccharine, a little like puppets, and a little like it needed someone who's queer to marry up a couple of the threads that rang a little hollow.
Otherwise, it's fine. It's not a deep or meaningful book but it isn't supposed to be. If I'd picked it up off the shelf I probably would have DNFed it pretty early but by the time I'd got to the middle I'd accepted it was a bit of a build-your-own book and by the end I was genuinely enjoying myself, so it definitely earned its 2* - it's just a shame I felt myself have to actively slip back into my teenage fanfic reading headspace to do so.