3 ⭐
I had very high expectations based on other Goodreads reviews. Now that I’ve finished it, I feel a little underwhelmed. *Spoilers below*
The premise is interesting, the characters are likeable, and the pacing is generally good. Audrey's novel is very creative and eloquent. It’s by no means a bad book or badly written. However, the story itself falls flat. I feel like nothing really happened. Up until Rae left the palace, the book was slow and overly descriptive. I practically learned everyone’s daily schedule because it kept being repeated—mundane details that made the story feel stagnant.
Davian letting Rae go on a dangerous mission into enemy territory, despite knowing who she is and how utterly defenceless she is, made no sense. It also rendered Pearce’s supposed grand gesture of keeping her secret meaningless—someone else already knew, which undermined its significance.
The "plot twist" wasn’t really a twist. It was an obvious setup from the start. A secret underground kingdom, Kermera, is described in a book. Two mysterious men, whose presence on the mission raises suspicion, have origins that remain deliberately vague. Then, Pearce starts acting cryptic about the book. It's repeatedly pointed out how no one knows where they're from. I'm not sure if we were supposed to be surprised that Pearce and Jaali are from Kermera.
As soon as fire powers are mentioned, every single adjective and verb linked to heat and fire is used about Rae. We get it, she has fire powers. While it’s a solid setup, I don’t want to feel like I’m trudging through one long book of backstory, setup, and world-building just to get to the actual story in book two.
Her parents’ reaction or lack-thereof to her leaving was also baffling. They didn’t question where she was going, despite knowing close to nothing about the people she was traveling with—while believing that war was about to break out again?
Reynard’s character was painfully flat and felt like a mere plot device to contrast a bad male love interest against Pearce, the good one. His entire personality boiled down to “I want you, Rae. Why don’t you want me?”
Overall, the book isn’t bad, but it’s painfully predictable. There was no major reveal, no shocking betrayal—just a setup for what feels like the real story in book two.