2.5?
Sometimes I have irrational dislikes of authors, even if I haven’t read their books, Isobel Carmody is one of them. The fact that the last book in the Obernewtyn Chronicles is over 1000 pages, and the general consensus is that it is pretty wafty and not worth the wait put me off her books, sorry. But of course when she writes a new book with a nice-ish cover, it ends up on the CBCA shortlist.
Overall, it wasn’t completely and utterly terrible. But nothing really happened, it was full of waft, Isobel Carmody clearly does not know how to write show not tell, and too many things were way over explained.
It was a good concept, I haven’t read too much dystopian, but this was a pretty cool and unique idea, the execution just fell a little flat. I also liked how it wasn’t so very dystopian, there was still some freedom, and there was not complete and utter constant surveillance. The fact that every aspect of their lives was not being controlled kind of made it even more scary and realistic, and relevant. The message of fear being a powerful motivator to do nothing and let others take control is certainly something to think about, and very relevant to the current state of the world.
Now all the bad things, and there are a lot. As far as MCs go, Will didn’t entirely suck, but it did not feel like he was 17. He had a good heart and was curious etc etc, but he overthought everything! To the point of insanity! It was slightly ridiculous! And I did not like at all how him and Ender got together, why could they not just have been friends!? There was no chemistry at all between them, it was so basic and forced and definitely put in there just for the sake of it. Oh why could they not just have been friends? Will’s reactions to his discovery of these feelings was also kind of odd, no one cares that much about his ‘hormones’. Ender was fine. Both her and Will were definitely a bit more than two-dimensional charters, but they were still rather basic. I don’t know really why, but I liked Klare, and I think she got a bit of the short send of the stick, she had a bit of a redemption but I think she deserved more. And then I didn’t really like Padraig, good on him for supporting Will and being there for him and obviously he’s been through a bit too but the drinking and the sexism were literally just glossed over, did that not deserve some of the page time that instead went to Will overthinking some early morning mist?
The blatant-in-you-face pop culture references (of which there were many) were not appreciated. I like a few, when they are clever, but not this many. It just got so annoying. It felt like Carmody was trying to be cool, but she way over did it.
It was also very anti-government, which was fine. But back to the complete lack of show don’t tell, it was all ‘here is the evil deputy prime minister’ or whatever who says the same speech twice a day (which us lucky readers got to learn all about!) about how bad the Scandi Federation (or something like that) was and how they kept bombing everything. That was it. What about all the other bad things the government had done, why were they not explained? It was all ‘the government is bad’, and didn’t really explain why or the things they were doing. Like the re-envisioning. What exactly was that? I think that could have done with some more explanation. It didn’t really make sense or serve a purpose. What exactly was the point of it? And if the government is all of a sudden changing and removing documentaries and films and poems and novels, how on earth are they still allowed to watch Star Wars? That is a great lesson in how to overthrow the evil government.
And then the complete and utter lack of diversity. All the First Nations Australians now lived in their own domes and the rest of Australia is now all white and straight. Seriously, it is not that hard to include some more interesting and diverse characters.
The dreamwalking was cool but a bit odd and not very well explained, most of it was just Will walking through places. It could have been good! But it was not! There was just too much waft, the things that didn’t need as much attention and were over-explained, and the things that needed to be expanded were not. It was all rather disjointed, things were built up, then went no where, there were random ideas and conversations that didn't serve a purpose, I could go on.
The sleep science stuff was really fascinating and well explained, I think there could have definitely been more of a focus on that.
And then the ending. Where do I even begin with that? It just ended. Will all of a sudden had saved the world, by not doing much at all. And nothing was as bad as it seemed, and the government is already on the way to being better and everything is suddenly all better and solved. How? There was literally no resolution, or build up. Practically all of the book was slow paced and nothing happened, and then by the end there was all these random things that could have been great but didn’t have the time. But by the end I didn’t care too much, I was just glad it was finished.
Nothing really happened for the whole book, it was a cool concept and had potential but the execution was disappointing, but I wasn’t really expecting anything different. I don’t think I’ll be reading any more of Isobel Carmody’s books.