I wanted light, was promised a cute dog. Struggled to get to 33% noticed I was skim reading in order to meet the dog, skimmed to 48% and briefly met the dog - sort of, then gave up. Don't care. Sorry pooch you're not enough of a draw.
There's a whole info-dumpy feel to setting up, the premise and intros, clear who the next book will star before both main characters of this book have been introduced. Seemed lots of baby stuff, then baby and 'brother' are completely forgotten. Not sure how a vet would be able to afford such extensive work on the house or why a contractor would price himself so low. Must be nice being cute?! Also how realistic is it a contractor would work entirely alone for a complete gutting. Also as someone who has had far less extensive work done on a house I've got to ask- how the hell could he remain living there?
Never cared about the characters, they're nice enough I suppose, but they're just there, chewing their lips. The writing doesn't work for me, there's several odd little leaps ahead; we learn somthing was 'days ago' and have to adjust, at one point an event is referred to as months ago when I though he was just getting home and reacting to it. It's disconcerting, it also means nothing hits deep.
Also the albeit brief slapstick quality of 'mishaps' proper Carry-on film 'oh my shirt ripped' stuff.
Once the sex starts they were having a short serious discussion then having sex, which meant what they were discussing couldn't be as bad as it sounded. There's unprofessional bullying behaviour that's not acceptable it should have impact but as far as I read it felt like a mere quirk of the individual; without checking I'd guess the person will star in the next book all tortured but redeemed. But he's good looking so it may all be forgotten.
Meh.