Read this review at your own risk. Possible spoilers below.
I'm on the fence with this series. At first I really really was drawn in and couldn't put the book down. I'm a sucker for the damsel in distress being rescued by the powerful, elusive, scary hero. Where she struggles to find herself after years of abuse and is very guarded with everyone and everything. I enjoy a story that unfolds of her finding her way and this world is unique in the post apocalyptic setting. I found the story well written and for the most part enjoyable, but I'm having a very hard time getting behind the MFC in this story. It's understandable that she is naive to how the world has changed since she was forced into servitude for a vampire master as a blood slave and locked away, beaten and tortured into submission almost ten years ago, however, for as smart as she seems, she doesn't learn or adapt to her new situation and continues to make odd, even bad choices which I can only assume serves the author to move the plot forward. Rather than find out what's been happening all of this time through narrative or actions of others, the MFC has to learn about each thing by personally experiencing it, even if she's been told about the horrid things happening outside the walls that keep her safe and how to avoid it. She continually puts herself in danger after telling herself that she is strong, but when faced with a new monster she freezes and is practically useless arguing with herself why she should or shouldn't hurt said creature and eventually has to be rescued by someone else or loses her weapon. So instead of understanding how things have gotten this depraved in the world and what the bigger picture is, I find myself screaming at her to listen to the one person she instinctually trusts one minute, feeling in her gut she must save him, to disregard anything he tells her to help keep her safe the next. If this is a love story its incredibly slooooooow burn. The heroes have said about five words to each other and spent even less time in each others presence. I started book two, but put it down for the moment frustrated that the two main characters spent much of book one separated, have barely had a chance to even get to know one another and are once again separated as she has left the building, wandered away from its protection, met a new character and run away with him to escape a deadly monster chasing them down. This is how we meet another faction in this world and I'm guessing how she "learns" about what is happening with them.
This story is a mix of The Walking Dead meets The Blood Alliance Series meets The Stand. I really want to love this series but I picked thinking it was a love story mixed in the pages of this world. While it might be there (hints of reincarnation) I am not a fan of the trope of separating the two main characters, especially at this point because they have spent all of five minutes together. I'm also disappointed because we seem to now be focused on the minutia of this world and we don't yet even understand the hierarchy of everyone/everything. There are Kings, but we don't know anything about how that came to be or who the other kings are. His brother wants him dead or overthrown. Who is he working with? Who's to say. Then there's the Death Bringers who we spend some time with. They are immune to the virus that wiped out most of the world. Instead we are left with our naive MFC while she wonders if she can sense the human that the crazy monster used to be. Ugh. This would be so much better if I cared about our gal but she just makes so many dumb mistakes and choices that this feels too convenient at this point in the plot. I will likely finish this at some point and if it gets better I'll be back to change my review. It had so much potential in the beginning but has been kind of a letdown going into book two...