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Halloween Fumble
One night. Two players. One goal.
We were two strangers at a party… the devil and the wolf giving into an anonymous attraction.
But when the masks come off the next day, I realize that I went too far.
Theo McLaughlin.
My little brother’s best friend.
He’s as off limits as they come, and yet… I can’t help myself.
Wanting Theo is hard, but resisting Theo is even harder.
Halloween Fumble is a hot and fast Halloween hook up novella. It is a prequel with a happy-for-now ending leading up to a full novel coming early 2025. The content is meant for readers 18+ so please read responsibly.
We were two strangers at a party… the devil and the wolf giving into an anonymous attraction.
But when the masks come off the next day, I realize that I went too far.
Theo McLaughlin.
My little brother’s best friend.
He’s as off limits as they come, and yet… I can’t help myself.
Wanting Theo is hard, but resisting Theo is even harder.
Halloween Fumble is a hot and fast Halloween hook up novella. It is a prequel with a happy-for-now ending leading up to a full novel coming early 2025. The content is meant for readers 18+ so please read responsibly.
65 pages, Kindle Edition
Published October 13, 2024
About the author
A. Winchester
35 books294 followersWord Nerd, Connoisseur of adventures of a literary nature, Would die first in a Supernatural episode.
I’m an author, reader, and most importantly, a nerd. I love all things superheroes, demon hunters, and long-running movies and tv shows. I enjoy diving deep into characters and their stories, journeying with them while figuring out who they are. It’s the goal I have for all the characters I create and hope you find a way to connect with them.
I’m an author, reader, and most importantly, a nerd. I love all things superheroes, demon hunters, and long-running movies and tv shows. I enjoy diving deep into characters and their stories, journeying with them while figuring out who they are. It’s the goal I have for all the characters I create and hope you find a way to connect with them.
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September 21, 2026
Picked this up to prepare for the full book dropping next month. I wanted to be ready.
A one night Halloween frat party hookup with a masked man who wasn't supposed to be there causing a very inconvenient crush.
Forbidden romance,age gap, brother’s best friend. This has all the ingredients for a messy chaotic story.
The plot moves fast. It is Insta lust with no hint of a slow burn. What I can’t wait to see is how it becomes something deeper.
Im guessing we'll get more on Rhodes' military background along with Theo's journey figuring out his sexuality.
I already know the full story is going to be angsty and spicy. I will be counting down the days.
A one night Halloween frat party hookup with a masked man who wasn't supposed to be there causing a very inconvenient crush.
Forbidden romance,age gap, brother’s best friend. This has all the ingredients for a messy chaotic story.
The plot moves fast. It is Insta lust with no hint of a slow burn. What I can’t wait to see is how it becomes something deeper.
Im guessing we'll get more on Rhodes' military background along with Theo's journey figuring out his sexuality.
I already know the full story is going to be angsty and spicy. I will be counting down the days.
June 10, 2025
4.5**** stars
I AM HYPED!!!!
I’ve been holding out on this hot little prequel because Rhode’s and Theo’s actual story was supposed to drop this October. But now the release date is sadly in the wind for now.
Well, I’m not going to be mad when I have to re-read this shorty when it finally does come. Can’t wait!!
🏈 Masked Halloween Party Hookup with a Stranger
🏈 Not A Virgin Any Longer
🏈 Best Friend’s older Brother (20/31)
🏈 College Athlete (Football) + Military MC
🏈 in the Closet
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Illumine Series
Book 1 - Halloween Fumble - 4.5 stars
Book 2 - Game On - release tbd
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pre-read note to self: this is the prequel to Game On which is expected to release in October 2025.
Dedication:
For anyone who ever wanted to be fucked by a masked man on Halloween… live vicariously through Theo & enjoy Rhodes.
I AM HYPED!!!!
I’ve been holding out on this hot little prequel because Rhode’s and Theo’s actual story was supposed to drop this October. But now the release date is sadly in the wind for now.
Well, I’m not going to be mad when I have to re-read this shorty when it finally does come. Can’t wait!!
🏈 Masked Halloween Party Hookup with a Stranger
🏈 Not A Virgin Any Longer
🏈 Best Friend’s older Brother (20/31)
🏈 College Athlete (Football) + Military MC
🏈 in the Closet
“Hold still, little wolf,”
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Illumine Series
Book 1 - Halloween Fumble - 4.5 stars
Book 2 - Game On - release tbd
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pre-read note to self: this is the prequel to Game On which is expected to release in October 2025.
June 10, 2025
Not gonna lie, this prequel novella has me foaming at the mouth a little bit for the full length novel that's planned for Theo and Rhodes.
Rhodes, ex-army with all the associated baggage, has a hot, anonymous one night stand at a college Halloween party only to find out the next day, the person he was having kinky sex with was actually his little brothers best friend who he hasn't seen in 10 years.
There's no way it can happen again.....right? (Tehehehe they're definitely gonna hook up again)
Rhodes, ex-army with all the associated baggage, has a hot, anonymous one night stand at a college Halloween party only to find out the next day, the person he was having kinky sex with was actually his little brothers best friend who he hasn't seen in 10 years.
There's no way it can happen again.....right? (Tehehehe they're definitely gonna hook up again)
October 30, 2025
I followed the Devil into the dark, and I liked it.
Sometimes you need 54 pages of:
Hookups
Halloween party
Wolf and devil masks 🐺 👹
Masks stays on
Safe word
Age gap
Dom/sub
Insta attraction
Hot af bathroom sex
Tonight you’re mine
Relax for me
Get on your knees
Dirty talk to combust
Next day surprises
Brothers best friend
I’m game if you are 🙏
So, ending this and knowing their full novel is coming ? 🥵🙏🫡 oh yeah I’ll be there in the first row waiting, because come on🫦🫦🫦
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While this is primarily just a hot and fast novella, please know you will encounter the following content on page that could be a trigger: risky loss of virginity, use of kink without prior permission or discussion, mentions of a parent with cancer, mentions of hiding sexuality from homophobic family members, the use of masks during sexual activity, and anonymous sex. Please know this book contains explicit sexual content including cum play, controlled orgasms, oral sex, anal sex, breath play/choking, risky public play (bathroom during a party), and dirty talk.
Sometimes you need 54 pages of:
Hookups
Halloween party
Wolf and devil masks 🐺 👹
Masks stays on
Safe word
Age gap
Dom/sub
Insta attraction
Hot af bathroom sex
Tonight you’re mine
Relax for me
Get on your knees
Dirty talk to combust
Next day surprises
Brothers best friend
I’m game if you are 🙏
So, ending this and knowing their full novel is coming ? 🥵🙏🫡 oh yeah I’ll be there in the first row waiting, because come on🫦🫦🫦
“Breathe, little wolf,” I coaxed, my tone gentle. Weaving my fingers in his soft hair, I tipped his head back until he was staring at me in the mirror. Even after his own release, he looked far from satiated—full of lust and need. “Relax and let me in.”
“Look at you. Such a greedy little wolf. Look at how desperate you are… fucking yourself on my cock. Do you want more, little wolf?” That dark voice was sinfully sexy, only threatening to ruin me more.
“Yes.”
“Tongue out,” he growled, furiously stroking his cock. I did as he asked, waiting almost impatiently for him to come. His loud grunts filled the bathroom while he held my head still. Thick streams of cum shot on my tongue. It hit my throat and slipped down my chin while I greedily took what he gave me. When I started to close my mouth, he snapped, “Don’t you dare fucking swallow.”(…)
“Look at me when you come, little wolf,” he ordered when my eyes drifted shut. He held my gaze as his pace picked up until I came violently. My heart practically stopped in my chest as some kind of wild sound fell out of me. I didn’t even recognize who I was anymore. I clung for dear life to his forearm while my dick jerked in his hand. Even when the euphoric calm hit, I still held onto him. I didn’t trust myself to let go. There was a good chance I’d fall over. That second orgasm turned me into putty. Every muscle in my body melted while my mind floated. “You can swallow now.”
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While this is primarily just a hot and fast novella, please know you will encounter the following content on page that could be a trigger: risky loss of virginity, use of kink without prior permission or discussion, mentions of a parent with cancer, mentions of hiding sexuality from homophobic family members, the use of masks during sexual activity, and anonymous sex. Please know this book contains explicit sexual content including cum play, controlled orgasms, oral sex, anal sex, breath play/choking, risky public play (bathroom during a party), and dirty talk.
July 20, 2026
A short, steamy novella about a Halloween hookup and everything that comes after. If Theo and Rhodes are actually going to make it work, these two are going to hit quite a few bumps before they figure out what they actually want.
As for me, it would be better without all the drama at the end. I definitely wouldn’t want to read 400 pages of Rhodes trying to get his shit together—that’s just not my cup of tea. But the chemistry and tension between Rhodes and Theo? Absolutely insane. You can’t take that away from them.
I think there’s supposed to be another novella about these two, right? Overall, I really enjoyed the author’s writing style, and now I’m curious to check out more of her books.
As for me, it would be better without all the drama at the end. I definitely wouldn’t want to read 400 pages of Rhodes trying to get his shit together—that’s just not my cup of tea. But the chemistry and tension between Rhodes and Theo? Absolutely insane. You can’t take that away from them.
I think there’s supposed to be another novella about these two, right? Overall, I really enjoyed the author’s writing style, and now I’m curious to check out more of her books.
September 1, 2026
4.5 ⭐️
Holy hotness Batman!
This was absolutely delicious and I cannot wait for Game On.
𝗪𝗛𝗔𝗧 𝗧𝗢 𝗘𝗫𝗣𝗘𝗖𝗧:
- anonymous hook up
- college athlete + military vet
- brother's best friend
- age gap (20/31)
- virgin MC
Holy hotness Batman!
This was absolutely delicious and I cannot wait for Game On.
𝗪𝗛𝗔𝗧 𝗧𝗢 𝗘𝗫𝗣𝗘𝗖𝗧:
- anonymous hook up
- college athlete + military vet
- brother's best friend
- age gap (20/31)
- virgin MC
October 4, 2024
"Even as a former church-going kid, I never dropped to my knees so fucking fast in my life."
Goofy smiling n blushin. 50ish pages was such a tease! Y'all will love this this lil pickle tickler.
Their chemistry. Rhodes dirty talk. Their masks. Omg and the texts at the end 🤭 I loved it. Their book is gonna be so good.I can't wait.
I'm off to go stalk the authors socials.
Thank you for the arc.
Release date - October 15th
"Look at you. Such a greedy little wolf. Look at how desperate you are...fucking yourself on my cock. Do you want more, little wolf?"
Goofy smiling n blushin. 50ish pages was such a tease! Y'all will love this this lil pickle tickler.
Their chemistry. Rhodes dirty talk. Their masks. Omg and the texts at the end 🤭 I loved it. Their book is gonna be so good.I can't wait.
I'm off to go stalk the authors socials.
Thank you for the arc.
Release date - October 15th
"Look at you. Such a greedy little wolf. Look at how desperate you are...fucking yourself on my cock. Do you want more, little wolf?"
October 30, 2024
2.5⭐️ This just didn't feel complete to me. It either needed more plot or less 🤷🏼♀️
October 31, 2025
Theo + Rhodes 🖤
Brothers best friend | Age gap | Anonymous hookup
Rhodes is back in town and unknowingly "runs into" Theo, his baby brother's best friend, on a mask only party night. They walk in the bathroom, create a safe word and get down to business. They horrifyingly identify each other the next day when they see each others tattoos.
I need more of them ASAP. I'm glad they're getting a full book because there is zero closure in this one.
⚠️potential spoilers below in detailed tropes, content and warning lists
Tropes/content:
12 year age gap (19 & 31)
Brothers best friend
Best friends older brother
Surprise virgin
Anonymous hookups with masks
"On your knees"
Choking
HFN
Warnings:
Underage drinking and intoxication
Brothers best friend | Age gap | Anonymous hookup
Rhodes is back in town and unknowingly "runs into" Theo, his baby brother's best friend, on a mask only party night. They walk in the bathroom, create a safe word and get down to business. They horrifyingly identify each other the next day when they see each others tattoos.
I need more of them ASAP. I'm glad they're getting a full book because there is zero closure in this one.
⚠️potential spoilers below in detailed tropes, content and warning lists
Tropes/content:
12 year age gap (19 & 31)
Brothers best friend
Best friends older brother
Surprise virgin
Anonymous hookups with masks
"On your knees"
Choking
HFN
Warnings:
Underage drinking and intoxication
July 17, 2026
I’ll admit I was intrigued by a short and spicy novel by A. Winchester after being traumatised by Burned&Bound 🥲
But I loved everything, it was so hot, one hell of a fumble! Give me more brooding Rhodes 🤤
not only that though, now I am so intrigued by how this story is going to play out, so WDYM the follow-up novel isn’t out yet 😭😭😭
But I loved everything, it was so hot, one hell of a fumble! Give me more brooding Rhodes 🤤
not only that though, now I am so intrigued by how this story is going to play out, so WDYM the follow-up novel isn’t out yet 😭😭😭
November 2, 2025
3.5 stars
I read this primarily to calm down from the high of my own Halloween party😂 and it was enjoyable without being particularly ground breaking.
The attempt at making the romance forbidden (brother’s best friend) was cute but unnecessary when both MCs already had parents who refused to accept their sexuality. The spooky vibes weren’t thaaaaat strong but the story was decently written.
Expect
- Age gap
- Brother’s best friend
- Forced proximity
- Forbidden romance
- Homophobic parents
- Small town
Kindle freebie: 30.10.25
I read this primarily to calm down from the high of my own Halloween party😂 and it was enjoyable without being particularly ground breaking.
The attempt at making the romance forbidden (brother’s best friend) was cute but unnecessary when both MCs already had parents who refused to accept their sexuality. The spooky vibes weren’t thaaaaat strong but the story was decently written.
Expect
- Age gap
- Brother’s best friend
- Forced proximity
- Forbidden romance
- Homophobic parents
- Small town
Kindle freebie: 30.10.25
November 14, 2025
“Sex, booze, and Halloween. What wasn’t to love?”
I cannot explain how glad I am that this is a prequel novella because I NEED more from Theo and Rhodes!!! I know there’s zero depth in this book, but I can see the potential. I could tell there’s so much more to Rhodes and Theo, there’s real potential for a deeper emotional connection between them. I loved everything this novella gave me; it was clearly a Halloween smut novella, and it was a great one! I’ll be excitedly waiting for a full book about these two.
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Quotes:
“Even as a former church-going kid, I never dropped to my knees so fucking fast in my life as I did when the Devil ordered me to.”
“Tonight, you’re mine,” I told him. “You come from my hand only, not yours. Test me and see what happens.”
“My heart kicked up wildly in my chest. Oh, fuck. Fuck… fuck… fuckity fuck. I lost my virginity to Rhodes Kennedy. Holy fuck, I’d had sex with Jude’s brother.”
“I hurt. Everywhere. My head throbbed with the hangover from hell, and that hook-up had left a mark on me. I felt it everywhere. My ass, my hips, my neck. I could feel the Devil all over me.”
“I think you liked fucking some hot young thing in a dark bathroom while dressed like the devil.”
“Hell, I didn’t care if I was Rhodes Kennedy’s dirty little secret if that meant he would use me all over again.”
I cannot explain how glad I am that this is a prequel novella because I NEED more from Theo and Rhodes!!! I know there’s zero depth in this book, but I can see the potential. I could tell there’s so much more to Rhodes and Theo, there’s real potential for a deeper emotional connection between them. I loved everything this novella gave me; it was clearly a Halloween smut novella, and it was a great one! I’ll be excitedly waiting for a full book about these two.
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Quotes:
“Even as a former church-going kid, I never dropped to my knees so fucking fast in my life as I did when the Devil ordered me to.”
“Tonight, you’re mine,” I told him. “You come from my hand only, not yours. Test me and see what happens.”
“My heart kicked up wildly in my chest. Oh, fuck. Fuck… fuck… fuckity fuck. I lost my virginity to Rhodes Kennedy. Holy fuck, I’d had sex with Jude’s brother.”
“I hurt. Everywhere. My head throbbed with the hangover from hell, and that hook-up had left a mark on me. I felt it everywhere. My ass, my hips, my neck. I could feel the Devil all over me.”
“I think you liked fucking some hot young thing in a dark bathroom while dressed like the devil.”
“Hell, I didn’t care if I was Rhodes Kennedy’s dirty little secret if that meant he would use me all over again.”
October 11, 2024
72 pages is not enough Addison! I was so happy when I got to the end and read we’ll be getting Rhodes and Theo’s story very soon in 2025!
Spicy Halloween prequel with masks. This is everything I need for the month of October. I loved the little taste of Rhodes and Theo’s story that had me craving more as soon as I read the last page.
I just want to say the age gap is perfection (perfect ages 31 and 20) with the best friend’s brother trope, I feel like this book was written for me. It was quick, fun, spicy and all around such a great read.
If you’re looking of the perfect little book to fly through that features a Halloween party and some spice look no further this is it! I might just be picking it up again Halloween night to fully immerse myself in the Halloween vibes.
Spicy Halloween prequel with masks. This is everything I need for the month of October. I loved the little taste of Rhodes and Theo’s story that had me craving more as soon as I read the last page.
I just want to say the age gap is perfection (perfect ages 31 and 20) with the best friend’s brother trope, I feel like this book was written for me. It was quick, fun, spicy and all around such a great read.
If you’re looking of the perfect little book to fly through that features a Halloween party and some spice look no further this is it! I might just be picking it up again Halloween night to fully immerse myself in the Halloween vibes.
October 28, 2025
3.5 stars
September 27, 2026
I need the full length book immediately.
October 26, 2025
this was exactly what it said on the tin — short, spicy, hidden identities, brothers best friend, age gap. love a Halloween novella.
January 2, 2025
Lol, guess my first book of 2025 was a short, filthy, mask sex one. This was hot though!
A short story that's basically the first few chapters of an upcoming book (or the prologue to it?)
Two masked guys have hot sex in a frat house bathroom on Halloween, thinking they're strangers. Turns out they're not, as Rhodes is Theo's best friend's older brother, back home for the first time in over a decade, and they really shouldn't be hooking up.
Can't wait for the full book!
A short story that's basically the first few chapters of an upcoming book (or the prologue to it?)
Two masked guys have hot sex in a frat house bathroom on Halloween, thinking they're strangers. Turns out they're not, as Rhodes is Theo's best friend's older brother, back home for the first time in over a decade, and they really shouldn't be hooking up.
Can't wait for the full book!
November 3, 2025
Halloween Fumble by A. Winchester
❤️ Anonymous Hookup
❤️ Brothers Best Friend
❤️ Age Gap (11 years)
❤️ Virgin MC
❤️ Halloween Frat Party
❤️ Novella
🔥 Dirty Talk, Masks, Cum Play, Orgasm Control, Breath Play/Choking, Face Fucking, Semi-Public S*x (bathroom during a party)
Overall: ⭐⭐⭐⭐
Spice: 🌶️🌶️.5
Humour: 🤭🤭
Intimacy: 🫂
Angst: 🥺🥺
First person dual pov 👀
Content Warnings
On page: undernegotiated kink
Mentioned: parent with cancer, homophobic family members, PTSD, hazing
❤️ Anonymous Hookup
❤️ Brothers Best Friend
❤️ Age Gap (11 years)
❤️ Virgin MC
❤️ Halloween Frat Party
❤️ Novella
🔥 Dirty Talk, Masks, Cum Play, Orgasm Control, Breath Play/Choking, Face Fucking, Semi-Public S*x (bathroom during a party)
Overall: ⭐⭐⭐⭐
Spice: 🌶️🌶️.5
Humour: 🤭🤭
Intimacy: 🫂
Angst: 🥺🥺
First person dual pov 👀
Content Warnings
On page: undernegotiated kink
Mentioned: parent with cancer, homophobic family members, PTSD, hazing
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
February 16, 2025
2.5 ✨️
I feel like this wanted to be a short story and a full-length novel at the same time so you kind of get too much plot and yet not enough to get invested 🤷♀️
I feel like this wanted to be a short story and a full-length novel at the same time so you kind of get too much plot and yet not enough to get invested 🤷♀️
July 26, 2026
It’s a light-speed hookup without the slightest buildup. Plus, getting put into choke play by a total stranger with zero communication completely kills the vibe. And what the hell was that ending?
March 19, 2026
5/5 ⭐️
A short and deliciously hot read, just like it promises.
And since masked men are clearly my downfall, I already know I’ll be one-clicking the second their full novel drops.

A short and deliciously hot read, just like it promises.
And since masked men are clearly my downfall, I already know I’ll be one-clicking the second their full novel drops.
”Even as a former church-going kid, I never dropped to my knees so fucking fast in my life as I did when the Devil ordered me to.”

October 28, 2025
Okay, so I read this . It was short, it was on point, and it was smutty. As advertised by the author, this was a smutty story with 2 hot guys wearing Halloween masks and doing dirty things to each other 🔥 so go in with that mindset and you’ll enjoy it to the maximum!
I can’t rate higher only because I really felt this story needed more .. these guys deserve a novel and a conclusion imo .
LE : So apparently we do have a full length novella for them , called “Game On” . Well, game on it is ! 🎊
I can’t rate higher only because I really felt this story needed more .. these guys deserve a novel and a conclusion imo .
LE : So apparently we do have a full length novella for them , called “Game On” . Well, game on it is ! 🎊
April 24, 2025
A quick novella to the actual book releasing later this year, and I'm definitely intrigued after reading how they started. I just know these two are going to be 🔥 together, especially after the bathroom.
October 28, 2025
The way I need the full length novel 😩 I cannot wait to read more of Rhodes and Theo’s story. I already know it’s gonna be a bangerrrr 😭😍🔥
October 7, 2026
loved it
What a great little story love these two Rhodes phew he’s hot and Theo how much did he love how Rhodes treated him I do hope there’s a happy future for these two
What a great little story love these two Rhodes phew he’s hot and Theo how much did he love how Rhodes treated him I do hope there’s a happy future for these two
November 1, 2025
Ooof this was seriously hot,, not typically a fan of novellas as I always leave wanting more and this was no different.. it’s a quick fuck in the bathrooms with his younger brothers best friend in costume,, seriously steamy!!! I hope we get more of these two but who knows it was a perfect read for my drive home from a holiday…
April 13, 2025
Re-read: 04/22/26
See below, nothing has changed. I’m so excited for these two 😍😭🫶🏽
🏈🏈🏈🏈🏈🏈🏈🏈🏈🏈🏈🏈🏈🏈🏈🏈🏈🏈🏈🏈
Re-read: 10/11/2025
“I’m game if you are, Kennedy.”
“All right, McLaughlin. Game on.”
Still 5 stars, still delicious asf.
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Holy hell 🥵🥵
That was just the PERFECT short, hot and sexy novella I needed after a really serious hurt/comfort story 😘🤌🏽
Theo… Theo McLaughlin is absolutely delicious lol. I’m so excited to see his self discovery in Game on. Not only just about himself and what he identifies as, but also him discovering what kinks, likes/dislikes he has!! His smart mouth and the way he pushed Rhodes tells me that I’m going to LOVEEEEEE their back and forth 😍.
Rhodes… MY LAWD… Rhodes is just dark, gloomy, sexy, and filthy. AKA the perfect f*cking package!!! 😍😮💨🥵 this man could do the most filthiest things to me and all he would hear is “Yes Daddy Rhodes” (iykyk 🤭). This character is another one I’m so super excited to see!!! With him keeping his sexuality a secret & having to navigate homophobic parents, I’m really looking forward to see his story unfold, and ultimately him becoming unapologetically himself.
This was the perfect teaser for the full story coming out! I can’t wait for Game on and to get more of Theo & Rhodes!!
Thank you ‘MOM’ 🤪🤣😭💜
See below, nothing has changed. I’m so excited for these two 😍😭🫶🏽
🏈🏈🏈🏈🏈🏈🏈🏈🏈🏈🏈🏈🏈🏈🏈🏈🏈🏈🏈🏈
Re-read: 10/11/2025
“I’m game if you are, Kennedy.”
“All right, McLaughlin. Game on.”
Still 5 stars, still delicious asf.
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Holy hell 🥵🥵
That was just the PERFECT short, hot and sexy novella I needed after a really serious hurt/comfort story 😘🤌🏽
Theo… Theo McLaughlin is absolutely delicious lol. I’m so excited to see his self discovery in Game on. Not only just about himself and what he identifies as, but also him discovering what kinks, likes/dislikes he has!! His smart mouth and the way he pushed Rhodes tells me that I’m going to LOVEEEEEE their back and forth 😍.
Rhodes… MY LAWD… Rhodes is just dark, gloomy, sexy, and filthy. AKA the perfect f*cking package!!! 😍😮💨🥵 this man could do the most filthiest things to me and all he would hear is “Yes Daddy Rhodes” (iykyk 🤭). This character is another one I’m so super excited to see!!! With him keeping his sexuality a secret & having to navigate homophobic parents, I’m really looking forward to see his story unfold, and ultimately him becoming unapologetically himself.
This was the perfect teaser for the full story coming out! I can’t wait for Game on and to get more of Theo & Rhodes!!
Thank you ‘MOM’ 🤪🤣😭💜
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
April 25, 2025
I adore everything by this author
This was such a brilliant teaser. I already love Rhodes & Theo and I cannot wait for their novel Game On
This was such a brilliant teaser. I already love Rhodes & Theo and I cannot wait for their novel Game On
September 30, 2025
Fun Quick Read
This was definitely a fun quick read. I am very excited to see where this story will go! Daddy Rhodes… oh yes please! And his little Wolfe!
This was definitely a fun quick read. I am very excited to see where this story will go! Daddy Rhodes… oh yes please! And his little Wolfe!
August 27, 2026
Halloween Fumble is a short and entertaining MM Halloween romance that packs quite a lot into a small amount of pages.
The story follows Rhodes and Theo, whose unexpected Halloween encounter becomes complicated when they discover that they already know each other. The masked meeting creates an interesting setup, particularly once the connection between them is revealed, and the brother’s-best-friend dynamic adds an element of forbidden attraction to the story.
Rhodes and Theo have good chemistry, and I enjoyed the contrast between their personalities. Rhodes is more guarded and experienced, while Theo brings a more open and determined energy to their relationship.
Overall, Halloween Fumble was a ridiculously fun, fast-paced, spicy little read with masked men, forbidden attraction, an age gap, brother's-best-friend tension and two characters whose chemistry practically jumps off the page.
The story follows Rhodes and Theo, whose unexpected Halloween encounter becomes complicated when they discover that they already know each other. The masked meeting creates an interesting setup, particularly once the connection between them is revealed, and the brother’s-best-friend dynamic adds an element of forbidden attraction to the story.
Rhodes and Theo have good chemistry, and I enjoyed the contrast between their personalities. Rhodes is more guarded and experienced, while Theo brings a more open and determined energy to their relationship.
Overall, Halloween Fumble was a ridiculously fun, fast-paced, spicy little read with masked men, forbidden attraction, an age gap, brother's-best-friend tension and two characters whose chemistry practically jumps off the page.
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