I won this in a giveaway!
This was objectively well-written, but it took me days to read. Anything introduced is resolved, and there are clear character arcs. But the dialogue and some of the male lead's narrative voice weren't my favorite.
Cute and mostly lighthearted, but the dialogue was cringy. Maybe my adult is showing because some of it felt very unrealistic or “too good to be true.” I don't think Raja sounded like the average young adult male.
Our leads are well-adjusted and knowledgeable, but they sound like Tumblr pamphlets. Are there well-informed young adults, yes? Even young adults who are activists have a more natural way of speaking. While it certainly gave background to the issues present, I think so much of it sounded stilted.
There are also the unspoken complexities of interracial dating as a Black woman when the other person is also a person of color but nonblack. You can tell the author has put some time in doing research for this story throughout all the history and cultural references.
I enjoyed some of the less noticeable discussions of college freshman life. Raja was a junior tattoo artist who attended his local college while at home before moving into his apartment. While most of this decision stemmed from him not wanting to make the transition too harsh on his immigrant parents, it’s also another version of college life. I went local as well and don’t see this as often in media for young adults.
While the story was good, it wasn’t fun if that makes sense. There are so many social issues at hand. The author gets the exhaustion that can come with cultural barriers and biases and even touched on interracial dating very well. You can FEEL the passive aggression or polite but not welcoming environments. The struggle Raja and Deja endure going against tradition or their parents or others’ remarks. It’s a lot. These sections were well-written and established that atmosphere masterfully, but it was stressful.
I also think she was respectful and nuanced in the conversations here. For example, the topic of arranged marriages. It was absolutely not for Raja and his sibling, but it wasn't demonized either. It's shown as a valid way to find love as well. I’m also glad the story didn’t rely on making Deja have to continually ingratiate herself to people who didn’t accept her; the story was firm on not making excuses.
Overall, I think my favorite part was Deja’s relationship with her grandmother Queenie. Deja has a southern upbringing with a huge family that admired her, and I was happy to see the family interactions. Due to the story being set before the Fall semester, the college setting really plays in the background/was non-existent. The romance was insta-lovey but sweet, but I wanted more time to see their chemistry grow/more lighthearted interactions. So much of this story was going up against a mountain that there wasn't much time to swoon and be at peace.
SN: I know it's hypocritical as someone who has used ride share app services, but Deja was in a random guy's car way TOO EASILY. Girl, he could have done anything to you!