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Broken #2
Fall to Pieces
He broke me with his lies.
He crushed me with his betrayal.
I know I need to leave his house, leave him, but things are complicated now.
We're about to be parents, and I can't do this on my own.
He swears he'll stand by me, but I have my doubts.
I'm terrified that his past won't stay in the past.
I fear more of the skeletons he desperately tries to hide will come crashing out of the closet and destroy me.
I know I won't survive him twice…
I screwed up.
Real bad this time.
She hates me and I don't blame her.
But hate me or not, she's not leaving me.
I'm keeping this girl – and the baby growing inside her.
Fall To Pieces is the second installment of the bestselling Broken series. Due to its explicit content, bad language, and graphic sexual content, Fall To Pieces is recommended for mature readers of seventeen years and above.
He crushed me with his betrayal.
I know I need to leave his house, leave him, but things are complicated now.
We're about to be parents, and I can't do this on my own.
He swears he'll stand by me, but I have my doubts.
I'm terrified that his past won't stay in the past.
I fear more of the skeletons he desperately tries to hide will come crashing out of the closet and destroy me.
I know I won't survive him twice…
I screwed up.
Real bad this time.
She hates me and I don't blame her.
But hate me or not, she's not leaving me.
I'm keeping this girl – and the baby growing inside her.
Fall To Pieces is the second installment of the bestselling Broken series. Due to its explicit content, bad language, and graphic sexual content, Fall To Pieces is recommended for mature readers of seventeen years and above.
258 pages, Kindle Edition
First published April 1, 2014
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About the author
Chloe Walsh
63 books33.9k followersChloe Walsh is the NYT and USA Today bestselling author of The Boys of Tommen series, which exploded in popularity on TikTok, Goodreads, and Amazon. She has been writing and publishing New Adult and Adult contemporary romance for mature audiences for over a decade. Her Tommen series has been translated into multiple languages around the world, finding bestselling success in several countries. Chloe focuses heavily on the mental health dynamics of her characters, shining a light on important, real-life topics that are close to her heart. Heavily influenced by her own real life experiences, she pens tearjerking, and often harrowing narratives, giving another perspective to, often, unspoken everyday issues. Chloe hails from West Cork, Ireland, where she continues to reside with her family.
Represented by Caitlin Mahony of WME - for business queries contact: cma@wmeagency.com
Represented by Caitlin Mahony of WME - for business queries contact: cma@wmeagency.com
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February 8, 2021
Kyle’s pretty cool but he’s no Johnny Kavanagh...🤭😅
May 4, 2014
God this book made me laugh and bawl ma eyes out......the suspense between Kyle and Lee was a killer, just when I thought yes kiss and make up BAM some crap comes between them.
It was frustrating as hell too. I really felt for Kyle gosh I was crying with him mayn....
"You need to trust that I will never hurt you again, you need to have faith in us coz I can't keep going through this with you lee":- Kyle
God that line broke ma heart poor guy was bawling his eyes out.....for once I was like dammit Lee trust the guy. I really wanted to murder Rachel the bitch....
I loved the twist at the end and I love the happy ending for them both, jheeZe they went through ALOT!!!
Great read and I'm happy with the closure at the end...
It was frustrating as hell too. I really felt for Kyle gosh I was crying with him mayn....
"You need to trust that I will never hurt you again, you need to have faith in us coz I can't keep going through this with you lee":- Kyle
God that line broke ma heart poor guy was bawling his eyes out.....for once I was like dammit Lee trust the guy. I really wanted to murder Rachel the bitch....
I loved the twist at the end and I love the happy ending for them both, jheeZe they went through ALOT!!!
Great read and I'm happy with the closure at the end...
August 13, 2022
"It’s always been you , Lee, from the second I saw you in my kitchen that very first night. You fucking broke me that night, baby. You took the air right out of my lungs that night and I haven’t breathed since.”
The completion of Lee and Kyle's story. It was full of too much unnecessary angst, and many shock factors, that still fell flat to the whole story. I didn't enjoy the conclusion to their story. I wish she became more mature, finished her education, became successful on her own, but none of that happened.
"You burn me,” he whispered. “I close my eyes you ’re there. I open them you’re everywhere, surrounding me, possessing me. I scorch for you. I breathe for you. I’m drowning so deep in you, that I never want to come up for air.”
Rating 2 stars 🌟
The completion of Lee and Kyle's story. It was full of too much unnecessary angst, and many shock factors, that still fell flat to the whole story. I didn't enjoy the conclusion to their story. I wish she became more mature, finished her education, became successful on her own, but none of that happened.
"You burn me,” he whispered. “I close my eyes you ’re there. I open them you’re everywhere, surrounding me, possessing me. I scorch for you. I breathe for you. I’m drowning so deep in you, that I never want to come up for air.”
Rating 2 stars 🌟
October 28, 2021
Drama. Llama. 😩
This was a lot.
I wanted Lee to make Kyle grovel, but after a bit, I got really annoyed. I don't understand Lee's motivations most of time. Her choices don't make a lot of sense. 🤷🏼♀️
And Kyle? 👀 Poor guy. He's trying, but either he gets tripped up or he f*cks up... He makes some really perplexing and maddening choices as well. There's a scene were he once again chooses to deal with OW, rather than telling her to eff off and go after the h... and that's really where this book lost a star. His actions made no sense to me, and his reasoning in his head made me furious. He doesn't cheat on Lee, but his priorities are all askew.
The ending is a heartbreaker. 😭😭😭😭😭
Bottom Line? The back and forth and stupid decisions by the MCs really dragged this book down. I still enjoyed the ride with all the fun drama and b*tching to my book buddy... but at the end of the day, I would expect these idiots to have learned from their past issues.... and they haven't yet, and that's real frustrating. 3.5 stars.
⚠️SAFETY SQUAD SPOILERS⚠️
- no cheating or sharing
- OW drama in spades. She's straight evil and she pops up every time Lee and Kyle seem to be pulling it together. I'd like to see her die a slow painful death.
- OM drama - the h keeps inexplicably running to the the H's sh*t stain brother... even though she's well aware of his role in their misery
- no dubcon
- death of important side character
- MC's are actively grieving the twin that was miscarried in the first book
This was a lot.
I wanted Lee to make Kyle grovel, but after a bit, I got really annoyed. I don't understand Lee's motivations most of time. Her choices don't make a lot of sense. 🤷🏼♀️
And Kyle? 👀 Poor guy. He's trying, but either he gets tripped up or he f*cks up... He makes some really perplexing and maddening choices as well. There's a scene were he once again chooses to deal with OW, rather than telling her to eff off and go after the h... and that's really where this book lost a star. His actions made no sense to me, and his reasoning in his head made me furious. He doesn't cheat on Lee, but his priorities are all askew.
The ending is a heartbreaker. 😭😭😭😭😭
Bottom Line? The back and forth and stupid decisions by the MCs really dragged this book down. I still enjoyed the ride with all the fun drama and b*tching to my book buddy... but at the end of the day, I would expect these idiots to have learned from their past issues.... and they haven't yet, and that's real frustrating. 3.5 stars.
⚠️SAFETY SQUAD SPOILERS⚠️
- no cheating or sharing
- OW drama in spades. She's straight evil and she pops up every time Lee and Kyle seem to be pulling it together. I'd like to see her die a slow painful death.
- OM drama - the h keeps inexplicably running to the the H's sh*t stain brother... even though she's well aware of his role in their misery
- no dubcon
- death of important side character
- MC's are actively grieving the twin that was miscarried in the first book
October 8, 2025
What! The Hell! Was those plot twists! i need so much more of mr KYLE YEARNER CARTER!!!!
August 4, 2023
I did not enjoy this one as much as I did the first one. I cannot believe I ended up with this story after thoroughly enjoyed the first one.
Lee was pretty insufferable in this one. I'm quite surprised that I manage to read the whole thing with my sanity still intact.
Cam and Derek, though...💔💔💔
Lee was pretty insufferable in this one. I'm quite surprised that I manage to read the whole thing with my sanity still intact.
Cam and Derek, though...💔💔💔
February 7, 2025
this was terrible i’m sorry. the first book was trash this was trash on fire. i tried to get thru bc she did so well in boys of tommen but i will not be reading the next two books of this😭😭. the amnt of back and forth AND SHE JUST RANDOMLY HAD HER BABY IN THE MIDDLE OF NO WHERE?! it was so choppy and didn’t flow in my opinion. 1 star
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May 3, 2014
Holy Smokes!!!!
Okay Chloe, I have exhausted all of my emotions in this book. and I can happily say that this book is on my top ten list for 2014. Beautifully written and the twists and turns,WOW brilliantly written.5 stars
Okay Chloe, I have exhausted all of my emotions in this book. and I can happily say that this book is on my top ten list for 2014. Beautifully written and the twists and turns,WOW brilliantly written.5 stars
October 16, 2014
I loved this series. It was full of non-stop drama but it was emotionally draining. I felt many emotions reading both books, I laughed, cried, got angry and frustrated.
I loved all the characters. Derek and Cam were great but I was so sad when they broke up. I cried when Cam died, it was so sad. I actually thought that Lee would talk Rachel out it but then she would end up killing herself. But she was hell-bent on getting Kyle back. I did not expect Cam to die and I actually thought that Lee was dead too.
I loved Kyle and Lee, when they were not fighting that is. They constantly argued, infact, they argued too much. They would break up, not talk for days or weeks and then got back together, have an argument in less than 5 minutes and break up again. This is how their relationship was in both books.
Overall, both books for me were 5 stars. Sometimes when I read a series the first book is always the best. But with this series the second was just as good as the first book.
Highly recommended. Just look at all the great reviews.
I loved all the characters. Derek and Cam were great but I was so sad when they broke up. I cried when Cam died, it was so sad. I actually thought that Lee would talk Rachel out it but then she would end up killing herself. But she was hell-bent on getting Kyle back. I did not expect Cam to die and I actually thought that Lee was dead too.
I loved Kyle and Lee, when they were not fighting that is. They constantly argued, infact, they argued too much. They would break up, not talk for days or weeks and then got back together, have an argument in less than 5 minutes and break up again. This is how their relationship was in both books.
Overall, both books for me were 5 stars. Sometimes when I read a series the first book is always the best. But with this series the second was just as good as the first book.
Highly recommended. Just look at all the great reviews.
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July 26, 2025
“You burn me,” he whispered. “I close my eyes, you’re there. I open them, you’re everywhere. Surrounding me. Possessing me. I scorch for you. I breathe for you. I’m drowning so deep in you that I never want to come up for air”
This book was such a roller coasting of emotions. I love everyone single one of these characters (except you, Rachel. Dumb b*tch). Lee and Kyle’s relationship is so frustratingly perfect, they will make you want to throw the book out into the ocean because they’re so up and down, it’s insane.
And that plot twist near the end gave me goosebumps. I can’t wait to jump into the 3rd book. The drama hasn’t ended yet!
This book was such a roller coasting of emotions. I love everyone single one of these characters (except you, Rachel. Dumb b*tch). Lee and Kyle’s relationship is so frustratingly perfect, they will make you want to throw the book out into the ocean because they’re so up and down, it’s insane.
And that plot twist near the end gave me goosebumps. I can’t wait to jump into the 3rd book. The drama hasn’t ended yet!
April 26, 2014
I loved this book, it made me laugh and cry and thank god for a happy ending!
Really sad about cam at the end but least she redeemed herself as she wasn't very nice to anyone in the whole book!
I can't wait for the next book I hope Derek has more luck and a happy ending in the next or maybe even his own book!
Love Kyles proposal and so glad they finally both got their acts together and talked. This book is a MUST READ and can't wait to find out what happens next.
Hopefully won't be too long til we get book 3 :D
KEEP UP THE FAB WORK CHLOE WALSH XXX
Really sad about cam at the end but least she redeemed herself as she wasn't very nice to anyone in the whole book!
I can't wait for the next book I hope Derek has more luck and a happy ending in the next or maybe even his own book!
Love Kyles proposal and so glad they finally both got their acts together and talked. This book is a MUST READ and can't wait to find out what happens next.
Hopefully won't be too long til we get book 3 :D
KEEP UP THE FAB WORK CHLOE WALSH XXX
June 24, 2023
Kylo got a bit better, not much but better.
Lee still stupid. I’m sorry there’s no other adjective for her. I know she is 19 and that’s why she is so dumb, but hey I wish Chloe wrote about her a bit better.
Cam was like another character 70% of the book.
Rachel was just written so badly.
And I hated that most of this book was telling and not showing.
Lee still stupid. I’m sorry there’s no other adjective for her. I know she is 19 and that’s why she is so dumb, but hey I wish Chloe wrote about her a bit better.
Cam was like another character 70% of the book.
Rachel was just written so badly.
And I hated that most of this book was telling and not showing.
March 30, 2024
I can’t read about these dipshits anymore (but I’m gonna cuz there’s two more books left)
May 12, 2024
wow ok so half this book i was irritated frustrated and angry at all the characters but that ending omfg i’m now so terrified for the next two books because i dont want them to go through any more pain 😭🥲❤️🩹
January 5, 2025
Cam não serás esquecida😔
February 21, 2026
Oh my heart 😭❤️🩹
July 22, 2025
Well I did not expect that 😭😭
July 28, 2022
“I was a fat kid and he was my chocolate.”
😭😭 this book hurt so bad. God help me!!! Can someone check I’m still alive and made it through this book?! Omg it was brutal! 😭😭💔 probably the most ANGST I’ve ever read in a book…. I sobbed my heart out at times. Just HELL FUCKING NO YOU CRAZY BITCH!!! Urgh. I don’t think I’ve ever hated a character as much as I do in these books. I’m honestly so devastated I’m struggling to write this review. SOOO much happens in this book, I’m absolutely ruined. Please check trigger warnings for this book as the triggers are like fireworks popping off all over the place. It’s dark AF and it brings out raw fucking emotions. Never known a book like it!! It’s so savage throughout. It’s a never ending list of events one after the other. I can’t say anything without spoilers. Thank fuck I had @booksboysandnails listening to my heartbreak and ranting 😂😂 what a book!!! Got two more left in the series yet and I’m not sure how I feel about that, I don’t even feel like this is the end of the heartbreak. God help me!!
😭😭 this book hurt so bad. God help me!!! Can someone check I’m still alive and made it through this book?! Omg it was brutal! 😭😭💔 probably the most ANGST I’ve ever read in a book…. I sobbed my heart out at times. Just HELL FUCKING NO YOU CRAZY BITCH!!! Urgh. I don’t think I’ve ever hated a character as much as I do in these books. I’m honestly so devastated I’m struggling to write this review. SOOO much happens in this book, I’m absolutely ruined. Please check trigger warnings for this book as the triggers are like fireworks popping off all over the place. It’s dark AF and it brings out raw fucking emotions. Never known a book like it!! It’s so savage throughout. It’s a never ending list of events one after the other. I can’t say anything without spoilers. Thank fuck I had @booksboysandnails listening to my heartbreak and ranting 😂😂 what a book!!! Got two more left in the series yet and I’m not sure how I feel about that, I don’t even feel like this is the end of the heartbreak. God help me!!
May 11, 2014
An emotional rollercoaster ride
The Broken Series was SO great! An absolute enjoyment to read! I feel very selfish in the fact I want MORE!! To be specific I want more Derick.... I'll even beg if I have to. Thank You Choke Walsh for writing this series, I just hope you'll want to give us more.
The Broken Series was SO great! An absolute enjoyment to read! I feel very selfish in the fact I want MORE!! To be specific I want more Derick.... I'll even beg if I have to. Thank You Choke Walsh for writing this series, I just hope you'll want to give us more.
May 23, 2014
We'll this book is amazing! I cried laughed .. Probably at the same time which is not attractive! What a whirlwind!
Definitely will be reading any books this author writes!
Kyle Kyle Kyle ! Most of the book I didn't know if I wanted to punch or kiss him
Poor lee! Wow the things the poor girl got put through. Least she got her happy ever after
Definitely will be reading any books this author writes!
Kyle Kyle Kyle ! Most of the book I didn't know if I wanted to punch or kiss him
Poor lee! Wow the things the poor girl got put through. Least she got her happy ever after
November 21, 2021
Childish
This author dragged the storyline in this book an din so doing had some very childish dialogue between Kyle and Lee, which in turned reduce the substance of the story.
This author dragged the storyline in this book an din so doing had some very childish dialogue between Kyle and Lee, which in turned reduce the substance of the story.
September 26, 2024
Lee is insufferable and Linda is the only character that is mentally stable
April 11, 2024
This book was another roller coaster. Never thought the things that happend in this book would actually happen. But in the end, Lee and Kyle have their „happy end“, even though, because there are two more books, I think that there will definitely be more upsets to come!
I liked Lee and Kyle more than in the first book/I liked them better in the second half of the second book. Still, especially in the first half of this book, I was just annoyed by both of them. However, overall this was a pretty good book!!
Exited to read the next one ☝️
I liked Lee and Kyle more than in the first book/I liked them better in the second half of the second book. Still, especially in the first half of this book, I was just annoyed by both of them. However, overall this was a pretty good book!!
Exited to read the next one ☝️
July 6, 2025
"Lee, when I told you that you ruined me? I meant it. You have. I'm done, baby. you fucking own me. I'm yours."
So um... This went down a road I did not expect AT ALL... WHAT THE HOLY FRICK? 😱 Lee and Kyle need a serious break from what life throws at them, and there are 2 more books, these poor babies. 😭 Im not sure my heart can handle it, but I, of course, will continue and eat up all the drama! 😅
So um... This went down a road I did not expect AT ALL... WHAT THE HOLY FRICK? 😱 Lee and Kyle need a serious break from what life throws at them, and there are 2 more books, these poor babies. 😭 Im not sure my heart can handle it, but I, of course, will continue and eat up all the drama! 😅
July 4, 2025
I couldn’t put this book down I absolutely loved it. Chloe Walsh is by far one of my favorite authors. The way writes she has you feeling every emotion as you are there watching everything unfold. I can not wait to continue to read the story of Lee & Kyle.
June 22, 2023
3.5 stars
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May 6, 2024
Trigger & Content Warnings
Miscarriage recounted
Miscarriage recounted
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October 8, 2024wtf?
March 22, 2025
Kyle is not Johnny Kavanagh so I’m over it.
May 9, 2025
2.5 ⭐️
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