**Edited review**
Please note that the opinion in this review is MY OWN. There is a good chance it will differ from yours. We all have different expectations when reading a book and those expectations influence how we feel after reading.
This is a short story/novella. The cover is beautifully done. The artwork on the subject's arm is very interesting. I would have liked to see an explanation for the character's choice of tattoo because it is quite unusual.
At novella length (it took me less than 2 hours to finish), the characters seem to drown in the sexual situations and thus don't get the chance to fully develop. That's, in my opinion, a detriment not only to the story but also to the characters themselves. I would have liked to learn more about Leo, find out more about Erin, and what makes them tick.
Leo is a single man living above his store who finds a baby on his doorstep one morning, a baby he knows nothing about. A note tells him the mother is a one-night stand that should never have happened. He can barely remember her. Frazzled as he is, taking care of a newborn, he has a fender-bender with Erin, a hairdresser (?), who becomes involved quickly, coming by to bring food and clothes and whatnots for the little guy and starts to fall for Leo. The UST is awesome and Ms. Stacie describes it very well, but I wish they had taken a bit more time before taking off their clothes. The actual erotic scenes are wonderfully written and make this one hot read.
It's a wonderful premise but I wish the author had expanded on the story. It all feels rushed. About 1/3 of the book is taken up with sexual situations and that left me to wonder if they forget about Joe, the baby, while all that sexing is going on. He seems to sleep through a lot of the moaning and stuff yet Erin can hear Leo talk to Joe through paper-thin walls? Yes, the sex is hot and all, but distracts from the developing romance and the real-life issues that face them.
There was one situation where Erin cuts his hair that left me confused. It seemed to me that Leo took off his shirt when she started cutting but then shortly thereafter while kissing, she is described as fisting his shirt. That's either a plothole or I read that wrong.
(Sorry, I'm a details whore)
What REALLY bothered me was Leo's reaction to the baby-mamma showing up at the apartment. He seemed to almost want to convince her to care about the baby, which she clearly didn't. I didn't understand his reasoning. Based on what we found out about her at this point, I'm disgusted with her. What kind of mother drops off her baby with the daddy (who knows nothing about her pregnancy) and leaves without any contact information, not even making sure that he was found? Apparently, Carlie has issues with drugs and selfishness, and while that may be the case, I am left to wonder why Leo would want that kind of person in his son's life? My reaction upon finding the baby on my doorstep would have been to contact an attorney before the mother (if you can call her that) even showed up and have paperwork at the ready to make her relinquish all parental rights.
Leo is a good guy in a bad situation and Erin is a good woman who cares about him and his son very much. You can tell that from the glimpses you get of them in this novella. Joe will have a good life with the two of them, that much is clear. The small future view provided by the epilogue tells us as much.
It is not an easy task to flesh out characters in a short story and it is a credit to the author that she succeeded in making me care about the protagonists.
This was a valid effort and I liked the results. Very solid three stars. Absolutely worth the time spent reading.
Congratulations, Ms. Stacie. Nicely done. I look forward to more of your writing.