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A Slave to the Servants
Completed novel ~ Alien Abduction
Earth woman finds herself sold into intergalactic slavery.
37 Part Series
Earth woman finds herself sold into intergalactic slavery.
37 Part Series
- GenresEroticaScience Fiction
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First published August 23, 2012
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October 18, 2015
★★★★ = I may not read it again but I thoroughly enjoyed it.
I remember reading this years ago and finally decided to track it down. I read it for free on Literotica, and it's still there, as of today.
From what I remember, it's basically about a human girl who got abducted by alien slavers and sold to a family of male aliens as their "toy". She is stripped of everything morally as she is treated just like pet with no rights or choices, what-so-ever. Basically she was purchased as a sex toy for the alien males and that's exactly what she get's used for. She must wear a butt-plug all the time. She can't go anywhere by herself, not even to the toilet. Only they can feed her with their own hands. She sits on a little pillow on the floor. She is tired up, like a pet. She is treated like a slave, only they don't abuse her or torture her.
I didn't like the first 40% of this story because of how she was treated. It was painfully slow as she learnt how far she could stretch her freedom and her boundaries. Again and again she would mess up, and again and again they would punish her, like a pet. It was gut-wrenching. The alien's had no pity for the human. In one scene, they tired her to a post and let other alien males grope her, as punishment. I kept thinking "you bastards! you should love her!". Also, it was graphic towards how they handled her. Cleaning her. Played with her. Feeding her. Preparing her. The sex. Everything against her will. All the time I'm sitting there wishing they would come to love her and treat her better. Nope, she's a pet.
Ciara, the girl, is a fighter. She is so stubborn, and I guess that is why she is always getting into trouble. She never gives up and just accepts her fate. I liked that about her but I swear at one point I felt like saying "give up, Ciara, and just do what they say!" because I couldn't take her being punished, again. We meet another human, Rose, later on, and she is at total peace with her life. She loves her alien owners. She is happy and she is obedient, which, in turn, makes her life better. Ciara learns a lot from her and they become good friends.
It wasn't until the last part of the story that it became gripping. The alien world opens up more and you get a feel for who the aliens are in their own society. It's brutal. From what I remember, the female aliens rule the planet. The males are slaves to the females (hence the title) and are used for breeding, however, they are allowed to have sex-pets for fun, as their breeding can mean death among their own kind. It's really barbaric, and the females are scarey creatures! The males practically have to team-rape a female alien beast to breed them and it's more like a bloody battle in a Colosseum, than sex *shudders*
The world building was amazing, weird, but amazing. There are so many aspects to the story that I found myself falling into the depths of their problems and the angst that came with it. It wasn't kind but oh-so clever and well written.
Towards the end, Ciara becomes a huge part of the alien world as she get caught up with the alien females and their rulers. She also changes, slowly...
I gave this 4 stars as it left a impression on me. Not all good as I was somewhat depressing what Ciara went through and the emotional battles she had to win-over, however, it was all worth it in the end and even though it was a emotional battle for myself, I would still say this has a happy ending and I thoroughly enjoyed the contents of this story.
Actually, I think I might read this again.
I remember reading this years ago and finally decided to track it down. I read it for free on Literotica, and it's still there, as of today.
From what I remember, it's basically about a human girl who got abducted by alien slavers and sold to a family of male aliens as their "toy". She is stripped of everything morally as she is treated just like pet with no rights or choices, what-so-ever. Basically she was purchased as a sex toy for the alien males and that's exactly what she get's used for. She must wear a butt-plug all the time. She can't go anywhere by herself, not even to the toilet. Only they can feed her with their own hands. She sits on a little pillow on the floor. She is tired up, like a pet. She is treated like a slave, only they don't abuse her or torture her.
I didn't like the first 40% of this story because of how she was treated. It was painfully slow as she learnt how far she could stretch her freedom and her boundaries. Again and again she would mess up, and again and again they would punish her, like a pet. It was gut-wrenching. The alien's had no pity for the human. In one scene, they tired her to a post and let other alien males grope her, as punishment. I kept thinking "you bastards! you should love her!". Also, it was graphic towards how they handled her. Cleaning her. Played with her. Feeding her. Preparing her. The sex. Everything against her will. All the time I'm sitting there wishing they would come to love her and treat her better. Nope, she's a pet.
Ciara, the girl, is a fighter. She is so stubborn, and I guess that is why she is always getting into trouble. She never gives up and just accepts her fate. I liked that about her but I swear at one point I felt like saying "give up, Ciara, and just do what they say!" because I couldn't take her being punished, again. We meet another human, Rose, later on, and she is at total peace with her life. She loves her alien owners. She is happy and she is obedient, which, in turn, makes her life better. Ciara learns a lot from her and they become good friends.
It wasn't until the last part of the story that it became gripping. The alien world opens up more and you get a feel for who the aliens are in their own society. It's brutal. From what I remember, the female aliens rule the planet. The males are slaves to the females (hence the title) and are used for breeding, however, they are allowed to have sex-pets for fun, as their breeding can mean death among their own kind. It's really barbaric, and the females are scarey creatures! The males practically have to team-rape a female alien beast to breed them and it's more like a bloody battle in a Colosseum, than sex *shudders*
The world building was amazing, weird, but amazing. There are so many aspects to the story that I found myself falling into the depths of their problems and the angst that came with it. It wasn't kind but oh-so clever and well written.
Towards the end, Ciara becomes a huge part of the alien world as she get caught up with the alien females and their rulers. She also changes, slowly...
I gave this 4 stars as it left a impression on me. Not all good as I was somewhat depressing what Ciara went through and the emotional battles she had to win-over, however, it was all worth it in the end and even though it was a emotional battle for myself, I would still say this has a happy ending and I thoroughly enjoyed the contents of this story.
Actually, I think I might read this again.
September 4, 2016
This is a WONDERFUL story. It's all online. The web site is Literotica.com and here's the link: http://www.literotica.com/stories/mem...
I've been trying to get various friends and co-workers to read this for a while, unsuccessfully. Even if the fact that it's online bothers you, it'll only take a day or so to finish it once it's started, because it's THAT GOOD! Read the comments, too. This is one of the better authors on the Literotica site because she actually finishes her stories, while many on there don't. In the comments you'll find a prevailing theme--"you really should publish this"!
I highly recommend this story. Then send me a message about it so I'll finally have someone else to chat with about it!
I've been trying to get various friends and co-workers to read this for a while, unsuccessfully. Even if the fact that it's online bothers you, it'll only take a day or so to finish it once it's started, because it's THAT GOOD! Read the comments, too. This is one of the better authors on the Literotica site because she actually finishes her stories, while many on there don't. In the comments you'll find a prevailing theme--"you really should publish this"!
I highly recommend this story. Then send me a message about it so I'll finally have someone else to chat with about it!
May 22, 2020
Honestly I would buy it if it were in print. I just kind of fell in love with the storyline and characters. I really wish this author would take up writing again... professionally. I've reread this one at least 5 times!
August 22, 2015
I read this on lit first and became entranced with it .Brilliant writing and world building and had to buy it when it was finally self published .A rich plot full of twists and turns.
August 5, 2014
Sorry, no. No way. Reads as if written by a teenager. A young one. Endlessly long as well. Everything told so far.
July 13, 2021
Warning————-Dark, heavy, slavery filled book. This is not for the innocent…This is an EROTICA BOOK: the sex is mxmxmxmxf and ménage, it’s hot as fuck!
Absolutely my favorite book of all time. I have read this over and over over many years now.
The girl is abducted to a planet that has “brothers” grouped in one home that breed with their women, the women share the group of “brothers” and have them fight the women, since the women are larger with wings and claws, in the ring the men team together to tie the wings of the women so they r safe to mate.
The human slaves are shared between the brothers while the breeding women let the males keep the humans for happiness and company sine the women are not interested in giving the men on the planet that kind of affection.
Spoiler : the human can become pregnant by the males, the breeding women know this and give the humans birth control to keep it a secret, the main character, human slave, becomes pregnant and the women hide it while the men are completely unaware.—
It really is a very good book !
Absolutely my favorite book of all time. I have read this over and over over many years now.
The girl is abducted to a planet that has “brothers” grouped in one home that breed with their women, the women share the group of “brothers” and have them fight the women, since the women are larger with wings and claws, in the ring the men team together to tie the wings of the women so they r safe to mate.
The human slaves are shared between the brothers while the breeding women let the males keep the humans for happiness and company sine the women are not interested in giving the men on the planet that kind of affection.
Spoiler : the human can become pregnant by the males, the breeding women know this and give the humans birth control to keep it a secret, the main character, human slave, becomes pregnant and the women hide it while the men are completely unaware.—
It really is a very good book !
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October 23, 2023
Completely loved this book since it was my first alien romance. Being a romance reader this was a good segway into SciFi Fantasy romance. Character development through all the main charters was great! It could if had less seggs scenes but this is on a Erotic Lit site so it gives what it’s suppose to. Also the scenes are everything you can expect and they get better as the characters grow into better versions of themselves. This book is about a girl who gets abducted from earth to be a sex slave on the planet Pateria. She is sold to these 5 brothers and they enslave her but not in the way most on earth would be expected. Through her drive to live she finds away to happiness and love all while freeing herself and all her loved ones on that planet. This book has rape, forced breeding, beating, BDSM, grumpy enemies to lovers,
April 19, 2021
I absolutely adore this story. I have read it at least three times so far and I have to say I will 100% read it again and again. I hate that I can’t have it sitting on my bookshelf alongside my other books so I can just pick it up and read whenever.
August 30, 2022
Read it years ago and want to track it down again. Would love to annotate a physical copy! I remember it having lots of (sometimes odd) smut, but it's also chock full of really neat worldbuilding and quality storytelling. Definitely recommend if you're into alien abduction sex dens lol
September 26, 2023
Definitely a longer read than I was expecting but lots of twists and turns that were interesting. The first 80% was incredible in its world building, character development, and plot developments. I thought the last 20% of it was too fast and somewhat useless but good nonetheless.
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October 22, 2023
I really enjoyed reading this story. Love books that pull me in with each page. This book did just that, kept me very interested. I would really enjoy a physical copy to sit on my bookshelf someday. Five stars!!
October 1, 2022
Loved this book! I'm re-reading it now.
October 22, 2023
This story was so captivating. I loved it all!!
September 27, 2020
You know what, I enjoyed this story. Had some odd parts, some ups and downs, but for me, all in all, enjoyable. I shared it with some like minded friends, and they thought it was enticing, too. Definitely smutty, 100%, not for the faint of heart.
November 1, 2022
4.25 stars
This was a great story with a great end!! I’m ashamed that having read numerous erotic fiction for 5+ years, I only now just heard of this amazing story. It seems the author left the site 10 years ago, but she has one of the largest fanbases on the site, and her fans continue to sing its praises. It definitely deserves the hype. I literally scheduled time in my days to read this behemoth because it is so worth it (although I did my calculations and 37 chapters, each on average 13k words would make this anywhere from 960-2100 pages long!) You managed to make me, a girl who only browses these stories from time to time, be fully engrossed in a science epic fantasy erotica with slavery and orgy elements and it’s mesmerizing. I was surprised that But I still felt like this was an appropriate ending for her. I will miss the adventures of this kinky , goofy, amazing Spartan bunch , and I think the only way I can be sated is by reading her other work, Bound to my Mate (another nonhuman love story, though thankfully wayy lighter in pages). Aside from a few slow points in the book and some unnecessary characters (was Vera really a needed side villain? Hmm) this is easily one of the best books on Literotica of all time. And all of the different types of people commenting on this story is proof of that. Well wishes and hope the author is with her family somewhere warm and cozy reading her fanmail:)
This was a great story with a great end!! I’m ashamed that having read numerous erotic fiction for 5+ years, I only now just heard of this amazing story. It seems the author left the site 10 years ago, but she has one of the largest fanbases on the site, and her fans continue to sing its praises. It definitely deserves the hype. I literally scheduled time in my days to read this behemoth because it is so worth it (although I did my calculations and 37 chapters, each on average 13k words would make this anywhere from 960-2100 pages long!) You managed to make me, a girl who only browses these stories from time to time, be fully engrossed in a science epic fantasy erotica with slavery and orgy elements and it’s mesmerizing. I was surprised that But I still felt like this was an appropriate ending for her. I will miss the adventures of this kinky , goofy, amazing Spartan bunch , and I think the only way I can be sated is by reading her other work, Bound to my Mate (another nonhuman love story, though thankfully wayy lighter in pages). Aside from a few slow points in the book and some unnecessary characters (was Vera really a needed side villain? Hmm) this is easily one of the best books on Literotica of all time. And all of the different types of people commenting on this story is proof of that. Well wishes and hope the author is with her family somewhere warm and cozy reading her fanmail:)
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
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