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Unbreakable
Shaniqua and her on again/off again boyfriend Ronny have one hell of a relationship. Ronny is every woman dream. He’s charming, his money is long and he has the prettiest set of green eyes that the ladies just love. Shaniqua is not only his stripper girlfriend of 4 years but she is also the mother of his only child and the love of his life. The only thing wrong is the fact that Ronny has a problem with being faithful to her and his cheating ways pushes her right into the arms of the next man. But is her new man as innocent as she thinks he is?
With a new man in her life and a new baby on the way Shaniqua seems to have it all. There’s only one problem, Ronny still holds the key to her heart. So she chooses to keep the pregnancy a secret. Will her secret cause her to lose Ronny forever? Or do they really have that UNBREAKABLE relationship that they claim to have?? Sit back and take a ride on this emotional rollercoaster relationship between Shaniqua and Ronny!
With a new man in her life and a new baby on the way Shaniqua seems to have it all. There’s only one problem, Ronny still holds the key to her heart. So she chooses to keep the pregnancy a secret. Will her secret cause her to lose Ronny forever? Or do they really have that UNBREAKABLE relationship that they claim to have?? Sit back and take a ride on this emotional rollercoaster relationship between Shaniqua and Ronny!
306 pages, Kindle Edition
First published April 15, 2014
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November 18, 2015
This was an ok read that seemed to get better arount the 85% mark. I really can't say much without giving spoliers but Dre is not the man I thought he was. There were quit a few grammatical errors but other than that I am interested in seeing what happens in part 2.
November 18, 2015
Very good book...Off and on Love Affair, but loved their passion for each other.
January 28, 2016
I knew it.. DOG I wasn't sure at the beginning if the book was going to be good but right when I thought I was going to stop reading it pulled me in wanting to know what's going to happen next.
September 7, 2014
Unbreakable was a good read that followed the relationship of Ronny & Shaniqua, 2 people that belong together. Although their relationship was volatile most of the time, their love for each other was genuine. Shaniqua, tired of Ronny's cheating ways, brings a new man into her life & more problems arise. Great storyline. Looking forward to reading pt. 2.
October 26, 2014
Great Book
This is the second series that I have read by Tynessa and.I must say I love your books! I recommend this series to everyone who loves good and juicy urban fiction!! Keep up the great work!!
This is the second series that I have read by Tynessa and.I must say I love your books! I recommend this series to everyone who loves good and juicy urban fiction!! Keep up the great work!!
August 7, 2015
At first I was gonna stop reading
The cursing on the first two pages almost turned me away, but I kept reading and glad I did. I really enjoyed the book and fell in love with the characters. I'm almost finished with the second book. It's just as good.
The cursing on the first two pages almost turned me away, but I kept reading and glad I did. I really enjoyed the book and fell in love with the characters. I'm almost finished with the second book. It's just as good.
August 6, 2021
This was a pretty good read... There was definitely a lot going on in here... I did have some problems with how it jumped around a lot and at times just felt a little scattered... There was a few times that things did not make sense like when Shanique went upstairs and left Ronny downstairs, next it said that she heard water running and Ronny was coming out of the bathroom... I was like wait... wasn't he just downstairs... It may have been a time difference but I can not tell because it was the next paragraph with nothing breaking it up... Another thing I kept questioning was the timeline... I mean don't get me wrong... The storyline is pretty good... But these problems really pull away from a great read...
I really like how Shanique is independent and handling her business... It may not be the best way... But it is her way and allows her to not have to depend solely on Ronny... She is a great girlfriend, and a wonderful mom... Yet and still she is super weak when it comes to her man Ronny...
Ronny has this amazing girlfriend yet he still finds the need to cheat on her with every woman that will throw it at him... But why... He just keeps hurting the mother of his child and as he says... The woman he loves, his Wifey... Yet he treats her like a random and constantly disrespects her every chance he gets... I mean he has done it so many times and she keeps taking him back... And she continues to be faithful to him... I guess he realizes that he does not need to be faithful and respect his relationship because she does not demand it... She allows it and just keeps taking him back so to him this is okay...
I was glad when she finally had enough and walked away... Of course this shocked him because he thought she would never leave him...
When she met Dre, I was glad to see a man finally treat her the way that she deserved... I mean she was everything that she wished Ronny was... I really liked Dre... But man was I wrong about this man... This man is off his rocker... I did not see this coming... All his little skeletons are just falling all out of the closet... Why would he allow someone to do this to Shanique... Yet he loves her and wants them to be a family... Boy bye... Now look at how he is talking to her and how he just allowed someone to disrespect her in the worst way...
Ronny has some snakes in his camp... Little does he know... The ones closest to him are waiting for his downfall and want what he has...
Now to see how this is all going to play out and if all parties involved will have to pay for what they did...
I really like how Shanique is independent and handling her business... It may not be the best way... But it is her way and allows her to not have to depend solely on Ronny... She is a great girlfriend, and a wonderful mom... Yet and still she is super weak when it comes to her man Ronny...
Ronny has this amazing girlfriend yet he still finds the need to cheat on her with every woman that will throw it at him... But why... He just keeps hurting the mother of his child and as he says... The woman he loves, his Wifey... Yet he treats her like a random and constantly disrespects her every chance he gets... I mean he has done it so many times and she keeps taking him back... And she continues to be faithful to him... I guess he realizes that he does not need to be faithful and respect his relationship because she does not demand it... She allows it and just keeps taking him back so to him this is okay...
I was glad when she finally had enough and walked away... Of course this shocked him because he thought she would never leave him...
When she met Dre, I was glad to see a man finally treat her the way that she deserved... I mean she was everything that she wished Ronny was... I really liked Dre... But man was I wrong about this man... This man is off his rocker... I did not see this coming... All his little skeletons are just falling all out of the closet... Why would he allow someone to do this to Shanique... Yet he loves her and wants them to be a family... Boy bye... Now look at how he is talking to her and how he just allowed someone to disrespect her in the worst way...
Ronny has some snakes in his camp... Little does he know... The ones closest to him are waiting for his downfall and want what he has...
Now to see how this is all going to play out and if all parties involved will have to pay for what they did...
April 17, 2018
This is the first book I've read from this author and it definitely won't be my last. I absolutely loved the beginning to Ronny and Shan's story and I can't wait to read the rest of it because it is far from over. Their love and relationship was anything but light, fluffy and romantic. It was hurtful, destructive and passionate. It was real with jealousy, revenge and an unbreakable bond of love. The characters in this story had me laughing and wanting to give them a hug one minute and wanting me to grab them and shake the crap out of them the next. However, there were definitely a few surprises in this story, especially with Dre. Ii knew he was dirty but I didn't think he was "that dirty" but it turns out I was wrong because he was down right crazy. The only thing that stopped me from rating this book 5 stars, was that there were so many simple grammatical errors within the story but even with that being said, this was still a great story and I can't wait to read the next book.
May 25, 2017
Yass
This was a great read. That dang Dre is something else. How you gone let your boy Rape the girl you claim to want a family with.. And where is his wife??. What did he do to her.. This dude is turning out to be crazy.... Go Ronny go... Part two I will read.
This was a great read. That dang Dre is something else. How you gone let your boy Rape the girl you claim to want a family with.. And where is his wife??. What did he do to her.. This dude is turning out to be crazy.... Go Ronny go... Part two I will read.
October 30, 2017
Poor Grammar
The overall storyline was good but was significantly let down by the grammatically errors. Pleased to notice however, the further along the book the less the occurrences of instance.
The overall storyline was good but was significantly let down by the grammatically errors. Pleased to notice however, the further along the book the less the occurrences of instance.
January 25, 2020
Good book
Storyline was good..excited to read unbreakable 2 and other books from this author. This is the first book I have read of hers.
Storyline was good..excited to read unbreakable 2 and other books from this author. This is the first book I have read of hers.
December 12, 2020
Crazy
Crazy people in this crazy story shaniqua should find her another line of work and listen to her mama because she is telling her right she will never learn
Crazy people in this crazy story shaniqua should find her another line of work and listen to her mama because she is telling her right she will never learn
May 2, 2024
Great read
This book sooo good I've read the whole series a few times and its like my 1st time reading it every time! Good from beginning to end.
This book sooo good I've read the whole series a few times and its like my 1st time reading it every time! Good from beginning to end.
August 2, 2024
yes ma’am
I enjoyed every word had me wanting more I really was excited can’t wait to read part 2. My favorite character was rayshon and niya.
I enjoyed every word had me wanting more I really was excited can’t wait to read part 2. My favorite character was rayshon and niya.
September 16, 2023
I really enjoyed this read! Shaniqua is in love with Ronny who doesn’t know how to keep it in his pants! Shaniqua must decide if he is really worth being with! On to part two.
February 9, 2018
This was a really good book I love it so much it made me feel like I was watching a bootleg movie on BET The two main characters were amazing I highly recommend this book
January 2, 2017
Shan & Ronny have been together for 4 Yeats but he was cheating. She was faithful but when she found out he was cheating with Nikki she left him. She started dating this guy named Dre. He made her feel special. She even aborted her baby with Ronny. Dare finally got her to go to Maryland with him. They were there almost a year. Ronny went months without seeing his son. Shan found out she was pregnant again & had a little girl. Dare got mad with her & she left to come back home. When she did everybody that saw the baby said it was Ronny child. Come to find out it was cause Dre could not have kids. He I snapped her & someone else was raping her. Ronny found her &.at the end shots were fired. Now on to part 2 to see what happened. Entertaining story with a lot of details.
September 13, 2014
Unbreakable is a great story that was well developed as well as it was full of twist , turns, lies, deceit, and much more. While reading this awesome book I felt as I was sitting in the movies watching Ronny, Shaniqua, and the crew story play on the big screen instead on my kindle. This Story took me on a emotional trip that i return from drained but excited and wanting more at the same time.
The storyline was fantastic and thought provoking the writer drew you into the characters world and you felt like it was real instead of a fictional story. It flowed from character to character, problem to problem and solution to solution with ease. I mean this storyline made you fell ever emotion that you could possible feel.
In conclusion, this book was a great break out book that was influenced me to follow this writer career to the very end . I recommend this book to any avid reader that wants something new and fresh.
The storyline was fantastic and thought provoking the writer drew you into the characters world and you felt like it was real instead of a fictional story. It flowed from character to character, problem to problem and solution to solution with ease. I mean this storyline made you fell ever emotion that you could possible feel.
In conclusion, this book was a great break out book that was influenced me to follow this writer career to the very end . I recommend this book to any avid reader that wants something new and fresh.
October 28, 2014
3 1/2 stars
Shaniqua and Ronny had a rollercoaster relationship that kept me turning pages. Their toxic relationship put both of them in some sticky and violent situations. Ronny can't seem to keep it in his pants and Shaniqua can't seem to let him go and stop fighting for him and over him. Shaniqua was a little immature in my opinion. I've read plenty of books where women fight over men, but the thing that bugged me was the fact that she fought and swore in front of her kids on more than one occasion. That turned me off. Although there was a lot of drama and heartbreak, neither Ronny nor Shaniqua could stay away from each other for long. There were plenty of shady characters and moments where I hated then loved each character. This book needed some editing, but overall I really liked it and the cliffhanger at the end left me wanting more.
Shaniqua and Ronny had a rollercoaster relationship that kept me turning pages. Their toxic relationship put both of them in some sticky and violent situations. Ronny can't seem to keep it in his pants and Shaniqua can't seem to let him go and stop fighting for him and over him. Shaniqua was a little immature in my opinion. I've read plenty of books where women fight over men, but the thing that bugged me was the fact that she fought and swore in front of her kids on more than one occasion. That turned me off. Although there was a lot of drama and heartbreak, neither Ronny nor Shaniqua could stay away from each other for long. There were plenty of shady characters and moments where I hated then loved each character. This book needed some editing, but overall I really liked it and the cliffhanger at the end left me wanting more.
February 1, 2016
Absolute trash, would rate 0 stars if possible.
I decided to give this book a try because of the good reviews and because it was free. But even being free, this book (and I use the term book very loosely; this garbage does not even deserve to be called a book) is not worth the time it takes to download. The grammar - or perhaps I should say the lack thereof - is horrendous. The characters are bland, unintelligent, and easier to hate than to sympathize. The plot is boring and predictable, and the writing is almost painful to read. This could have been better written by a ten-year-old. Perhaps then it would have at least had an appealing writing style with actual description and imagery. I have no idea how this is so highly rated. I feel like my IQ dropped due to the twenty pages I struggled through, trying to give this book a chance.
I decided to give this book a try because of the good reviews and because it was free. But even being free, this book (and I use the term book very loosely; this garbage does not even deserve to be called a book) is not worth the time it takes to download. The grammar - or perhaps I should say the lack thereof - is horrendous. The characters are bland, unintelligent, and easier to hate than to sympathize. The plot is boring and predictable, and the writing is almost painful to read. This could have been better written by a ten-year-old. Perhaps then it would have at least had an appealing writing style with actual description and imagery. I have no idea how this is so highly rated. I feel like my IQ dropped due to the twenty pages I struggled through, trying to give this book a chance.
June 26, 2022
Unbreakable
Unbreakable
This was an excellent read. However, I am sick of these darn continuations. You can't make me believe that no one writes a whole book. Sell a whole book at full price and trust your writing style will bring in the big bucks. I am growing more and more leery of buying these books that are not complete, especially because I never know when the next one is coming. Like I said this book was excellent, but here I am waiting for the next book to come out. Vanessa this is too good for you to leave as it is. You owe us, the readers better then a cliffhanger. Definitely recommended.
Unbreakable
This was an excellent read. However, I am sick of these darn continuations. You can't make me believe that no one writes a whole book. Sell a whole book at full price and trust your writing style will bring in the big bucks. I am growing more and more leery of buying these books that are not complete, especially because I never know when the next one is coming. Like I said this book was excellent, but here I am waiting for the next book to come out. Vanessa this is too good for you to leave as it is. You owe us, the readers better then a cliffhanger. Definitely recommended.
June 13, 2016
I can't wait to see what happens with Dre, Ronny, Shaniqua and the rest of the characters. The ending was dramatic. I didn't really care for any of the men, but hopefully everything with Ronny will be ok. I don't even know what to say about Dre, crazy and all kinds of foolishness (okay, Ronny too if I'm honest, lol). Ronny sure wasn't a saint. Good read but, by the end, they were all getting on my nerves-too many secrets, lies and schemes. I guess they all had issues with honesty. I usually have a favorite character, but not in this story. Most of these characters weren't the most likable in my opinion. Hopefully in book two someone will be more likable.
May 20, 2015
Good read
Wow what a very interesting story how did Shan get herself in this mess. Good story line, I'm very surprised with Dre I knew it was something about him but this right here caught me off guard. Shan was a cool chic I enjoyed her and Ronny charters. I knew that was not Dre baby . How did Ronny know where to find her?? I'm sure Vic had so something to do with that? Can't wait to read part 2. Great job few typos but still good
Wow what a very interesting story how did Shan get herself in this mess. Good story line, I'm very surprised with Dre I knew it was something about him but this right here caught me off guard. Shan was a cool chic I enjoyed her and Ronny charters. I knew that was not Dre baby . How did Ronny know where to find her?? I'm sure Vic had so something to do with that? Can't wait to read part 2. Great job few typos but still good
October 16, 2015
A Great Beginning
Now that was a good book. That made up for all the crap I've been reading lately. It was slow getting started but it got good. I was loving it because you don't see all this drama coming. I was sitting up near the end and breathing hard. I cannot wait to see what happens next. There are quite a few errors but it didn't take away from the story...yet. The author did a good job in describing the characters. I could see them in my mind. So far so good.
Now that was a good book. That made up for all the crap I've been reading lately. It was slow getting started but it got good. I was loving it because you don't see all this drama coming. I was sitting up near the end and breathing hard. I cannot wait to see what happens next. There are quite a few errors but it didn't take away from the story...yet. The author did a good job in describing the characters. I could see them in my mind. So far so good.
September 10, 2014
Fiyah
I read this book in 4 hours it was so good a must read for sure.Ronny and Shan love is so cute.Shan don't play when it comes to Ronny with his cheating a**,she throw them hands quick but she acts childish at times.Dre seems kinda sneaky.I was not disappointed at all ready for part 2 to see what happen when Ronny rescue Shan.
I read this book in 4 hours it was so good a must read for sure.Ronny and Shan love is so cute.Shan don't play when it comes to Ronny with his cheating a**,she throw them hands quick but she acts childish at times.Dre seems kinda sneaky.I was not disappointed at all ready for part 2 to see what happen when Ronny rescue Shan.
October 7, 2015
Unbreakable
This was a very good read. Shaniqua and Ronny takes you on a rollercoaster of a ride with their on again/off again relationship. They go through a lot together and no matter what they have each other's back. You have to read this book to see why their bond is unbreakable.
This was a very good read. Shaniqua and Ronny takes you on a rollercoaster of a ride with their on again/off again relationship. They go through a lot together and no matter what they have each other's back. You have to read this book to see why their bond is unbreakable.
November 12, 2015
....
The story line wasn't bad but could have been better. This was a first read for me by this author and I sincerely hope that book two shows growth. I was a little uneasy about the way Ronnie and Shan put their hands on each other in a not so gentle way but I know that this is life.
The story line wasn't bad but could have been better. This was a first read for me by this author and I sincerely hope that book two shows growth. I was a little uneasy about the way Ronnie and Shan put their hands on each other in a not so gentle way but I know that this is life.
July 24, 2016
Sorry, not sorry
I really struggled to get into this. If there's one thing I can't get on board reading is a cheater, that cheats continuously and not even be a little regretful and also the abusive behaviour. Even more so when there are children scripted. So not something I can recommend at all.
I really struggled to get into this. If there's one thing I can't get on board reading is a cheater, that cheats continuously and not even be a little regretful and also the abusive behaviour. Even more so when there are children scripted. So not something I can recommend at all.
January 17, 2015
I like it!
Well this is a good read. I've debated on when I was going to start this book and I'm glad I did. It's good and I like main characters. Can't wait to read the other books to see how the relationship plays out.
Well this is a good read. I've debated on when I was going to start this book and I'm glad I did. It's good and I like main characters. Can't wait to read the other books to see how the relationship plays out.
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