It is important to review this book under a specific lens: Leonard Cohen did not publish these stories, and thus in some way or another, they were not ready for the public eye. As such, there is a certain amount of leeway that can be granted here. The book consists of a short novel, and a variety of short stories with varying topics and characters.
The main novel, A Ballet of Lepers, is indistinguishably a Leonard Cohen piece. From the first sentence, his poetic and dramatized seeps through every line. Romantic and hopelessly artistic descriptions of both divine beauty and mundanely asinine normalities scatter throughout each paragraph, providing a good view of the artistry of his work. You can tell it is from early in his writing career, as his skills as a fiction writer develop throughout the book. At the beginning, sentences contain single, brief clauses or ideas, and are short, abrasive, abrupt. As the story progresses, sentences become longer, ideas become stretched out, ideas become more succinct, and the story begins to flow more naturally.
One thing about the novel is that I really did enjoy it. I was driven by the story, intrigued by the characters, and once I had figured out what was happening behind the overly romantic descriptions, could not stop reading. That being said, after reading the book, I was left with a strange feeling: I did not agree with the lesson being told here.
Cohen, in this novel, seems to convey love as a violent and cowardly thing to do. In this book, relationships are described less as love and more as an eventual necessity; when someone becomes too bored, too tired, too old to continue pursuing others, a relationship becomes a sad eventuality. I do not agree with this, however, it has been a fulfilling perspective to try and reason with.
I think the core component behind the violence and cowardice present and associated with love in this novel is the idea of loneliness. Nobody wants to be lonely, something that I find ironic considering that the relationships described in this novel (the supposed solution to this problem) seem to be the loneliest of all. From this perspective, the narrator seems to view love as a pointless endeavor altogether. That being said, reflection upon this idea has led me to some equally positive ones. If I could talk to the narrator, I would express that love should not be a solution to anything, especially loneliness. Love is an opportunity, something that presents itself to you and takes over completely. To look for love, means you are looking for a solution. Love has to come to you, and when it does, it is happy, hopeful, romantic, and inspiring - none of which are feelings or ideas shared with the narrator. This type of love is an addition to a life moving forward, not a solution to part of a life in the past.
Unfortunately, the short stories did not hit the mark for me. There were a select few I quite enjoyed; Saint Jig, the stories with Mr. Eumer, and Short Story on Greek Island. However, I felt that the overly artistic and dramatic writing style did not lend itself as well to short story form, as it became difficult to follow what was happening, who was talking, and what the story way. The stories listed above were concrete about the characters, the plot, and and setting, which made them much more digestible to read. The short stories also diverged a little bit from the hopeless rhetoric of the novel, although sometimes in an equally negative direction. Short Story on Greek Island I found especially interesting, and really enjoyed the setting, but did not escape the association between violence and love that I find a bit jarring in this setting. Similarly, the stories of Mr. Eumer were interesting and fully fleshed out, but felt uncomfortable at times. Saint Jig, I would love to read a full book of.
Although the messaging of the book may not have resonated with me, it prompted some valuable reflection. I read this book in its entirety side by side with my lovely girlfriend. We talked with each other about how the book made us feel, and our thoughts on love and how it was portrayed here. I appreciated the opportunity to connect in this way, and it made me grateful that the love that found me was an opportunity, not a solution.