Dead Beef makes a great first impression. Nicely drawn characters and first rate scenes with snappy dialogue hooked me immediately. But after the first hundred pages, I started skimming ahead in hopes of finding a plot worth pursuing. No luck.
The problem with Dead Beef is that it's mostly banter and set piece action scenes. The barest bones of a story are hamburger-helped into novel length by action scenes that while good, do not advance the wisp of a plot. Hackers as tech gods is cliché and ooh-ah jargon just slows the pace further. The scene of bad guys supposedly hacking nearby wireless access points by working at a coffee shop with wi-fi made me roll my eyes. Last, a clever (at first) line of binary code that cyphers 'Dead Beef' is used as a scene spacer but quickly becomes annoying through overuse when a spacer isn't necessary.
My feeling is that a good editor could make this book rock. I'm not talking about spelling, grammar and punctuation problems. Those basics are accomplished reasonably well for an indi-book, approaching commercial quality. The author can clearly write. I'm talking about story structure, or more specifically, the lack thereof.
But then a funny thing happens. The end delivers a fairly good thrill. This is a common trait of an amateur writer with talent, the story works at start and finish but has a flabby middle. Again, this is something that an editor could fix.
Just because this isn't my cup of tea doesn't mean others might not enjoy this book. It's good points are quite good. For those who don't care about the difference between a hypervisor and a hay ride, if the Amazon sample looks good, have at it.