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Unexpected Witness

If she can identify one person, she could bring down an entire crime network.

Nurse Mila Casey did not expect to witness a murder in the clinic’s parking lot. Nor did she imagine seeking protection from the at-large killer would land her on a secluded ranch owned by handsome, but standoffish, Roarke Brenneman.

Mila finds herself in the center of ever-growing danger as the police are unable to locate the suspect. When the protection of the ranch is compromised and Mila’s location is discovered, can she, with Roarke’s aid, stay one step ahead of a crazed murderer who intends to silence her forever?

Please note: Unexpected Witness is a faith-filled Christian romantic suspense novel.

245 pages, Paperback

First published October 22, 2024

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Penny Zeller

50 books1,003 followers
Penny Zeller is known for her heartfelt stories of faith-filled happily ever afters and her passion to impact lives for Christ through fiction. Her books feature tender romance, steady doses of humor, and memorable characters that stay with you long after the last page.

While she has had a love for writing since childhood, Penny began her adult writing career penning articles for national and regional publications on a wide variety of topics.

Today, Penny is a multi-published author of over three dozen books in three different Christian subgenres (historical, suspense, and contemporary), and is also a fitness instructor, loves the outdoors, and is a flower gardening addict. In her spare time, she enjoys camping, hiking, kayaking, biking, birdwatching, reading, running, and playing volleyball.

Penny resides with her husband and two daughters in small-town America and loves to connect with her readers at her website at www.pennyzeller.com, her blog, www.pennyzeller.wordpress.com, and her Facebook page at www.facebook.com/pennyzellerbooks where she posts faith, funnies, writing updates, and encouragement. All of her socials can be found at https://linktr.ee/pennyzeller.

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Profile Image for Madisyn Carlin.
Author 35 books389 followers
September 26, 2024
With a riveting plot and sympathetic main characters, Unexpected Witness is guaranteed to keep you on the edge of your seat from start to finish.

I'm not usually a suspense reader, but I couldn't resist picking up Unexpected Witness. Zeller creates a plot that hooks you from the first page and keeps you turning the pages. The constant shadow of danger, as well as betrayal and deception, creates a tale that makes you unable to put the book down.

The cast of characters was well-written, from the compassionate Mila and protective Roarke, to the dedicated Brodie and adorable Xander, to the nefarious and despicable villains.

As always, Zeller integrated an element of faith. This time, readers are reminded that, even in dangerous and hard times, God is never absent.

I expected Unexpected Witness to fully deserve five stars, but I did not anticipate how much I would enjoy it. This is a story for every reader who appreciates Christian romantic suspense.

*I received an ARC copy from the publisher in exchange for an honest review. All opinions expressed are my own.
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Author 50 books1,003 followers
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September 15, 2024
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If she can identify one person, she could bring down an entire crime network.

Nurse Mila Casey did not expect to witness a murder in the clinic’s parking lot. Nor did she imagine seeking protection from the at-large killer would land her on a secluded ranch owned by handsome, but standoffish, Roarke Brenneman.

Mila finds herself in the center of ever-growing danger as the police are unable to locate the suspect. When the protection of the ranch is compromised and Mila’s location is discovered, can she, with Roarke’s aid, stay one step ahead of a crazed murderer who intends to silence her forever?
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983 reviews432 followers
October 17, 2024
Wow! This story starts off right away with the suspense and doesn’t stop until it’s over. It’s literally danger around every corner, and I also found myself looking over my shoulder a few times, you know just in case. Mila is a nurse and one night on her way to her car she accidentally witnesses a murder. And worse the murderer sees her witness it. With a quick dash to her car she gets in and takes off towards the police station. But the murderer is right behind her trying to ram her car off the road. Luckily she makes it to the police station where she meets Roarke. The police decide to have Mila stay with Roarke and his mother and nephew and have round the clock protection. Roarke is not happy about this but does as he is told. As he is protecting Mila they get to know one another but will they make it out alive? Like I said, this was such a great book! The suspense was really well done. I loved Mila and Roarke. And I also loved all the Christian content. If you love Christian Suspense Romance, you need to read this one!
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Content: stabbing, shooting, murder

I voluntarily reviewed a complimentary copy of this book which I received from netgalley All views expressed are only my honest opinion.
Profile Image for Hannah.
3,072 reviews1,462 followers
December 7, 2024
Fun new author to start reading (after a solid 18 months of intending to!). It’s a solid suspense story, and I had a hard time figuring out who all the bad guys were! I only suspected the last one revealed at the end once, to immediately dismiss the idea. Ha…clever. Having a criminal ring active made the story more interesting as it wasn’t only one bad guy to catch. It sure ups the stakes when they keep on coming!

I’m definitely going to be eager to read Brodie and Londyn’s story next year.
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803 reviews116 followers
September 29, 2024
Imagine stepping into a scene straight out of a thriller—dark night, a clinic parking lot, and the chilling realization that you’re about to witness a crime that could shatter your life. This is exactly what Nurse Mila Casey faces in Unexpected Witness -- a masterclass in suspense and character development.

Mila’s world shifts dramatically from the mundane routine of nursing to a terrifying struggle for survival after witnessing a murder. As she escapes a crazed killer, she discovers a strength she never knew she had. The depth of her character is beautifully crafted; she embodies resilience and compassion, revealing that true bravery often emerges in vulnerability. As she navigates her fears, she grapples with her thoughts: “She struggled to keep it together. Reminded herself that she needed to relinquish her grip on all her worries and give them to the Lord. Despite the fact she repeatedly took back those worries as soon as she’d released them.” This inner conflict resonates deeply, echoing the timeless wisdom found in Philippians 4:6-7, which encourages us to be anxious for nothing and to present our requests to God, who grants us peace. Amidst the chaos, her faith remains her anchor, inspiring her to consider others even in her perilous situation: “This could be an opportunity to share about God’s love.”

Roarke Brenneman—the rugged protector with a heart that’s anything but hardened. Initially wary and standoffish, he becomes an unlikely ally for Mila, and their relationship develops in the most heartwarming way. The push and pull of their connection is electric, forged in the fires of danger but blossoming into something deeper and more profound. It’s a romance that breathes life into the story, bringing warmth to an otherwise chilling backdrop.

The Brenneman family adds layers of richness to the narrative, creating a warm, inviting atmosphere that starkly contrasts the looming threat outside their ranch. You can feel the heart in every interaction, especially with young Xander, whose innocence injects a sense of hope into the chaos.

As for the suspense, buckle up! Zeller skillfully navigates twists and turns that keep you guessing until the very last moment. The tension is palpable, and I found myself racing through the pages, desperately wanting to see how Mila and Roarke would evade the dangers closing in around them.

I deeply appreciate how Zeller weaves devotion to God, His Word, and family into the fabric of the story, creating a rich and authentic backdrop. Mila and Roarke’s journey highlights not only their struggle for survival but also the transformative power of love, trust in God, and dependence on Him. Their convictions shine brightly, illuminating even the darkest moments.

Unexpected Witness delivers a captivating mix of suspense, romance, and inspiring faith that keeps you hooked. Zeller has crafted an unforgettable story that will keep you on the edge of your seat while tugging at your heartstrings. If you’re looking for an engaging read that combines excitement with genuine emotion, this book deserves a prime spot on your reading list!

I received a digital ARC of Unexpected Witness from the author. I am not required to write a positive review in any way or for any reason. My honest and unbiased opinions expressed in this book review are my own. My review focuses on the writing style, the pacing, and the story’s content, ensuring transparency and reliability.
Profile Image for Courtney Ranger.
Author 2 books72 followers
December 24, 2024
I loved this fast-paced Christian suspense novel SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!! And not just because I adore the cover. FRTC
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260 reviews12 followers
October 15, 2024
What a suspenseful read!!! The story had me on the edge of my seat shortly after it began and kept me there until the end as Penny unraveled the details.

The characters were very well done. The story held my attention so well that I had a hard time stopping even when needing to.

Just when I thought they might catch a break and enjoy a day of peace, it quickly turned to chaos. I highly recommend this if you enjoy romantic suspense.

Sweet romance. No inappropriate scenes. No crime gore.

I hope there are more stories, for the two other brothers!

**I received an arc copy in exchange for an honest review.
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1,046 reviews79 followers
October 1, 2024
I love Ms. Zeller’s historical romance books and was excited to read this romantic suspense offering. This expertly crafted story, with plenty of mystery and suspense along with a dash of second chance romance, met and surpassed my expectations. The well-paced, intriguing plot populated with danger, deception, and several unexpected twists kept me engaged and caught up in the action from beginning to end. Advancing the story are realistic, well-crafted characters, main and secondary, who you can easily connect with and root for. I love independent heroine Mila and cowboy protector hero Roarke, but I had a really hard time even liking Brittaney no matter how hard I tried! I appreciate the strong faith thread with reminders of God care and guidance no matter how difficult the circumstances. Ms. Zeller rocked the romantic suspense genre with this one! Highly recommend!
I received a copy of this book from the author/publisher with no obligation to write a positive review. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
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1,755 reviews59 followers
September 30, 2024
Wow! This is an amazing book! I was immediately drawn into the story. The suspense was thrilling. I was very surprised at who the perpetrators were.

The characters are written brilliantly! I liked all of them (except for the bad guys). The Brenneman family works well together. Rourke is a protector and provider. Aileen is nurturing and sweet. Xander is adorable! Mila is incredible! Despite her traumatic childhood, she is compassionate and kind. Her survival skills deserve merit.

As always, faith in God is prevalent throughout the book. I liked how Mila and Rourke connected through their faith.

I was provided a complimentary copy of the book from the author. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
Profile Image for Vera Godley.
2,082 reviews63 followers
January 23, 2025
Author, Penny Zeller never disappoints with her stories are thoroughly fleshed out and always squeaky clean and uplifting. I've read her contemporary fiction but mostly her historical fiction, so I really wondered about her venturing into the genre of contemporary suspense. But again, Penny has not disappointed.

Set in a small mountain community, the story opens just as the local medical clinic is closing for the day and the nurse closes the clinic and walks to her parked car. She witnesses a ghastly murder and the story gets off to a fast paced start. Terrifying experiences leap from the pages as our witness, Mila, is repeatedly in dangerous, life threatening situations.

You'll love the characters from strong men who protect and serve to a sweet grandmother and an enchanting child that will warm your heart. The danger is there lurking in the shadows.

I thoroughly enjoy this story and am looking forward to the next in the series Unexpected Danger.

I received a complimentary copy to facilitate a review. Opinions are mine, alone and are freely given.
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Author 10 books51 followers
September 28, 2024
Wow! I loved the fast pace action with all its twist and turns. Great characters that instantly capture your heart. Breanneman ranch is a picture perfect place with Xavier and Aileen making it a cozy, warm environment. We can’t forget the hunky Roarke who coupled with Mila makes for a great romance peppered in with mystery and intrigue. Many times I caught myself holding my breath and white knuckling the pages. Every time I thought I knew who was behind the murder a twist in the story would change my mind. This is an entertaining read that keeps you on the edge of your seat without all the blood and gore. God is woven into the story without being over done. Every page of this thrilling read is exceptional!
Was given a complimentary copy. All opinions are my own.
1,018 reviews23 followers
October 12, 2024
I really enjoyed reading this book. It was well written and made me want to keep reading. Great characters in Mila and Rourke. Suspenseful! I received a copy of this book and all opinions are my own.
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91 reviews2 followers
October 7, 2024
Mila Casey wanted a quiet life after her grandmother passed away. She moved to a small town Proghorn Falls and was a nurse in the local medical clinic. One night when leaving the clinic later than scheduled her life changed forever. The story was amazing and kept me guessing and wondering what else could happen. This turned from a who did it to a sweet love story as well. I was given this book as a ARC reader but am giving my honest opinion of the book.
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December 22, 2024
I absolutely loved the first book of Zellers suspense romance series "Unexpected Witness". Once I started I could not put it down. The characters were intriguing, and the plot took many twists and turns, keeping me on the edge of my seat. A little added romance and it was a thumbs up! I am looking forward to many future " side trips " with Zeller.

59 reviews8 followers
November 4, 2024
Wow! Penny Zeller really knows how to hook an audience! I don't recommend starting this book at two in the morning as you won't want to put it down! The suspense in this novel was insane! With gunfights, knife fights, murder, threating notes, nearly getting run over, the action never stopped! And the ending left your draw dropped. I never saw it coming!

Nurse Mila Casey leaves work when she unexpectedly witnesses a murder dark at night in an empty parking lot. She can easily identify the killer, but the killer can also easily identify her. Now Mila's life is flipped upside down and forced to hide at the Brenneman Ranch as she is being hunted by a killer. But eventually the ranch is compromised, but with Roarke Brenneman's aid, will she survive the killers grasp?

I also loved the character's in this novel, they were awesome! Even with a looming threat, I loved the calming atmosphere from the Brenneman family, and I especially loved the family feel from Mila, Roarke, and Xander. Together, their character development was incredible to read! I also loved the the Christian elements, and the characters unwavering faith throughout the book!

I voluntarily reviewed a complimentary copy of this book which I received from the author. All views expressed are only my honest opinion.
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188 reviews8 followers
October 19, 2024
What a unexpected thrilling story! Even though this is not a genre I usually read nor like 🤷🏻‍♀️ I decided to give it a try since it’s from an author I adored, Penny Zeller, and it did not disappoint! I enjoyed it immensely.

Mila Casey becomes an unexpected witness after being in the wrong place at the wrong time, as the saying goes, witnessing a murder. This story is brimming with suspense and it’s fast paced. It will keep you on your toes and looking over your shoulder at all times! There was never a dull moment within. Not a safe place in Pronghorn Falls to hide from murderers …no one to trust 🫣 You’re always suspicious of even the nice characters, a phone call, someone driving past slowly, the library,… The suspense makes you feel like you’re right there in the midst of the chaos and running for your life. Truly an awesome story!

Also, I love that the author blends faith elements here and there. Her main characters are always acknowledging God and trying to find an opportunity to spread the gospel even when it gets you in compromising situations though not knowingly of course.

This is a perfect start of a series. Therefore, if you like the Christian suspense romance genre I’m sure you’ll enjoy it. I liked it even though it’s not my favorite genre.

*I received a complimentary arc copy of this book from the author. A positive review was not required. Opinions expressed on this review are completely my own.*
526 reviews2 followers
October 22, 2024
A small town rancher and his nephew fall in love with a nurse he was protecting.

Enjoyed being with this author again. She did a great job with her first suspense and mystery story. Mila and Roarke story was exciting from start to finish. Roarke became her protector and hero. He and his brother Bodie tried to keep her safe. Both Roarke and Mila had a lot to let go of in their pasts. But with God help and their love for each other things were layed down. So happy that Cancer gets a new mommy and daddy. So hope there a turn around in Proghorn Falls after all that's happened. Looking forward to Brodie story and maybe one for Grayson too. Looking forward to hearing more on how Roarke and Mila are doing too.
697 reviews4 followers
October 19, 2024
I loved this book it was exciting from the start right to the end. So worth the effort to read. Highly recommend.
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632 reviews5 followers
July 14, 2026
Good book! I love the main characters and story line. I look forward to reading the next book in this series.
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June 21, 2026
This book was such a good book. A nurse leaving work witnesses a murder and now they have to shut her up. The way the author weaves the characters faith in Jesus is what makes the book so amazing
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842 reviews9 followers
December 7, 2024
Mila can’t believe it she just saw a man she had met at the hospital, MURDERED.

Mila was a fairly new nurse at the local hospital. She had just settled in and was making it clear to everyone that she was a great nurse and would be a good member of the community.
Mila had been working late quite often lately, so she decided to take off on time for once. That is when she walked into a scene that was to terrify her for a long time. Someone was being attacked in the parking lot! She tried to call out but realized that only put her in danger. The murderer turned to her and she realized she had better get into her car and go for help quickly. Very quickly as the man was coming after her next. She got away after a confrontation and he started chasing her car. Mila was almost killed as she drove to the sheriff’s office and the sheriff put her into hiding with his brother Roarke. This is the start of a great story.
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273 reviews13 followers
October 23, 2024
Unexpected Witness is a well written romantic suspense novel that will keep you on your toes throughout the story. The characters are well developed and “real”, I felt like I could identify with them and the way they were feeling. I also fell in love with Xander, the MMC’s nephew! Penny does a great job of showing her character’s faith (or lack of) without coming across as preachy. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this book and I definitely recommend it!!

I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
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93 reviews2 followers
November 9, 2024
I really enjoyed this suspense story. It kept me guessing the entire time. The characters were likeable and well written. I really liked how Mila was strong in her faith and how eager she was to share it with others. if you enjoy suspense you will love this book.

I received a complimentary copy of this book and under no obligation to post a positive review.
355 reviews3 followers
April 1, 2025
Wrong place, wrong time

Great story with strong characters and a complex series of events that culminate in a very surprising way. Relationships are vulnerable and sometimes betrayed. It is great for fans of crime fighting and solving puzzles in the process. And, of course, the growing romance is always fun. I really enjoyed it.
38 reviews
April 9, 2026
Suspenseful and Clean

There are a lot of crime suspense novels out there but this one is different because it's written from the perspective of the victim. It's an interesting twist because she doesn't try to solve the crime (aka "interfere") and there's a romance on the side. The icing on top is there is no swearing or intimate scenes and just the right amount of suspense!
149 reviews
November 2, 2024
Unexpected witness

Wow! If you like suspense, danger, mystery and romance all woven together in a nail biting story that will keep you spellbound as you follow the unique story of protection and love you'll love this book.
47 reviews
March 4, 2025
Enjoyable Book

Great story. I loved the main characters and their interactions with each other. Constant action, but not a lot of violence. Heartfelt dialogue and emphasis on trusting the Lord during trials and regrets.
1 review
March 12, 2025
great book.

Will read the next one and know it will be as good. Looking forward to more books. Thank you so much
Profile Image for Ellie Hollows.
Author 5 books12 followers
July 30, 2025
I have a little confession to make 🫣... I wasn't going to read anymore suspense, but Penny Zeller's books are just too good to resist. At every turn, you're kept guessing.

The characters and the small community feel in this book bring in a charm of their own. Each of the particular character traits that make up them are so unique, Zeller's characters are as always so real-to-life. And the backstory is so compelling! You want to keep reading just to figure out a little bit more.

Xander is so cute 😍. Of course, like any little kid, he needs to come out again at 12 o'clock and ask for something to eat to prolong the inevitable bedtime 😂. His penchant for bugs is adorable. I think he's make a great "ant" farmer, personally 😆❤️.

My favorite scene was their picnic 🫶!

Poor Xander and Spider, though 🥲. How dare the nasty criminals do that to him.

Brodie and Roarke's brotherly banter is the bomb 🤌🤣.

High-five on Mila liking bean & cheese burritos! Also, yes, *fist pump* she knows how to make her grandmother's cinnamon rolls 🤣. Cinnamon rolls are definitely to die for (I should know 😉)! Gruesome way to defend yourself 😬... but hey, most people don't have killers after them every day. So, I definitely applaud 👏 her courage.

But most of all, it was so incredible to see that Mila continued to put her trust in the Lord through it all and genuinely cared for the physical and spiritual needs of those around her. The Lord is truly all we need 💯❤️! I also love that Mila held on to the legacy of faith imparted to her through her Gramdma.

My favorite quote that impacted me in this book actually came from one of Mila's memories of her- "Serving others & being there for them are two ways we can show the love of Christ." What an incredible truth. I definitely never want to forget it.

This book is packed with wonderful scriptures and truths of having faith over fear as well.

It was nice to find such a spiritual emphasis that is becoming rare in most books these days. It was one of the best parts.

CW: Murder, Attempted Murder, Threats, Guns/Shooting, Drugs (presented always in a bad light 👍), A lot of dwelling on touches and physical appearance, one-akward "is he going to kiss me?" scenario, one semi described kiss.

Personally, the only thing I didn't prefer (compared to her other one that I read- Forgotten Identity) was that I understood that Roarke was handsome and muscular, but I don't think having that fact repeated more than once was needed. There is so much more to a man than his physical appearance. It's the heart that matters. Which I will note (Rourke was deeper than that)... and yes, I was thankful that the author pointed out that Mila liked him for more than physical appearance, but still, it was a bit much (but that is me).

This book is super clean, though, and I did appreciate that most of the kisses were non-descriptive. Roarke and Mila were so perfect for each other 🫠🩷!

My rating/ Age Recommendation:
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ 4 out of 5 stars/ 20+ - M (Married) Mostly based on the nature of suspense....

I really enjoyed this book! Now, I'm doubly looking forward to the release of Book 2 in the Mountain Justice Series! I can't wait to see Brodie's love story, plus the suspense, of course 😉
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559 reviews47 followers
October 22, 2024
I really enjoyed this book, the first romantic suspense by Penny Zeller. I started reading her historical romance stories and one of her contemporary romcoms a year or so ago, and I really enjoy them. But romantic suspense is my favorite genre, so I was so excited when I learned about this book.
In this story, the first in a series I recently learned (more excitement woohoo), Mila witnesses a murder as she is leaving work. She ends up being hidden on a ranch that the Sheriff Brodie's family owns, though his brother, Roarke, isn't too pleased as he is concerned for the safety of their family.
We see the story from both Mila's and Roarke's point of view.
I could definitely understand Roarke's concern, as could Mila, who didn't want to put the family in danger. I admit, that decision, along with others in the story, made me scratch my head a bit. But I loved getting to know Roarke and Brodie's family, and loved the relationship that developed between them and Mila.
The story begins with suspense and it continues throughout the story, though their are periods of calmness, though the reader, along with Mila, will wonder when danger will appear next. I will say, there wasn't anything that was too extreme or intense, but it definitely had action. There wasn't much of a mysery to solve, as the police were working behind the scenes to solve the murder and string of crimes related to the case. As a reader we only saw the bad guys when Mila was in danger. Though if you have read lots of suspense like I have, you could probably deduce some of the people involved.
And of course, the book is romantic suspense, so you know the main characters are somehow going to fall for each other. I did enjoy seeing their relationship evolve as they learned to trust each other and overcome obstacles from their past.
This was a story where the main characters were Christian and they believed and trusted in the Lord, it was part of who they were. There is a scene where they go to church and the message hits close to home for the characters.
I recommend this book and can't wait for the next book in the series.
I  received an e-copy of this book as a member of the launch team and was not required to write a favorable review. These are my own honest thoughts.
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