2.5 ⭐
I can't decide whether to give this 2 or 3, so I'll settle for 2.5 ⭐ Also, long rant review ahead.
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Background:
Wyatt (38) wants to have a kid, but the surrogacy agency has been failing to find him a candidate. He rejected the 12 women they suggested to him, and the agency decided to dump him as a client.
Everly, his niece, was mad about it, so she took it upon herself to find a suitable woman for her uncle. She met Trista (28) by accident on the street, actually outside of the agency. She was rejected by the same surrogacy agency because apparently she's way too "fat" to be a "belly buddy babysitter".
Everly propositioned her with the surrogacy idea, and Trista agreed to meet Wyatt. Story short, they met, did the interview, and eventually finalized everything. She got pregnant turkey-baster style and was living in the mountains with Wyatt and his two brothers.
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Trista has so much baggage, and she exasperated the crap out of me. She always put up a fight every time Wyatt offered his help with anything or gave her things that would be helpful to her and to the baby. But she doesn't have any issues taking help from other people. How Wyatt didn't lose his ever-loving mind with her is so beyond me. This woman's pride was something else; it's not even funny. She only took her head out of her ass around the 92% mark—way too little, too late for me.
I partially understand that it was a deep-seated issue thanks to her awful family, but I did expect for her to see that Wyatt and his family are different from her. The constant back and forth, pushing away, and stubbornness were grating on my nerves. Why is she upset when he spends money on her when she has no means of supporting herself anyway? She took this job for the money, after all.
She's sassy; I'll give her that, it even gives her the appearance of confidence. But deep down, she has these insecurities about her weight and familial connection. She said she loves her body, but sometimes her running thoughts show a different picture. There are numerous occasions where she referred to herself as "fat," and idk, it's probably a personal thing, but I don't like it when FMCs use this to describe themselves. I do understand the need to acknowledge that she's curvy, but to use this fact as a reason to look down on herself is something I'll never be fine with. I'm just glad that Wyatt showed her that she's beautiful in his eyes, and that's all that matters.
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Wyatt is hellbent on becoming a father. I think it was mostly because he misses his late dad. He's a grump, or so they say, but I'm still unsure how to describe him. He's quiet; he only grunts, harrumphs, and scowls every time. This guy frequently seems to have a thin thread of patience, and he snaps most of the time. But I have to say he's protective, caring, and always willing to help Trista. Yet, for some reason, I didn't connect with him. I guess it's probably because of his attitude on most days. I don't think I have it in me to deal with such a person; it'll drain my energy. 🥲
And the reason why he didn't pursue relationships anymore gave me the major ick. Spoiler: A decade ago, he and his two brothers ended up secretly dating the same woman for months. Yuck. It started with a bet between them to see who could score her (an immature and irritating bet). But the thing was, she played them all. This woman lived in the mountains with them. So imagine them hiding from each other the fact that they were screwing the same woman. It was just freaking gross. 🤢 And this nasty witch turned out to be married and pregnant, and she told them that it was Wyatt's. He was more than willing to marry this woman and create a family with her. Thankfully, the truth came out, but it ruined their brotherly relationship, which took years to fix. Since then, they have vowed not to let women come between them again.
Hence, that's why he showed some trust issues with Trista and some pushing away too because he didn't want to get close to her. But of course, that failed, and he fell in love with her.
Idk, but his personality and backstory made me like him less. Even at the start of the book, I can feel that I'm not going to like him. But reading how he interacted with people and his reason for refusing to entertain real relationships made me even less interested in him.
Sure, he has his good sides; I think he's going to nail the father role, and as for a romantic partner, I think he's going to be good as well. I mean, he did get over his hangups, so I guess he would be fine after all. But the fact that he also took a long time to see that he wanted Trista, not just a surrogate, kind of took away the enjoyment I had from his realization. 🤷♀️
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Overall, the fact that it took me two days to finish this is, I think, more than enough to show that I didn't enjoy it—not that it's entirely bad, but I keep losing my interest. The MCs kind of made it hard to actually enjoy the book. They were both unlikeable, at least the way I see it. Their issues took a long time to be dealt with. Had they talked about it and found the courage to take a leap of faith, I bet there would have been more sweet moments between them. The last 8% of the book was actually nice and made me feel less annoyed, but it was very short to erase the overwhelming disappointment I felt while reading this. Anyway, while this didn't work for me, other readers might enjoy it more than I did.
Book info:
- Small town romance
- Grumpy-sunshine
- Age gap (10)
- Surrogacy
- Absentee parents
- Barn full of animals
- Slowburn-ish (spice @ 57%)
- No cheating, OPD, breakup
- Non-virgin MCs (both sexually active, thank God)
- HFN (engaged with a new born daughter)
- Bonus epilogue (5 yrs later, married, with two kids)
PS. The second book is about Calder, the most disgusting hoe of these brothers. It was entitled "The Seven Year Itch" so is it safe to assume he was pining for Dakota while whoring around? But, tbf, it was said she was married and just got divorced. I'm not sure, though, if she was married for those seven years. 🤷♀️ Anyway, I'm gonna skip that book.