So far I have only read the first story, “The Playboy and the Widow.” Written in 1988 and supposedly updated and rewrapped in 2014. This shouldn’t have been updated. At the very least it really needed 2 editors to make sure stuff was updated.
Updated in 2014 and we still have the following:
Panty hose and age restrictions to wear them. Like what?
A man wearing a cutoff/cropped sweatshirt. Because in 2014 I don’t remember straight men wearing these. Maybe the bodybuilding gym rats? Weird.
No cell phones! Huh? 2014 update and not one person has a cell phone. Oh, but an iPad pops onto the scene later in the story.
The music artists mentioned in this story are all over the place.
The story was less cringe knowing it was written in the ancient times of ‘88. It is beyond cringy when it’s “updated” yet still outdated.
Beyond all of that nonsense the plot is terrible and execution takes it to downright horrendous. What a shame because this could have been a good story. It’s just bad writing. The characters aren’t really likeable. Maybe the kids, but even then they are annoying. Joan the 11 yr old is written as a 15-18 yr old girl. At one point she talks about luring boys by swaying her hips to hook them. Eww she’s supposed to be 11! The 8yr old daughter Katie at one point asks Cliff how her mother tastes after Cliff kisses Diana. Barf. WTH?!
On that disgusting note on to the second story, “Fallen Angel.”
Alright, I finished this one. It’s better, but barely. Amy is 23, turns 24 during story, and Josh is, I don’t know, 30ish. Agree with others the title is stupid and should have been something else more relevant. This dragged out a bit too long for me. Josh and Amy’s back and forth made me grow weary.
I don’t recommend either of these stories to anyone, even Macomber fans.