Half spy thriller, half slow burn hero novel
When I read the synopsis for this book, I was intrigued. Flawed heroes, a mysterious killer, and a global conspiracy? This book had all those and a lot more. Too much more. The heroes were original, with unique powers and names so as not to be compared to Marvel or DC. There were some pretty good fight scenes. But unfortunately there were more problems than good parts. First off, there was way too much background detail. There were pages and pages of history for South America that had no impact on the story. They could have been completely removed or shortened to a paragraph or two to provide background on a bad guy. Not to mention, said bad guy only makes it a few chapters anyway. The author spent way too much time describing areas of the city or the history of it. Don't get me wrong, I like knowing a little background of an area to know why it's important, but this was Stephen King levels of background and description. There were a ton of editing mistakes as well. Extra commas and missing quotation marks are usually not a big deal, but this book was filled with them. There were also a ton of italicized words that didn't need it. Certain words used with emphasis is fine, but this had an italicized word on almost every page. The heroes themselves were interesting enough, but they never fought together as a group. Yes there were times where several of them worked together, but there was never a full team assembled. Not to mention, for this team to supposedly be the best of the best, they kind of suck at their jobs. In South America, they miss a witness hiding in a closet. In the main city they take out a gang, but at least two gang members make it through the supposedly secure perimeter. The final fight, for as cool as it was, could have been over much faster if one hero hadn't shown up late for unknown reasons and another hero was out of town. The main villian's motivations aren't fully explained either. I'm guessing that will come in Book 2. You have to read all the way until the end to find out some of his reasons for wanting the heroes dead. The plot itself is overly complicated for a fairly simple end goal: create a supervillian. This book couldn't figure out if it wanted to be a slow burn global spy thriller or a superhero action movie. It was too long to be a spy thriller and too slow to be an action movie. I really hope Book 2 is better than this one.