The second book in the ‘Middle Falls Time Travel’ series and I am continuing to enjoy it. I started in at the fifth book of the series and, whilst they can all be read as singular books, out of order, I am enjoying reading the novels in sequence. Inmon does not disappoint once again and this was a book that I enjoyed, leaving me keen to read the third one available.
This instalment focuses on the very evil Michael Hollister. Readers are introduced to his character in the previous story, and have a solid foundation of hating him. He really is truly evil! However, Inmon explores the idea of being given a second chance and literally redeeming oneself for previous actions. This is a delightful moral to the story and I believe that the idea of eventual forgiveness creates a positive spin to what begins as a very dark story. And when I say ‘dark’, I mean, extremely dark and bleak. The first few chapters are horrific and I was very surprised to see this total abandonment of what I consider quite a light-hearted read from Inmon. Readers see a black side to Inmon’s writing and the atmosphere created is terrifying. I actually worried that I would not enjoy this book as much because of this morbid opening, but am relieved that I persevered.
Hollister, reincarnated as his eight year-old self, is frustrated with his life and those around him. He barely remembers his childhood yet, his angry, negative thoughts from his previous life still continue to exist within. When he is eventually sent away to a military camp, this marks the shift in Hollister’s attitude and we gradually witness his redemption over many years. Over time, it becomes apparent how Hollister came to behave in the way he did in the previous book and, whilst it is no excuse for this evil attitude, this began to encourage feelings of sympathy and warmth towards the character, particularly as it was clear he was beginning to find happiness at last.
Inmon provides readers with even more of an insight into the “science” of these reincarnations. I relished in these parts of the story because it provided more answers. True, there are still plenty of ambiguities and questions; I hope these are revealed in the next book. However, this adds to the depth of the story and is what saves the series from becoming too repetitive. Coupled with this, is the presence of characters from previous books. Whilst I have yet to encounter Veronica, I delighted in seeing these characters “pass by” in the narrative. It makes all the stories inter-connect and, as the instalments increase, it will be interesting to see if they all continue to appear in the future stories.
I really appreciated the historical references made to global history, as Hollister grows up. Again, this roots the narrative in a particular time period and this made it even more vivid to imagine. Coupled with the futuristic science behind those watching Hollister, I liked the juxtaposition created between the two worlds.
The only element that I can really criticise about this narrative is that fact that whilst Hollister is supposed to be a small, eight year-old boy, it did not seem realistic at all. I failed to imagine this, instead picturing Hollister as around nineteen/twenty years old – more of a young adult than an innocent, lost little boy. I appreciate that he has been reborn and carries with him his mature, “previous life” thoughts, but I do not feel Inmon successfully portrayed this younger character, nor his military brothers around him. True, the boys are forced to grow up at the military camp, but I still felt that there was something missing.
Despite this criticism, I really enjoyed reading this book and I looking forward to discovering the next one in the series. I will see if I can spot other characters once more and it will be interesting to see if the writer can continue making this an original story each time.
I received a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.