This was a quick read that I picked up for free on Nook after seeing it on Bookbub. It was a fast paced and lighthearted sci-fi/steampunk/private eye-ish novel. I definitely saw influence by authors like Terry Pratchett in McClure's writing.
The book is about Gideon Quinn, an ex-military Colonel who has been imprisoned for a crime he didn't commit (cue A-Team theme song). He's a good commander, quick thinking, snarky, and has low self-esteem when it comes to women. When he's released from prison, he's set on the vague trail of the person who is responsible for his being in prison in the first place. In his adventure, he meets a young pick-pocket named Mia. She's a streetwise book loving adolescent who matches Gideon snark for snark and develops a quick attachment to his pet dragon. The supporting characters include a decent cop, several street toughs, and the introduction to a couple of characters that I assume will be shown more in future novels.
The story managed to maintain a good pace with action spaced out with fun dialogue. There could have been a good bit more development of the world itself or explanation of some of the types of characters in the books. For example, there are keepers. We know they're keepers because, well, they're called keepers. They can give people sanctuary because...um...they're keepers? Why? Who knows. And the governmental system isn't really developed or explained well beyond the level of the police. The intended major twist in the story is telegraphed from very early in the story and was easy to guess, but the author managed to keep the book entertaining despite tipping her hand. For me, it was like watching an episode of Columbo. You know who did it from within the first few pages, but it's fun watching the character try to figure it out.
My major critiques are that I wanted more development of the world in the novel for the sake of immersion and that the main character seems to be able to take beatings that would stop anyone else and keep functioning at peak efficiency without seeming any worse for the wear. Take Harry Dresden for example. Harry takes a beating in a book. In fact, he usually takes several. They take a toll on him. By the end of the book, he's having trouble holding it together. He's often tired, hurting, hungry, and lacking in funds. All of that makes an impact on his ability to function. Quinn, however, gets at least one severe beating and several lesser beatings, gets shot, gets drugged multiple times, and is on the run throughout the book...and shrugs it off like nothing happened.
Those critiques aside, it was a quick and fun read. Don't approach this book expecting a masterpiece. Approach it for fun. Read it, enjoy it, and let someone else know about it.