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Submission: A Couple's Brutal Journey Into Big Black Submission
For a second I started to think back, wondering how we got to this point. Back on the balcony, the cool night air washing over us. The city lights twinkled below, but the scene was anything but peaceful. My wife Kelly was bent over the railing, her body trembling as Leon powerful black body crashed into her from behind. His hands gripped her hips tightly, his thrusts deep and powerful as Kelly’s moans echoed softly in the night air, her fingers digging into the railing for support.
And beside her, I was in the same position, bent over the railing as Venice pounded me from behind. Her strap-on filled me completely, each thrust sending shivers of discomfort and shame through me. My hands gripped the railing, knuckles white as I tried to steady myself, but there was no escaping the feeling of her inside me.
Kelly’s hand slipped into mine, our fingers intertwining as we both moaned, our bodies trembling with the rhythm of the fucking. In that moment, as humiliating as it was, I turned my head slightly and caught her gaze. She mouthed the words softly, her lips forming the shape I knew so I love you.
I squeezed her hand, my heart pounding in my chest. “I love you too,” I mouthed back.
And beside her, I was in the same position, bent over the railing as Venice pounded me from behind. Her strap-on filled me completely, each thrust sending shivers of discomfort and shame through me. My hands gripped the railing, knuckles white as I tried to steady myself, but there was no escaping the feeling of her inside me.
Kelly’s hand slipped into mine, our fingers intertwining as we both moaned, our bodies trembling with the rhythm of the fucking. In that moment, as humiliating as it was, I turned my head slightly and caught her gaze. She mouthed the words softly, her lips forming the shape I knew so I love you.
I squeezed her hand, my heart pounding in my chest. “I love you too,” I mouthed back.
154 pages, Kindle Edition
Published September 14, 2024
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February 23, 2026
Ms Daily does a magnificent job of covering a set of kinks that are rare, and very seldom covered by mainstream porn writers.
The couple, Andrew and Kelly have been married seventeen years. While very loving, they are not very inventive or exploratory. Vanilla pretty well covers them. Their sexuality is barely alive. Independently, they are aware, but neither has a clue on how to approach it. A friend and coworker tips him off to a club and they mutually decide to try it.
Ms Daily covers Bull dominance of a hotwife couple. Stag Vixen, but more broadly covered than that.
When a Bull takes a couple, he actually dominates both. He’s screwing the wife sexually and the husband, mentally. He ‘takes’ the wife in front of hubby and wordlessly displays his power to the poor watching husband. Verbal humiliation is optional. It’s usually done by the wife to please the bull.
Humiliation is unnecessary beyond the situation. Watching your wife serviced is humiliating for any husband. They overlook that as they’re hit with the raw sexuality of the situation. Too many writers have the wife, witnessing the erectile excitement of her husband as 'permission' to go further. That's a cheap ploy used by too many writers. Ms Daily doesn't. She has them communicate. Bravo!
This particular bull demands the husband be involved and not as a shared partner with the husband.
The bulls partner, Venice, is a Cuck-Queen. Her goal is to provide fresh meat for the bull so she can watch ‘her’ stud dominate new victims. (This is a very rare thing for writers to cover, and it really does exist). After she brings in the victims, this allows her to watch and humiliate the hubby as she verbally gloats over how well her partner satisfies the wife.
Ms Daily covers it all very well.
The choreography is excellent. She doesn’t do it by keeping the husband in the dark. She does it with the intensity of the action.
The heat is blistering.
My only criticism is that It could be improved if it were also told from Kelly's perspective, as well.
She becomes a slave to Leons dominance as Andrew watches. What's in her head is as important as the sex.
I personally prefer a bull who treats the husband as a minor partner in the domination. That’s a much rarer occurrence. Ego seldom allows them to share.
Writers seem to have a problem with spit-roasts and sharing with two men. They can’t seem to picture MMF without Gay involvement. Sad.
Overall, this is an excellent story. Unusual, and incredibly hot. Covering topics that are seldom, if never covered.
What I didn't like,.. She edited out a weeks' worth of buildup prior to the rematch of Kelly and Leon. Clearly Andrew was dedicated to putting heat back in the bedroom. She never let the readers into Kelly's mind. We never see the workings of her seduction. Then, the weeks build up is truncated. We don't get the spouses conversations.
Leon’s rules completely overwhelm those desires.
This book is free with Kindle Unlimited. You have to purchase to keep it.
It's well worth the purchase.
If you find this topic interesting, I recommend Ben Bosswells "What's Your Type".
It's a masterpiece with a similar couple.
The couple, Andrew and Kelly have been married seventeen years. While very loving, they are not very inventive or exploratory. Vanilla pretty well covers them. Their sexuality is barely alive. Independently, they are aware, but neither has a clue on how to approach it. A friend and coworker tips him off to a club and they mutually decide to try it.
Ms Daily covers Bull dominance of a hotwife couple. Stag Vixen, but more broadly covered than that.
When a Bull takes a couple, he actually dominates both. He’s screwing the wife sexually and the husband, mentally. He ‘takes’ the wife in front of hubby and wordlessly displays his power to the poor watching husband. Verbal humiliation is optional. It’s usually done by the wife to please the bull.
Humiliation is unnecessary beyond the situation. Watching your wife serviced is humiliating for any husband. They overlook that as they’re hit with the raw sexuality of the situation. Too many writers have the wife, witnessing the erectile excitement of her husband as 'permission' to go further. That's a cheap ploy used by too many writers. Ms Daily doesn't. She has them communicate. Bravo!
This particular bull demands the husband be involved and not as a shared partner with the husband.
The bulls partner, Venice, is a Cuck-Queen. Her goal is to provide fresh meat for the bull so she can watch ‘her’ stud dominate new victims. (This is a very rare thing for writers to cover, and it really does exist). After she brings in the victims, this allows her to watch and humiliate the hubby as she verbally gloats over how well her partner satisfies the wife.
Ms Daily covers it all very well.
The choreography is excellent. She doesn’t do it by keeping the husband in the dark. She does it with the intensity of the action.
The heat is blistering.
My only criticism is that It could be improved if it were also told from Kelly's perspective, as well.
She becomes a slave to Leons dominance as Andrew watches. What's in her head is as important as the sex.
I personally prefer a bull who treats the husband as a minor partner in the domination. That’s a much rarer occurrence. Ego seldom allows them to share.
Writers seem to have a problem with spit-roasts and sharing with two men. They can’t seem to picture MMF without Gay involvement. Sad.
Overall, this is an excellent story. Unusual, and incredibly hot. Covering topics that are seldom, if never covered.
What I didn't like,.. She edited out a weeks' worth of buildup prior to the rematch of Kelly and Leon. Clearly Andrew was dedicated to putting heat back in the bedroom. She never let the readers into Kelly's mind. We never see the workings of her seduction. Then, the weeks build up is truncated. We don't get the spouses conversations.
Leon’s rules completely overwhelm those desires.
This book is free with Kindle Unlimited. You have to purchase to keep it.
It's well worth the purchase.
If you find this topic interesting, I recommend Ben Bosswells "What's Your Type".
It's a masterpiece with a similar couple.
December 6, 2024
A different kind of hot wife novel
Want to read something a bit different even more subservient, intriguing and nasty then thi is it. Go for it
Want to read something a bit different even more subservient, intriguing and nasty then thi is it. Go for it
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December 8, 2024
Wonderful, But So Much Missing
Why, you think, is this only three stars if I say that it’s wonderful. The answer is in what’s missing.
At this point I’m going to get into the story and if you want to read it pure, you should stop right now. And it is a good story that I’m not sad that I took time to read it. It’s just that it has flaws and one of them is a huge one. (Truly no pun intended)
The first problem is needing better editing. For example, the wife has a scene where she’s into watching a video while having lunch at a diner. She can’t have the volume up enough to hear it. So frustrated that she pays her bill and rushes to her car to watch and turn up the volume. Then as she realizes that she has to get back to work, it’s written that she needs to pay the bill, leave a tip and run to her car to get back to work.
This was so disjointed that I wondered if anyone proofread it before it was published.
But the biggest disappointment came from a central part of the story. As we read along the wife is reading and video watching about cuckolding and FLR. At the same time the husband is watching videos of becoming more submissive and becoming a sissy.
We read that the wife is coming up with a plan to make the husband the lowest on the pole. The bull with the BBC > the wife > the husband. Her plan needs to be completed in a week, before the bull gets back from being away and it’s implied that they will all get together again and then this hierarchy will be fully established.
This strong theme of turning him into a sissy is fortified with a porn video of a husband who is shown in panties, a complete sissy.
Then we read that her plan has them going to the adult store to pick out toys for the couple to use. Seemingly toys for her to prove to her husband of her dominance over him.
All of this is terribly exciting. What is her plan and how will she execute it, so that he understands his submissive role when they meet her bull again. This formulation is so strong as the bull has basically told the wife that she has to make her husband understand if she is going to feel her bull again.
As I’m reading I can’t wait to read this plan unfold. How can she make her husband accept his total submission in just the couple of days that she has before meeting with the bull. The bull seems to imply that they can’t meet unless she brings her husband under control.
Suspense and excitement anyone? I know that I felt it as I was reading.
The horrible problem is that the next scene starts with the couple entering the elevator to go to the bull’s home.
Unless I got a corrupted version of the story there’s absolutely nothing else written about the plan or its implementation. Talk about total frustration, that was it for me.
The final scene where everyone’s role is played out is nicely done, but because of the disjointed presentation it was not hardening at all, rather totally flat. And the story ends with a feeling of total frustration, not with a feeling of total satisfaction.
To me this was a fatal flaw, completely eliminating the sense of extreme pleasure that was forming.
Am I happy that I decided to read this book? I’d say yes, because the climb of trying to be satisfied was exciting, until the pressure built up was not exploded in ecstasy, but deflated with a pinprick.
Such is three stars, not the five stars that I was starting to feel as I was reading.
Sorry I was.
Why, you think, is this only three stars if I say that it’s wonderful. The answer is in what’s missing.
At this point I’m going to get into the story and if you want to read it pure, you should stop right now. And it is a good story that I’m not sad that I took time to read it. It’s just that it has flaws and one of them is a huge one. (Truly no pun intended)
The first problem is needing better editing. For example, the wife has a scene where she’s into watching a video while having lunch at a diner. She can’t have the volume up enough to hear it. So frustrated that she pays her bill and rushes to her car to watch and turn up the volume. Then as she realizes that she has to get back to work, it’s written that she needs to pay the bill, leave a tip and run to her car to get back to work.
This was so disjointed that I wondered if anyone proofread it before it was published.
But the biggest disappointment came from a central part of the story. As we read along the wife is reading and video watching about cuckolding and FLR. At the same time the husband is watching videos of becoming more submissive and becoming a sissy.
We read that the wife is coming up with a plan to make the husband the lowest on the pole. The bull with the BBC > the wife > the husband. Her plan needs to be completed in a week, before the bull gets back from being away and it’s implied that they will all get together again and then this hierarchy will be fully established.
This strong theme of turning him into a sissy is fortified with a porn video of a husband who is shown in panties, a complete sissy.
Then we read that her plan has them going to the adult store to pick out toys for the couple to use. Seemingly toys for her to prove to her husband of her dominance over him.
All of this is terribly exciting. What is her plan and how will she execute it, so that he understands his submissive role when they meet her bull again. This formulation is so strong as the bull has basically told the wife that she has to make her husband understand if she is going to feel her bull again.
As I’m reading I can’t wait to read this plan unfold. How can she make her husband accept his total submission in just the couple of days that she has before meeting with the bull. The bull seems to imply that they can’t meet unless she brings her husband under control.
Suspense and excitement anyone? I know that I felt it as I was reading.
The horrible problem is that the next scene starts with the couple entering the elevator to go to the bull’s home.
Unless I got a corrupted version of the story there’s absolutely nothing else written about the plan or its implementation. Talk about total frustration, that was it for me.
The final scene where everyone’s role is played out is nicely done, but because of the disjointed presentation it was not hardening at all, rather totally flat. And the story ends with a feeling of total frustration, not with a feeling of total satisfaction.
To me this was a fatal flaw, completely eliminating the sense of extreme pleasure that was forming.
Am I happy that I decided to read this book? I’d say yes, because the climb of trying to be satisfied was exciting, until the pressure built up was not exploded in ecstasy, but deflated with a pinprick.
Such is three stars, not the five stars that I was starting to feel as I was reading.
Sorry I was.
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