For twenty years, bestselling author James W. Hall has been one of the most highly respected thriller writers around. With last year's Body Language, Hall garnered acclaim from authors like James Patterson and Michael Connelly, and from reviewers in publications like People and The New York Times. Now, Hall serves up Rough Draft, which is at once both his most personal and his most gripping book to date.
A few years ago, while browsing in a used bookstore, Hall found a copy of one of his early novels full of strange marginal notes and underlined passages and other cryptic messages. Fascinated by these weird hieroglyphics and unable to get them out of his mind, he used this as the basis for Rough Draft, a novel about a woman crime novelist who stumbles across a similar book and finds in those marginal notes what seems to be a direct message from the killer of her parents.
Hannah Keller's struggle to find her parents' killer, and at the same time protect her son, takes the reader on an extraordinary ride through James Hall's best thriller to date.
James W. Hall is an Edgar and Shamus Award-winning author whose books have been translated into a dozen languages. He has written twenty-one novels, four books of poetry, two collections of short stories, and two works of non-fiction. He also won a John D. MacDonald Award for Excellence in Florida Fiction, presented by the JDM Bibliophile.
He has a master’s degree in creative writing from Johns Hopkins University and a doctorate in literature from the University of Utah. He was a professor of literature and creative writing at Florida International University for 40 years where he taught such writers as Vicky Hendricks, Christine Kling, Barbara Parker and Dennis Lehane.
I ran across this title in a box of books from our storage unit, and it sounded like it might be a good one. The main character, Hannah, is an author whose son witnessed her parents being killed. Hannah is also a former police officer who believes she knew who was responsible for the murders and why.
So, when she finds a copy of her first novel in the child psychiatrist's waiting room ...and it has that suspect's name in it, she starts an investigation of her own.
There's a subplot involving the murder of a senator's daughter, and these two stories are intimately connected.
I just didn't feel drawn to any of the characters whatsoever. I read the entire book hoping to feel connected to *someone,* but I fairly soon figured out that .
As a Miami girl, I always enjoy reading a novel set on home turf. With James W. Hall, the pleasure is doubled by his superb writing skills. Hall knows how to keep a story going at full speed, fueled by skillful dialogue. His characters are full-bodied, original and realistic. The plot has multiple muders, from crime writer Hannah Keller's parents to crazed maniac Hal Bonner's seemingly random victims. Mix in more than 400 milllion in missing drug proceeds, the FBI and a U.S. senator and you've got a plt twisted within a plot. This is a suspense novel for those with the highest standards.
This was a solid mystery featuring an ex-cop turned writer who, along with her son, is haunted by the murders of her parents. She becomes an unwitting pawn in an undercover FBI operation to catch an elusive assassin who murders his victims using only his bare hands. Unfortunately for the FBI she begins to track them and try to unravel their plan. This was a really solid read. Good characters, a very interesting villian, and a different (but not too out there) mystery. I really recommend this one to anyone.
This was my first foray into this writers stories. His females are interesting but not always ones I care about. The secondary/supporting cast is always fulfilling, but his strengths are his lead male characters. They are just this side of lazy, dangerous and honest. If we could put them all in one book or continue in a series form we’d have pure gold. A cops parents are murdered and her son witness the whole thing becoming consequentially traumatize in the process. Throw in a crazy female FBI agent and an even crazier murderer for hire and you’ve got one heck of a good action packed book.
This is my first foray into a book by James W. Hall. I found it to be an entertaining read with a couple of really good plot twists. The original premise of the FBI sting seems so silly that I cannot imagine anybody would permit it, but once I got past that part it was a great spring break thriller.
While the villains were fairly interesting, I found myself really rooting for the underachieving FBI agent, Frank Sheffield...
Up until the end of the book I probably would have given at least 3 stars, but I just wasn't a huge fan of the ending. The book is well written and kept me interested, but still lacked something for me. Maybe it's that I didn't really connect with the main character. Also there was a plot point introduced that didn't ever get used/resolved, I don't want to give away any of the plot but it involves the FBI agent in charge of an operation taking place in the book. I think plenty of other people will enjoy this book, but since I didn't like the ending it kinda tainted the rest of the book.
Definitely the best of the 3 James W Hall books I just read; but still can't give it more than a 3-star "like" due to some issues with the plot and some editing errors. This novel was published back in 2000; which is the most recent of his 3 books I've reviewed. I feel this one is better than 1998's "Body Language"; which I thought was better than 1996's "Buzz Cut". I'm interested in reading some of his more recent work to see if the improvement continued.
This was written a while back, definitely followed the thrillers of the time. The kidnapper was such a thug, and there was a little much thug. But it was an interesting experience between him and his girlfriend. I enjoyed hte dynamics, the but main character was a little too perfect. it made things flat.
This was a gype of book that would be great for a trip. quick, enjoyable, but a little cookie-cutter.
I'm a big fan of Hall's Thorn series, but found the premise of this book to be just plain silly and unbelievable--while I do imagine that a federal agency could be so unprincipled, the killers' motivations were also pretty far fetched. Executed well, with a fine audio performance, but I just couldn't turn off my skepticism.
Actually a 2.5. Hall tries to do so much, he neglects the story he's trying to tell. Hall tries to create a strong female lead but he undercuts her at multiple turns. It's frustrating. And the book's big finish is ridiculous. Seriously, Hannah was either a bad cop or she's just gone daft since leaving the force.
I'd give it 3 1/2 stars if I could. Great storytelling from the villain's point of view, and everyone for that matter. The characters were nicely sketched with the exception of senator ackerman and a few political figures...thought Hall could have brought them more into the story.
It was entertaining enough. Nothing really, to remark it from other mystery novels. Like other mystery novels, it was forgettable. In another year or two, i can reread it and not remember enough of it to be entertained again.
Another great Hall novel. I had no idea that Dennis Lehane was one of his graduate writing pupils and did research for him. A strange book about dysfunctional families (which Hall goes back to time and again) and the manipulations used to bind the tie. Highly enjoyable.
This is a very good story about a female mystery writer/ex-cop whose parents were murdered five years ago. Now the FBI is using her as bait to catch a serial killer.
I think James Hall is an excellent writer. I have enjoyed several other of his novels.
Although I enjoyed this book, parts of the plot were eerily similar to others of this ilk that I have read. The bits about hacking the internet went right over my head.
Hannah Keller was the public information officer for the Miami Police Department on the day her parents were murdered. It was also the day her first novel was published. It was two years ago and now the case, never solved, has come back to haunt. I love all of James Hall's books and this one is nearly as good as the rest, but it does have a nearly fatal flaw. I am so weary of children being used as plot toys I could spit. You know from the first minute the kid is introduced that the plot will turn on the kid's safety. Kind of knocks the surprise element in the gut.
The novel is ideal for readers who enjoy slow-paced stories that provide detailed insights into each character. The book is straightforward to read, and almost everyone can imagine the lifestyle of a typical American while reading. The characters are well-crafted through detailed descriptions of their actions. Still not the mind-blowing twists in the story, but you can feel every slow turn during your read. I strongly recommend it to those who want to invest themselves in the characters rather than the story itself.
James Hall is truly a master of suspense. Several of the reviews or quotes for this book state that. Needless to say, I doubted it. After reading it though, I agree with them, he truly if a master of suspense. It takes him a few chapters to set-up the story, but once it got going, I could not put the book down. The characters are very realistic.....as well as the story....he is not too much on description or scenery and there is just a touch of romance for our heroine....but it is strictly for you to be wanting to see what happens next in the mystery. Well done Mr. Hall!!!
I will admit, I was scared going into this one. It’s rare for a thriller to have so many point of views. However, as the story got going, it was easier and easier to read. I really liked that we got the pov of the victim, villain, and then the FBI. Miami is my third favorite city so I really enjoyed the south Florida setting provided here. The writing was fine. The plot was intriguing but there were some out there moments. This was a fun and good read.
The plot for this book was fragmented and patched together, with a twist ending that just didn't work at all for me. The entire idea for this book seemed like a throwaway, something that Hall came up with at the last minute just to crank another book out. The good guys are so plain and vanilla that I never cared one bit about them throughout the entire book. It was a struggle to get through this one.
Meh. Former cop has parents murdered. Son traumatized because he was there. FBI investigates but no luck. Crazy ass killer on the loose. Son traumatized again. Yikes!