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168 pages, ebook
First published April 21, 2014
Sway With Me) and Viola, the Female MC here. Both young women were raised by their flakey "free spirit" of a Mother Reina, who believed they were all three Muses meant to inspire the men they loved - which was why Mother flitted from man to man, seeking The One she was to inspire! This meant Reina's daughters had a
highly
unstable upbringing, which both grew up to deal with in different ways - while Portia desperately sought stability (a thematic element which drove her conflict with Male MC Ryan in Sway...), Lola (as Viola prefers to be called) became more like her mother, moving from place to place and man to man, determined never to settle down at all. 






author Shelly Bell's stories - insufficiently developed story elements, so we have to take what happens on faith rather than because that's where these characters would go at this point in the story. (It happens a lot in the
White Collared series, as my reviews of those books went on about at some length.) This is also an issue that could be easily fixed, if the author recognized it - a lot of these problems could be covered by brief mentions early on of the difficulties the characters would face if they took another, more logical course of action other than the ones the story needs them to take so it can move forward (i.e., if Braden had brought up the high overhead of running a restaurant, so the "family price" Stavros gave him on the lease was what made running it cooking with the ingredients and care he does possible).