The One Who Changes the Future (Book #2): A Dystopian Portal Progression Fantasy Series

The One Who Changes the Future #2

by Boris Romanovsky

The next book of the series! The One Who Changes the Future (Book #3):

I’ve traveled twenty-two years into the past to change the future and prevent the nightmare awaiting planet Earth. I’ve started altering the course of events in the present radically, creating every possible advantage for myself and my family. I need power and influence to save Earth from destruction.

I have already succeeded in a few ways. I’ve built my own team in the Primordial World and obtained the powerful ability I sought. My grandfather and mother have stockpiled prodigious amounts of liquid helium-3, which will help them solidify their power in the future.

But I've just received distressing news from home. There was a massacre at our residence. My father has been killed, along with all our servants. In my previous life, he didn’t die this early. In this one, his death was a direct result of my actions.

And now I can't help wondering what further consequences my interference might have.

Genres: Fantasy

399 pages, Kindle Edition

Published January 7, 2025

Reviews

[Murphies_law · Rating 3 out of 5]

Nice plot but a bit wooden adaption

I loved the intrigues and the changes of the future but often the story seemed written for a teen audience..

I liked the part about little Bunsy.


Criticism and comments

I hated the excessive use of the the pronoun they for single entities! (Which then switched to he all of a sudden..)

If the all organisations, clans and nations on Earth desperately compete over having the most and the strongest evolvers nobody would allow independent evolver groups to be established!

The characters act rather juvenile..

A spaceship made of a glass-like substance with masts for sails was a bit hard to swallow for me..

The interactions with thevon Belgas felt REALLY contrived! The chances of encountering his new nemesis by accident the way he did are that astronomically low that they close to non-existent..

I found it bizarre that they let so many witnesses of the moon accident live..

[Travis · Rating 4 out of 5]

I received a review copy of this book.
I'm not sure I entirely agree with the description of the book. The main character was directly responsible for the raid on his home, but he didn't have anything to do with the killings. On the other hand, he has put in motion events that speed up the timeline in multiple ways, not just for loosing people, but for major events that took place years later in his original timeline. Things are definitely balanced on a knife edge, and how the players react will set the stage for future books in the series. I'm certainly waiting for more books in this series, since this one seems to lay a lot of groundwork for significant events that are to take place soon, and watching how that all pans out will be extremely interesting.

[Johnny · Rating 5 out of 5]

I received an advanced reader copy Of this particular, to check the translation that was done by an AI. This is the 1st time I've ever received an arc and not found of single mistake. So I was a little impressed. The story is also extremely good. I like the fact that he didn't really change all that much, And yet it's totally screwed up the timeline, And he has no idea what's coming next.
It's like he sped up the process.

I'm giving it 10 out of 10BecauseBecause, Why not ? I think this is probably one of the only books I found that has no mistakes. That I could find anyway.

[M. · Rating 4 out of 5]

In general, I like the story.

However, the writer makes so many of the characters immature, foolish, irrational and just plain clueless. I don't understand what the author's goal is in doing this.

Add to that, the usually sane main protagonist behaves like a lovesick puppy towards the notion of rejoining his lost mate. Emotional and pathetic. *sigh*

[William G. Weller · Rating 4 out of 5]

Path forward

Once again the protagonist struggles to sort what was to current time and works hard to stop major conflicts. Last time people died by the millions and this time we must be ready for the invasion. Sometimes he mentions stuff in passing but time and opportunities slip away with others trying to take power and leave him dead

[Devan · Rating 4 out of 5]

too much politics

This was good but got bogged down with all the politics and espionage. I do like Vladislav’s power set and potential for growth. Hopefully the next book focuses more on the Primordial World and Vladislav’s next DNA spiral.

[Ray Ritchey · Rating 5 out of 5]

Intriguing

Excellent book 2. Amazing world building with lots of action. Politics is well done and interesting government set ups. Fun read.

[Michael Burnett · Rating 5 out of 5]

Great Book

Great Book I can't wait to read the next book in the series I would recommend this author to anyone

[Grant Merrifield · Rating 5 out of 5]

Woot book Two.

Great book Two.
Can't wait for book three.
I highly enjoyed the story.
As well as the characters.
Pax pax.

[Dantegideon · Rating 3 out of 5]

Decent ideas but a bit of a grindfest.