I won a free copy of this book in a giveaway!
Unfortunately, I was not much of a fan of this book. I didn’t like the characters and none of them really had any personality at all. They felt very empty the whole time, even in the moments where they *did* show their bits of personality. The only one who did seem to have any personality was Sachry, the actor.
At the beginning, a lot of place and people names are thrown at you. It did make it very difficult for me to keep track of a lot of them, but keep in mind that I’m not great with remembering names! So that might be a personal problem of mine.
Point of view changes mid chapter, so that might not be everyone’s cup of tea.
A whole lot of nothing happens. It almost seems as if interesting plot hooks ARE happening, but the main characters completely avoid them altogether. An example is when a dragon crashes into the building across the street from Malk’s home. They save the rider, stow him away overnight, hand him over to someone in the morning, and that was the end of that. They spoke about the worries and what MIGHT happen while it was going on, but nothing happens. Ever. And that part takes up just a few pages of the book. Most of the book follows after really mundane day-to-day life, which is not my thing. I much prefer action. There’s also mentions of raids and “bombings” by the dragons and riders constantly, but we never actually see any of it. People go into basements to hide, that one dragon lands on top of that building, and that’s it. Honestly, I’m not sure what the point of the raids is when there’s so little impact to the story.
Each problem is also immediately fixed within a few pages, aside from one reoccurring conflict in Sachry’s storyline, though nothing seems to come out of it in the end, and when it does, Sachry ignores the problem for the most part. That being said, every type of conflict in the story seems to not actually be conflict considering it’s all immediately fixed without lasting impact.
Nothing actually really happens until 60% of the way into the book, according to my Kindle. Up until then, and even after, is mostly just mundane daily life.
Overall, I was just not a fan, unfortunately. It’s described as a “gritty new epic fantasy” but it feels like anything but. The fantasy element is so low that it’s practically non existent, and I’m not sure why there’s even mention of dragons when the story could have been told exactly the same way if they just weren’t present. The story just does not compare to how interesting the summary makes it seem.