"Blank" started out really good. It was emotional, dramatic, and full of heartbreak. In the beginning, Linc tells the tale of how he was born absolutely FACELESS and the struggles his family suffered with his rather unique telepathic and telekinetic abilities. The story then follows your typical YA theme, character identity, self-discovery, romance, peer-pressure and the every day hardships of teenage life. However, as the story unfolds, there's some murder mystery, gang violence, and other dangerous aspects that come into play and even more dangerous homicidal villains. While I did enjoy "Blank", there were a few issues I had with the book.
1. Pacing- The story was just tooooooooooooo long! I felt like the author could have chopped down a lot of the dangerous action and overload of side plots. About half way through the book, the situations got a bit repetitive in some places and seemed a little forced and unrealistic in a way. It was almost like watching 3 seasons of Teen Wolf stuffed in one book where all this crazy and spontaneous violence/villianry happens out of nowhere. Like seriously, how many times will knives be waved, people shot, almost rapped and killed in a span of three months? And also, how many times do the same villains have to return before they can stay locked up or dead?!
3. Characters- I really enjoyed Linc. I thought he was a humble, reactive, and generally interesting character. I mean, he has NO FACE, so how can he not be. I like only two other characters, Linc's mother, a snarky alcoholic, and his best friend Tuck. Joey, his uncle, was whimsy and mysterious, so I guess I liked him too. I absolutely DID NOT LIKE either of Linc's love interests. Avril, a freaking saint, puritan to the core, is just too pure it's annoying. And Sydney, who comes along out of no where later on with powers like Linc's claiming they belong together every third page of the book. She was an utterly pointless character. ANNOYING!!
4. Romance- Oh boy. The romance was juvenile, way to mushy for my tastes, and repetitive! It also just felt FLAT. Linc and Avril are supposed to "be destined for each other" as they put it, but wherever I read their romance scenes, it screamed YAWN and FORCED. I don't know, even though they go through some heavy trials together, the FEELING just wasn't there for me, so it just seemed to take up space.
5. Ending- The ending was not too great. Basically it was not a "happily ever after" for anyone. It was, once again, too dramatic for me, which would have been great if it was the only super dramatic incident in the story, but since all these other outrageous moments of violence and killing came before it, it just tasted stale.
All in all, I felt this story could have been a mighty 3.5 stars, or 4 stars. But things just kind of fell apart in some places. It was like a roller coaster. Good moment, okay moment, Ugh moment, repeat. BUT it was still a fun read with some great mystery and character depth from our protagonist Linc, AKA, Blank. I would still recommend it, if your into the strange, slightly paranormal, YA mystery deal!