Thank you to Madhurika Sankar and Book Sirens for an Advanced Reader's Copy of this title!
"Dustria" is a multi-POV epic fantasy that primarily follows the adventures of Sulatant, a gifted young surgeon in a realm of magic and intrigue, who becomes addicted to a mysterious intoxicant called Sapphire which has shaped her practice, her relationships, and the struggles of her homeland for the last 3,000 years. We follow the perspectives of Sulatant and her friends, Immortals - supreme beings who can withstand the addictive and destructive tendencies of Sapphire, mortals, monsters, and rulers as the world turns and the all-consuming lust for Sapphire moves kingdoms and empires.
While I was really attracted to the idea of a fantasy series that centers a woman surgeon, I must unfortunately report that this book fell very flat for me in terms of world-building, character development, and overall storytelling. Broadly speaking and without diving into the weeds (and spoilers), this fantasy feels like a first draft of what could be a great series - the players tend to all have the same voice and make stereotyped decisions that don't fit their characters but are meant to move the plot, the POVs and timeline often get tangled and we jump back and forth between voices and times a lot in ways that don't keep the plot engaging, and the voice of the book really suffers from a "tell, but not show" mentality - I understand what the author was trying to do with their story and the world she was building, but as a reader there was no investment or buy-in on my part in what was going on in the world, and I had a hard time wanting to get lost in the story.
More specifically, while the author provides a guide at the beginning of the book as to who and what certain characters are and how they fit in, as well as a map of the world I feel as a reader I should get enough of a description of the characters and small reminders throughout of what and whom I am dealing with so I don't have to have the reference guide or the map open at all times for context. - this is especially important to me as an ARC reader and someone who primarily uses an E-reader. I felt like I was constantly having to remember what characters were supposed to look like and/or ad a hard time telling characters apart because there were scant descriptions of characters and/or descriptive language throughout the texts to remind the readers who you were dealing with and what was important to remember about them. For example, there is a specific monster that comes up towards the end of the story that was briefly described in the guide at the start of the book, but while in play in the story is only referred to as having big teeth and being physically large. There is no creative writing to remind the reader of its other features and things that made it terrifying in context and it honestly made it hard to be invested into how scared the characters were supposed to be while facing this monster. As another example, the "Immortals" were described as once overall as being very old and having white hair, and while there are about a dozen of them in play throughout the story the author barely describes any of them or sets them apart, and I had to read very carefully in any scenes where more than one was speaking as they were neither physically nor descriptively (in way of speaking, etc.) distinct. It was hard to be invested in them as characters, and while I know in reading the point is to paint a picture in your mind of what is going on, there was so little information about what I was looking at that my brain didn't have enough to form a mental picture while reading in context, leading to a very dry read overall.
I hate to leave low reviews for books and am generally a pretty easygoing reviewer in terms of reviewing favorably if the vibes were good and I had a good time reading. I found myself with this book just being very frustrated overall as I read, because as I stated, "Dustria" felt like more of an outline or a rough draft of something that has some potential to be a good series. In some ways this book just felt like a speed-run of a list of common epic fantasy tropes (e.g. comically evil rulers, The Power of Friendship TM, magical creatures, hero's journey, court intrigue etc.) and little time was taken to really flesh out the world and the characters at the expense of getting the story told, for some reason. There are a lot of gaps and missing plot points in the storylines and in this world to the point of being holier than Swiss cheese. If this book was reworked into like 3-4 books and everything was really fleshed out with regards to descriptive language I would be interested in revisiting the world of "Dustria", but this needs A LOT of work, and I can't in good conscience rate this book as it is any higher.