2⭐️ this was just… plain, it had little plot whatsoever, but it wasn’t necessarily bad, it just lacks in a lot of aspects.
there’s plot lines that are just not well discussed ???(kinda spoiler) but, josie was a dv victim and it’s just thrown out there out of nowhere and not discussed or talked about as profoundly as i’d hoped i guess (?? same as her injury (although a little more) and wyatt’s backstory.
——> everything in regards to that, feels like they were created through a bullet point list, in order to simply add things to a character, instead of adding it as something to give them background, and depth, and to get to understand how they really are and behave, because it’s not well developed. that feeling for me, is something books shouldn't achieve, because it makes you disconnect from the story and it makes stuff feel like a filler.
also, there’s a lot of characters around all the time, that are just there for the sake of using them as future main characters in the next books, that don’t add anything to the story. there’s wayyyyy too many scenes with them that just feel childish and wattpadish.
did i hate this? no
did i looooove this? nope
would i read this again? absolutely not
did i like the characters? yes, wyatt (and maybe mateo)
would i recommend this? not really, if you don’t like the sort of thing i mentioned, but, if you’re just looking for a book with hockey vibes and cute main characters go for it
i wanted to like this more because the author seems so sweet! and in no way i wanna discourage her and her work, since i believe there’s so much room for improvement, and also this is her first published novel, which makes me think the next ones are gonna be much better, hopefully.
(am i interested in continuing the series? only here for landon and lydia🤞🏼)