At a masquerade ball, an innocent flirtation with two attractive strangers turns into the wildest night of my life. The two studs named Ben and Tony, who do absolutely everything with me, letting me experience exactly what multiple orgasms are.
Who could have guessed that the next day, my father would introduce me to his newly engaged fiancée - along with her sons Ben and Tony.
To top it all off, I'm supposed to move in with them because my father wants me to keep an eye on them. If only he knew...
But my two stepbrothers have no intention of stopping what bonded us that one night.
They want more and can't get enough of me. How can I say no?
But then I'm pregnant, and it seems our secret isn't much of a secret anymore...
I'm honestly disappointed. The description showed that this book had the potential to be great. Unfortunately, things didn't come together like they should. We should have been able to enjoy Maria, Tony and Ben getting to know each other outside of the sheets. While I enjoy spice, I want substance with it and this book lacked that.
Yeah, this was absolutely horrible! And that’s being kind! The story is just a badly written porn script someone wrote and forgot about in the 90’s. So mechanical and absurdly worded. There is absolutely NO storyline other than “Girl going to a club. Gets hit on by a guy. Another guy shows up and does the same. They are brothers. They start making out and decide to move this along to a hotel room. They begin to f*ck. A lot!” It’s narrated in 1st PoV by the FMC. She sounds like a really bored sports commentator. Saying things like “They stroke my pearl. It’s nice. Then his penis is inside me. Now the brother starts thrusting his d*ck in my mouth. Now one after another they cum IN me. It’s hot and they spurt me full of hot seamen. Yeah, this is fun. Sex with two brothers. Wow. This was cool”. Complete and utter sh*t! And the narration also sucks! This Lily Wolff reads like it’s an instructional manual. Same monotonous tone and voice for every character making it even worse than reading it on your own. I DNFed after 20 minutes.
I pulled this from Amazon because the premis sounded great, but I was disappointed with the writing. It was stilted from the git-go and quickly showed that the author doesn't understand connections within sentences. Just two of many examples are from chapter two, where heroine places her "one" hand on his well-trained thighs and, after entering the hotel room, they continue by her grabbing the next available cock...when did she have one first? There are only two cocks so, did she grab the same one twice? When did they undress? In the hotel hallway? I never got past the 3rd chapter. I could name a dozen or more examples from just those three chapters...
This is the first book by this author and I enjoyed it but the title is misleading since they never became stepbrothers. The book was very good with an interesting way for the characters to meet. The plot actually kept me interested and surprised through out the story. I would recommend and will read more from this author.
How and why did her dad set up the meet? Was the whole thing to get Clarissa? Either way what a tool. Was nice with the farewell party with those getting what they wanted for jobs and all. Wonder is the new valet found his dream job. Fun, steamy, and a little drama, such a good mix for a short story like this.
I’m sorry to do this but it’s badly written. Corny and just needs a do over. I never ever give bad review and try to be kind but how the author has managed to write a whole series is shocking.
Dnf at 30%. This is just so cheesy and without substance. I need a bit more from the plot if I’m going to read over 200 pages. Also, the cover models don’t match the description of the characters and that annoys me.
This was a nice quick read if anyone is looking for one. It's hard to believe that a father could do what he did to his daughter but hey I'm sure it's out there. I'm glad for the end result
I only finished this because it was so short. I thought I could live until the end. It was terrible. It read like a lab report. She used proper names for body parts and it felt incredibly disassociated.
Overall it was good!the story flowed well. But it was missing something...needed a little bit more pov from Ben and Tony to understand a bit better the story!
Really loved this book and omg those men are what I need in my life lol. These books spice up my love life and always have me wanting to try new things.