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Sudden Awakenings: A Pride and Prejudice Variation

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What could be worse than awakening in the bed of the man you hate?

Elizabeth Bennet, haunted by a family history of sleepwalking, has spent her life navigating the challenges and eccentricities of her condition.

A sudden encounter during a sleepwalking episode forces her and Mr. Darcy into a marriage of convenience. As they navigate their newfound relationship, their initial prejudices give way to unexpected feelings.

However, Darcy's formidable aunt, Lady Catherine, opposes the match and schemes to break them apart. Can Elizabeth and Darcy overcome the obstacles placed before them and awaken to the realization of the love between them?

This clean, heartwarming romance will leave you captivated and yearning for more. A unique Pride and Prejudice variation culminating in a happily ever after for Our Dear Couple.In this story, you'll

🤎 Forced marriage

🤎 Enemies to lovers

🤎 Wicked Lady Catherine

🤎 Fade-to-black romance

🤎 Slow burn

🤎 Pride and Prejudice

🤎 "Bad" Jane

🤎 A HEA for ODC

369 pages, Kindle Edition

Published November 1, 2024

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Amanda Kai

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Amanda Kai’s background in the performing arts drives her creative spirit. Prior to becoming an author, Amanda enjoyed a successful career as a professional harpist, and danced ballet for twenty years. Her love of storytelling, nurtured by a fondness for period dramas and classic literature, led her to begin writing historical romances. She is the author of Marriage and Ministry and Elizabeth’s Secret Admirer, two stories based on Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice. She also wrote a fictional short story about Marie Antoinette, titled Keys. When she’s not diving into the past through the realm of her imagination, Amanda lives out her own happily ever after in Leander, Texas, with her husband and three children.

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Profile Image for J. W. Garrett.
1,736 reviews140 followers
November 2, 2024
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***

>>Rating: clean: per the author: I’d label this a mature teen due to the sexual tensions, a murder attempt, and the descriptions of the death of a background character and an animal.
>>Angst Level: stressful due to a murder attempt, forged letters, and a marriage attempt with a minor
>>Source: I received a free copy [10-24-24] from the author with no expectations of a review or an obligation to purchase. I volunteered to leave my thoughts and opinions. Novella length and standalone in the Other Paths Collection Series. Also borrowed from KU [11-1-24] 40 chapters + epilogue
>>Trope: new twist, a family history of sleepwalking [1] FMS/MOC: Forced marriage scenario/marriage of convenience. [2] NSN Jane: Who was this girl? She and her mother were in cahoots to secure Mr. Bingley. Caroline saw through it and Darcy overheard Mrs. Bennet in her cups bragging to one of the ladies about her machinations to place her Jane as mistress of Netherfield. [3] Wickham had the living at Kympton. Oh, dear, that can’t be good. [4] There was a surprise mash-up with characters from another Austen book. I did not see that coming.

I understanding sleepwalking due to the experience with my father. One morning, Dad was awakened by the cold and found himself on our front porch in his underwear. Thank goodness, it was too early for him to shock the morning commuters.

Timeline: Netherfield, during Jane’s illness. Elizabeth sleepwalked into the wrong room and climbed into bed. In her dream state, Lizzy thought she was in her sister Mary’s room. Only it was not Mary’s room. It was Mr. Darcy’s. [Note: why was the door not locked? Miss Bingley was in the house, for goodness sake] Well, things went nova after that. Our dear couple were quickly married and Lizzy was whisked off to Pemberley. Lady Catherine was not happy. On their next trip to town, she let them know her sentiments in words even they could understand.

Darcy and Elizabeth were operating from different levels of understanding and were constantly crashing and burning. Elizabeth tried her best in this new marriage but nothing went her way. She seemed off. She never asked questions and often blundered into problems that could have been avoided with a few minutes of conversation. It was Blue Collar meets White Collar. Their tools for problem-solving were the opposite. Plus, the sexual tensions of their not having consummated their marriage added to the tensions. Even I was frustrated. Lizzy was in a snit most of the book and couldn’t reconcile her feelings for her husband, help us all. Girl, get a grip. Once your name was on the marriage register, your life changed forever. She didn’t seem to get that memo and acted like a silly virgin. Oh, wait, she was a silly virgin. Maybe I was married too long. The stubborn, headstrong Lizzy drives me crazy. Five minutes could have resolved her angst and we could have had more page time with our dear couple. It soon became cruel toward Darcy and that, I don’t like. Team Darcy!
Profile Image for Sheila Majczan.
2,705 reviews206 followers
December 4, 2024
4.5 stars rounded up to 5 stars

I do like FMS variations. This one was due to Elizabeth's sleepwalking (an inherited trait) into Darcy's bedroom (and his bed) while staying at Netherfield to "nurse" Jane. (And we have a very different Jane in this story.) This Jane is one who seems to take to heart all her mother's advice about securing a rich husband. Although the Bingleys are part of the story, they are not quite as in canon...enough said.

Please note that this author brings to this tale characters from other of JA's stories, i.e. Rushworth, Mrs. Jennings, the Farrars, etc.

It takes us almost to the very end before Darcy and Elizabeth admit to each other their true feelings, even with several events where they sleep in the same bed and "dream" of more in their relationship.

Lydia and Kitty have different paths in this story...ones I was happy to read of. Georgiana's story is similar to canon. However, in this version, Wickham has the "living" at Kymption. Yes, he is ordained. And this author gives us a surprise in his part of the story. I can't share that as it would spoil the surprise for other readers. Mary is already married when this story begins...to guess who?

There is a short epilogue. I enjoyed this story and recommend it.
Profile Image for Gill M.
378 reviews28 followers
November 26, 2024
Review also posted on my blog

https://myjaffobsession.blogspot.com/...

The Bennet family have several sleepwalkers, but Elizabeth is the most profoundly affected.

Her family have safeguards in place to keep her from harm.

Unfortunately, when Elizabeth stays at Netherfield Park to care for her sister, there is nothing to protect her from herself.

Sleepwalking right into Fitzwilliam Darcy's bed, leads to a very reluctant marriage of convenience.

After a shaky start they settle in to a businesslike partnership, but no intimacy.

Both Elizabeth and Darcy are keen to improve the behaviour of Kitty and Lydia Bennet.
The girls come to Pemberley for some lessons in deportment and propriety.

More worrying is Jane's conduct. Definitely not angelic!

Of course, we have to have villains.
Here there are two, one is a psychopath and the other a narcissist, so of course drama will ensue.

Very enjoyable.
269 reviews6 followers
November 2, 2024
Sleepwalking is sometimes used as a device to excuse bad behavior, but in this story, Elizabeth genuinely does walk in her sleep and ends up in a bed not her own, Mr Darcy’s, of course. It’s worth wondering what might have been if she had landed in Mr Bingley’s bed or even Mr Hurst’s. At any rate, Darcy and Elizabeth marry, at least one of them protesting all the way. There are enough alterations in characters and circumstances to keep the reader engaged. An HEA is assumed, but the path to it has some surprises. Lady Catherine, what have you done? Wickham, what are you doing? Jane? Jane, who are you? Elizabeth, open your eyes, literally and figuratively. Mrs Bennet, sleepwalker, what treats have you been nibbling in the night? Overall, a good read. I gave it four stars for one scene that felt contrived (no spoilers here) and a few misused words, such as Caroline drolled rather than droned. Took me a whole day to read, couldn’t put it down.
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1,437 reviews
December 8, 2024
Lizzy is a sleep walker.

This is a well written story but the plots didn’t seem likely and being a sleep walker wasn’t different enough to support another forced marriage book.able to support the rest of the story.

Not a bad “read once” story.
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207 reviews16 followers
November 2, 2024
Elizabeth Bennet is a sleepwalker. Fortunately, other than retrieving her from the barn, her nightly adventures had caused no harm. Now her sister Jane is ill at Netherfield and Elizabeth rushes to her side to nurse her back to health. Unfortunately, during her stay, when no-one is there to keep her safe, Elizabeth wanders through Netherfield's corridors ... and straight into Mr Darcy's bedchamber. Through the commotion caused by her arrival and waking up they are caught together and need to marry to avoid scandal.
This union is not to everyone's satisfaction and so the newlyweds not only need to deal with their own feelings but also with obstacles from outside. Will they nevertheless find love in this forced alliance? Will others be successful in driving them apart? Or will Elizabeth's sleep walking tendency cause further problems?

The book was well written by the author Amanda Kai. I give 4,5 stars rounded up to five.

I like Amanda Kai's writing style and her other books very much but in this book I was really annoyed with Elizabeth. Everything Darcy says she took as criticism or thought he believed her to be a fortune hunter, but when another person of her family brought up the exact same thing it was ok for her and she pursued the idea further. I missed her witty self and the ability to see something good in the situation. At least she was able to admit to herself that she was physically drawn to Darcy but it took her very, very long to admit that she loves him.
I had also hoped for a bit more inside, especially into Darcy's feelings, was he hurt by Elizabeth's behaviour, was his love for her wavering or grew it stronger? I had hoped for some more information. But the speed of the story and especially the dramatics in the end let me enjoy the story very much besides the points I mentioned above.

On the other hand I like Darcy's portrayal very much. He is quiet and stoic, a rock in the water, not desturbed by anything or anyone, always willing to find a solution and do everything in his power to make things a bit better for his wife.

What I really like is the way Kitty and Lydia are shown and their change in behaviour due to Darcy's influence and his knowledge in raising Georgina. In the end I liked both Kitty and Lydia very much and that does not happen often. And I am astonished to say, I like Miss Bingley in this story. Due to some changes in the story, most of them having to do with Jane, Miss Bingley's whole behavior and attitude becomes a new meaning and lets her shine in a new light.

Lady Catherine is the worst villain in this story. She is strictly opposed to the match because she wants Darcy for her own daughter and therefore she is willing to act in every possible way. Fortunately her plans are not successful in the end (otherwise we would not have had a happily ever after 😉) and she gets what she deserves. As for the other "eternal" villain, Wickham, ... you need to see for yourself, he was able to surprise me more than once, in a good and in a bad way 😉.

If you like to know how Darcy and Elizabeth come to know and love each other when they are forced to marry due to a situation caused by Elizabeth's sleep walking, you should definitely read this story.

I highly recommend it.

I received a free copy of the book from the author and am voluntarily leaving a review.
211 reviews
November 10, 2024
2.5 stars

The disparate elements of this book never coalesced into an interesting tale. Sleepwalking was a novel cause of a FMS. Many FMS fail because of misunderstandings that go on way too long; such was the case here. These two were still addressing each other as “Mr” and “Mrs” after several months of marriage. Why? They seemed to be on friendly terms. Why hadn’t they gotten over their presumptions about the state of one another’s hearts? What even were the presumptions? At some point I quit caring, and just wanted the book to end.

The subplots were predictable and failed to add to the main tale. I’m always down for a bad Jane, but we didn’t get an in-depth study; there was little point in including it.

Similarly, Georgiana’s subplot yielded no surprises. Elizabeth had caught on early about Mrs Younge’s poor governessing skills, yet chose to fight with Darcy over the estate’s candle inventory rather than warn her husband that Mrs Younge was shady. Later, Georgiana and Mrs Younge go to visit Georgie’s school friend. Things happen exactly as you think they would happen.

Finally, LCdB and her machinations were uninspired.
2 reviews
October 27, 2024
Loved this variation of my favourite Jane Austen novel, Pride and Prejudice. The addition of one additional aspect of Elizabeth allowed so many changes to the plot of the original, whilst keeping to the feel, was very enjoyable to read. All very believable, too. (I have always felt something sinister in Lady C's mind.)
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
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2,566 reviews13 followers
November 2, 2024
Dreamy

An interesting concept done well in this variant inspired by Jane Austen’s classic novel Pride and Prejudice by Amanda Kai. I enjoyed it.
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1,228 reviews62 followers
November 2, 2024
A fresh way to bring about the FMS.

Elizabeth Bennet sleepwalks. To maintain her reputation, this information is kept fairly hushed up. She and her family have learned to put bells on doors and lock them. Times of stress seem to make the episodes more frequent.

When she needs to stay at Netherfield to care for Jane - who may, or may not be sick - Elizabeth ends up in Darcy's bed in the middle of the night.

Luckily for her he is already a smitten kitten and does the honorable thing by offering for her, once word has spread. Unluckily for him, she doesn't see him in the same light.
Their beginning is rough and bumpy, and not all the family is warm to Darcy's bride. Ultimately, it takes a dramatic event to finally bring these two to a happy understanding. (Unfortunately, that isn't until near the end of the book.)

This is a not-so-nice Jane, a wimpy Bingley, a great, but clueless Georgiana, and young Bennet sisters for the win, all encompassing story. Let us not forget to mention the nasty Lady de Bourgh!

This is an entertaining read. I liked the way some of the canon components got mixed around. I only wished our dear couple could have resolved their issues earlier. The back and forth of their "unrequited" feelings going on for so long, slowed the story for me. Good thing there were plenty of shockers to keep the pace moving along!

I received a copy of this book for my honest opinion.
4,233 reviews22 followers
December 15, 2025
This was such a charming and cozy Pride and Prejudice variation. The sleepwalking premise adds a fresh and believable twist that gently pushes Elizabeth and Darcy into a forced marriage, setting the stage for plenty of tension, misunderstandings, and slow-burn romance. I loved watching their familiar prejudices soften as they learn to truly see one another in this new situation. Lady Catherine is, as always, deliciously wicked, raising the stakes without overpowering the heart of the story. The romance is clean and tender, with a satisfying fade-to-black approach that keeps the focus on emotional growth and trust. By the end, the happily ever after feels well earned and deeply comforting. A sweet, engaging read for any fan of Our Dear Couple who enjoys a thoughtful, character-driven retelling.
I received a complimentary copy from StoryOrigin and am voluntarily leaving my review. 
61 reviews1 follower
November 9, 2024
I received a free copy from the author with no expectations of a review or an obligation to purchase. I volunteered to leave my thoughts and opinions.

Over all I loved this story with a sleepwalking Elizabeth. There are moments when I got a bit annoyed with her. She held on to her dislike of Darcy a bit too long and kept us from having more sweet time with E&D. Darcy is just wonderful in this story. The last part of the book was really lovely.

There are many twists and problems (other than the sleepwalking part). Some of the other characters are very bad. And some keeps you wondering a bit about. Guess who when you read the book.

I recommend this story to all who love E&D.
2,511 reviews19 followers
October 30, 2024
The interesting twist involving Lizzy set this story down a different path. Somehow she seemed less herself with Darcy seemingly more mellow as well. Mrs. Bennet continues irritate me with her marital scheming while changes in several other characters’ actions, behaviours and perhaps personalities just added to the new plot. I liked how Lady Catherine wash more involved and the Bennet sisters each brought new details to the story. If you are a P&P fan, this is a unique variation that may be hard to put down till the very end!
33 reviews
November 1, 2024
What if Elizabeth Bennet was a sleepwalker?

This is the fourth book I’ve read of Amanda Kai’s Pride and Prejudice ‘The Other Paths’. This one explores what would have happened if Elizabeth Bennet had sleepwalked her way into a marriage of convenience with Mr Darcy. Some of the other characters had altered personalities, which changed the plot further, but the story still maintained the essence of the original. This book was funny and sweet, and it was very entertaining! Recommended.

I received an Advance Review Copy (ARC) of the ebook, and I’m leaving a voluntary review.
332 reviews1 follower
November 9, 2024
Finally, It's Over!

Nothing sudden about these awakenings! The stupidity went on until we got to 95%!!! How is that sudden? Does this Elizabeth have any sense? Must she continue in her willful misunderstanding to the bitter end?

Obviously, Yes!

The only ones who act with any discretion are the Gardiners and, perhaps, Darcy. But Lady Catherine, Wickham, Georgiana, Jane and the rest of the Bennets, and even the Matlocks but to a lesser extent, all behave with the unreasoning actions of one in a dream.

Don't bother
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Author 5 books12 followers
November 28, 2024
A dramatic variation

I thought the beginning was a bit slow. Once having established that sleep-walking was a family trait, I didn’t see the need to revisit the story from canon. The Darcy in this variation is a very nuanced character. At times arrogant, but au fond a man of kindness, sensitivity and understanding. Lizzy has the more difficult journey. Mired in prejudice, she kicks against the pricks until experience forces her to open her eyes. Subplots are very dramatic. Georgiana and Wickham, a much changed Jane and Bingley, and Lady Catherine’s hatred of Elizabeth.
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5 reviews
November 3, 2024
Sleepwalking and Compromise!

For those that enjoy a forced marriage variation trope, here is a new take! I haven’t yet read one that starts with a sleepwalking Lizzy, but that is exactly what Amanda Kai gives us with Sudden Awakenings. Add in some of our favorite villains, a truly horrible Lady Catherine, and some amusing new friends and you have a wonderful story to enjoy!
806 reviews5 followers
November 4, 2024
Sudden Awakenings

Sleepwalking in the family. Poor Elizabeth.
And dang, Jane, what are you doing?
Mary gets her wish in marriage to Collins and it looks like they get along very well.
Wickham does his normal, but he too is clergy, with a family secret!
Takes a while for our dear couple to acknowledge love.
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Author 9 books17 followers
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November 9, 2024
An interesting variation of Pride and Prejudice, in which Lizzy sleep walks, and Jane is cunning, manipulative, and shallow. This variation also featured cameos from Mr Rushworth, and mentions of other Austen characters.

I thought the sleepwalking complication was interesting, although I think I would have liked it to play a bigger role in the story.
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1,521 reviews21 followers
December 13, 2024
Sleep walking runs in the family, and she does it!
She walks into the bedroom of a male guest and cuddles with him. When he wakes in the morning he is utterly shocked - and so is she!!! In a time when she will be totally looked down upon because of this!!! And this story goes on from there. And what a great love story it is!!! Totally loved it!!
40 reviews2 followers
February 9, 2025
Worth a read

Okay, it's worth reading. However, I really couldn't stand Elizabeth most of the book. She is found in Darcy''s bed and she is all upset at him??? I wanted to reach through my Kindle and slap her multiple times.

I appreciate every book I read or listen to. I do not have the talent they do. However, a little common sense was needed with her character.

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2,166 reviews1 follower
March 19, 2025
A heavy sleepwalking incident leads to a compromise between Elizabeth Bennet and Fitzwilliam Darcy while Elizabeth is tending to Jane at Netherfield. The resulting marriage is full of miscommunication and dealing with evil aunts and Wickham on their way to happily ever after.

I enjoyed the story and it held my attention.
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October 29, 2024
Amanda Kai does not disappoint. This easy read has familiar characters, but some have unfamiliar characteristics. Readers who enjoy stories where Jane is"bad," will like her storyline. Another good read for those who like P&P fan fiction.
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1,238 reviews12 followers
November 3, 2024
I found this story very engaging since sleepwalking runs in my family, and I know firsthand that it can be disconcerting. The situations are very original and the book is well written and enjoyable. I received an ARC copy.
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November 9, 2024
I was transported in time reading this well written, entertaining book! Having followed this author and having read several of her books, I have come to expect excellence and an unforgettable experience and have to say, I am never left wanting! Highly, highly recommend!
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1,044 reviews7 followers
November 1, 2024
Well written , well plotted and really enjoyable.
It is well worth your time to read.
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58 reviews1 follower
May 21, 2025
Good read...

Amanda, your storytelling continues to captivate me. The character development in this piece was particularly compelling and added depth to the narrative.
174 reviews1 follower
June 1, 2025
Really 4.5

This was a nice sweet variation with a trope I love. I enjoyed it, some parts dragged and the end I was underwhelmed. This is why 4.5.
2,580 reviews46 followers
December 4, 2024
4.5 stars
I enjoyed reading this story. I don't think I've read this scenario before. Elizabeth is compromised by her own sleepwalking. And Darcy doesn't really mind at all. I know that in earlier time periods, people didn't understand oddities in people but I wonder if sleepwalking was so peculiar that one had to keep it a secret. I don't know the answer either way. I just wondered if it was a real problem. Obviously, getting in Darcy's bed was a bad thing for her but it seems like it would be good for the staff to be aware of the potential problem so they could watch out for Elizabeth.
Darcy is my favorite character in this story. He was so very patient and was kind and generous to Elizabeth. She, however, seemed to jump to the worst conclusion at every turn. I was getting annoyed by it. Darcy was very understanding through it all though.
Their romance was very much a slow burn. And I really appreciated that the entire story wasn't overly focused on if they would ever consummate their marriage. There was a bit about it but it wasn't the focus.
I really didn't like Jane in this one. But I'm not sure that we are supposed to like her. She becomes more and more like the Lydia of canon, exposing herself to ridicule as she follows her mother's advice to throw herself at men. I much prefer Jane to be her usual sweet, unassuming self who recognizes the folly of her mother's ways. I don't know if I'd call it a 'bad Jane' story exactly but she does have some bad behavior.
The storyline with Lady C was an amazingly crazy, over the top surprise. I wasn't expecting that twist.
I always enjoy variations where the younger daughters are overhauled to be nice young ladies so they can marry well. I liked that aspect in this one.

Sex: no, but wrongly assumed due to the compromise situation
Language: no
Violence: yes - attempted murder
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