A Competent LGBT Hospital Romance
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
Falling for Her Miami Rival by Luana DaRosa is a sapphic romance set in a Florida hospital, between two doctors who went for the same job as head of the Emergency room.
One Allegra, the one who has worked at the hospital for ages as well as doing the job on a temporary basis, and Jamie, who has crossed the USA for a new job after divorcing the son of a powerful family in the hospital she worked for.
If you are looking for a sapphic romance set in a hospital then, Falling for Her Miami Rival by Luana DaRosa will tick all the boxes, however if the novel does more than that for you is more of a debate.
While both individuals have great background stories and are fully developed individuals with a romance that feels real which is what you want as the basics for a romance novel.
Luana Darosa never took these building blocks and completed all the parts of a novel.
For example, part of the tension between Jamie and Allegra at the start was that they both were up for the same job so one of them was subordinate to them as well as being disappointed.
Giving some tension, so if not an enemies to lovers at least rivals to lovers, while the role of relationships in the work place between a supervisor and someone they are in charge of. It was more or less solved in the first few chapters.
It even became where Jamie tried to smooth Allegra’s path in her new role, The story does not need to be full of arguments or disruption but a little fiction would have added to the story.
In fact Allegra getting over her divorce was the major issue of the story.
While Falling for Her Miami Rival by Luana DaRosa is a romance novel set in a USA hospital the medical system was part of the story in the same way if it was called Falling for Her Manchester Rival and set in the UK it would need to have at its basis the medical system.
Although it did not feel preachy just showing how the medical system affected a couple of individual doctors based in Florida.
It felt that the novel covered this more than the romance, while this made each character more rounded, it felt that it was over the romance part of the novel.
Which meant that tension of the couple getting together and third act break up is not all that it could have been.
This is not to say that the subject of working conditions and the health care system, should not be in a medical romance.
It is just that as the book is only 239 pages these were choices made by the writer which may have helped the novel in its main objective as a romance novel.
Having said that, Falling for Her Miami Rival by Luana DaRosa is still a romance novel that would scratch the itch of anyone who loves Sapphic romance novels in a hospital setting.