Kieryn Rhodes always obeyed her father. Until one evening she did not, and this got her parents murdered. Or maybe it’s because of the rumors of a powerful weapon her father may have had, but that same evening her parents died, Kieryn is taken by a masked man. The masked man was sent to execute the Rhodes, but instead takes pity on Kieryn because of how young she is and leaves her at a monastery hoping he’s not making a mistake.
Ten years later, Kieryn is now an assassin for The Sanctuary of Crown and Blood. She had been taken in by a group called The Guild of Phantoms. She’s known as Deathbringer. Her and her crew are sent on a mission where they learn it is a set up and now have to not only clear their names, but gain people to help them stop a war that is coming.
Soooo, I have mixed feelings about this book. It has such potential! You can tell a lot of work went into creating this fantasy world with the names, and places. The character building is well done. You really learn about each of the characters really well and their pasts and what they’re like now. There’s some unique creatures in here as well.
I always enjoy descriptive writing, which Leslie does explain things in detail, such as what the characters look like, what they’re wearing and other details similar to those. I like being able to picture these in my head.
The start of the book is a great way to get you hooked into reading it to understand what happened, why it happened, and what will Kieryn do going forward.
I loved the idea of this mysterious faction of assassins that no one knows where they’re located. Like a need-to-know basis.
The story and plot kept my attention as well, never was bored and wanted to know what happens next, and the ending has a fantastic cliffhanger, which I always love a good cliffhanger.
So, those are things I enjoyed. There are I guess a lot of smaller things that just made the book lackluster for me.
To start, the world building leaves much to be desired. I think this book was too fast-paced with the story that the world is forgotten. I think the first book should have stayed focusing on the characters and the world, by the end we start to see the action and hints of romance, and then the second book is where the romance and everything else really starts to build up. Or else this first book should have been much longer. There are some random explanations about the world history shoved in at random times, but it seemed more of an afterthought and not actually a part of the story. This left me wanting more to understand this world.
The world is also supposed to be a unique fantasy world. However, there are a lot of modern day/our world things used in here. Such as a pool table or a lot of food we consume in our world, or at one point, Callian is described as having an Adonis-like body. Who is Adonis supposed to be in this world? This world literally has its own gods and yet we are describing this person as a Greek god that does not even exist in this world? So little details like this that could have used some work to make this a completely new fantasy world. In the end, it wasn’t that unique.
When I first started reading this book, it sounds like it’s a different story that turns into a different one all about this king coming for Kieryn. There’s not enough detail to explain why that is. At least there wasn’t for me to fully grasp and understand the meaning behind what is so special about Kieryn and to make me feel like rooting for her.
I also, and this is probably just a preference, but I didn’t like the way the POVs are set up. You have to really pay attention to who is narrating because it will switch mid-sentence or mid-paragraph and I just didn’t like having to put that extra work into it to understand who was the one actually talking right now. I had to backtrack a few times to figure out who is narrating.
Although there is great detail about the characters, I never truly felt emotionally connected with either of them. They were also all very one-noted, not enough individuality with the characters. Every single male character was the “who did this to you” type and each of the characters were so melodramatic in their thoughts, actions and words. I do think Damien is the one I connected with the most and I want to say Kieryn, but she seemed to be all over the place. It’s more like, I wanted to be connected to them and should have been, but I wasn’t. Is Kieryn an assassin or not? She’s all about being stabby, but then she’s not for random strangers, it was confusing for me. Because of this, the romance didn’t work for me. It was a very fast romance, which I don’t like. But this story was too fast-paced for the romance to work for me.
The romantic steamy scenes are done very well, but I also didn’t care if they stayed together or not 🤷🏼♀️
I enjoyed probably half the things about this book and the other half not so much. That ending is a really great ending and a great cliffhanger and I am curious to know how it will continue. So, I will probably pick up the next book to satiate my curiosity. Solid 3 ⭐️ read for me.
Thank you to the author for the gifted e-ARC. All thoughts and opinions are my own.