As a preface to me saying that I don’t think this is a great story, let me at least be very clear that its heart is in the right place. Stories about being a good ally, especially in this time and place, are very welcome and important.
This just isn’t very well written and the characters are not very interesting. Hime’s notion of defending her childhood friend, Akira, from jerks who don’t understand Akira’s identifying as a girl or wearing girls’ clothing? Yell a lot. And wear a boy’s uniform.
As Hime wrestles with her crush on her friend, one that appears to transcend gender roles, nice touch, she just rages at everything. It’s enough to kind of annoy Akira, but she doesn’t express this until way later in the narrative than I’d like.
Until that time? Lots of yelling. Hime is way too shrill to be the main character, honestly. Plus, Akira’s the one finally expressing her gender identity, yet we get barely anything about her. It feels like the focus is completely on the wrong character - we don’t learn hardly enough about Akira as we should.
Even the new friend group they find is… kind of annoying, except for the quiet girl with all the piercings. There’s a genki quality to too many characters that makes them overwhelm the story and this reader. Found family stories are some of my favourites, but this doesn’t sell it at all.
It’s not like I want this to be an especially harsh story, but a little realism would be nice. The bullies and jerks in this story are positively benign compared to what I think you’d see in a more realistic scenario.
And I do like that Hime’s crush on Akira doesn’t really seem to register that the latter might have their own gender preferences until a new crush comes into view. I’m not sure about that side of things, but I’ll give the benefit of the doubt for now.
Sometimes a character will drop some wisdom into the thing about being a better person or how you’re allowed to make mistakes when you’re young because you can learn from them. Then they vanish.
That’s all well and good, but it feels leaden. The story composition and dialogue just don’t feel cohesive or compelling. Which is odd, since the story as told is pretty basic. But it doesn’t sell itself to me.
If you think I’m going to make it through this without mentioning the very, very good Our Dreams At Dusk, which I found well superior to this, well… there we go. I’d even say My Journey to Her, an autobiographical manga about transitioning, is a better choice.
3 stars - I mean, better to mean well and try to say something than not, but I do wish this was a better manga than it actually is. Fine, but unexceptional.