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On the Wind #2
Guardian
Only months ago, Hector was in his deathbed. Now, he’s fled his home, abandoning everything he’s ever known to protect his family. But in Nemeda, Paris and Helena don’t need their older brother to provide for them. Unmoored, Hector struggles to find his purpose, until a conniving Nemedan chief questions their legitimacy in the clans. The three refugee siblings must each serve a year on the wall, fighting in the unending war with Nemeda’s southern enemies, but Paris and Helena have carved a place for themselves in their new home. Hector alone is unanchored, and to keep his family safe, determines to serve all three years himself.
The chance to get close to formidable silver-haired chief of the Crane Clan—a man who looked at Hector at his weakest and saw value still—is only a faraway dream.
Killian has led the Nemedan war effort for twenty years. Duty and fairness surpass every other concern, but with Hector of Urial stationed in his lands, he finds himself bending rules that have kept Nemeda secure for generations. While Hector tests his boundaries, he also makes Killian question his assumption that love has no place in war, or in his life.
Killian will move armies to see Hector safe, but with a war looming and the threat of an illness that might steal Hector’s life as easily as any enemy blade, they’re on a collision course with fate that will change the whole land.
The chance to get close to formidable silver-haired chief of the Crane Clan—a man who looked at Hector at his weakest and saw value still—is only a faraway dream.
Killian has led the Nemedan war effort for twenty years. Duty and fairness surpass every other concern, but with Hector of Urial stationed in his lands, he finds himself bending rules that have kept Nemeda secure for generations. While Hector tests his boundaries, he also makes Killian question his assumption that love has no place in war, or in his life.
Killian will move armies to see Hector safe, but with a war looming and the threat of an illness that might steal Hector’s life as easily as any enemy blade, they’re on a collision course with fate that will change the whole land.
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First published October 24, 2024
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November 18, 2024
4 Stars
For the most part, I had a really lovely time re-immersing myself back in the land of Nemeda, with its awe-inspiring bird-shifter clans and the heart-weary outsiders who are finally finding a sense of home and family among them.
Crane chief Killian, an overall badass warrior and protector of the realm, was EASILY my favourite character introduced in book one (Sanctuary), leaving me very eager to read his story. As the stoic but beloved leader of his people—who carries the weight of responsibility of the entire country, fighting day in and day out on The Wall, in the ongoing conflict against the aggressive southern bordering peoples—Killian, more than anyone, was due a happy ending.
Enter Hector. As Paris’s older brother, Hector could relate, in his own ways, to Killian’s sense of duty and responsibility. Having fled the kingdom of Urial (to the north) after an assassination attempt on his life, Hector followed his siblings to Nemeda, hoping, like Paris, to find his own new sense of purpose and belonging among the welcoming people he now feels indebted to.
Desperate to prove his worth, Hector follows Killian back to The Wall, joining the fight—again, in his own unique way—to help the Nemedans, increasingly looking for ways to better protect the people and, hopefully, seek a potential resolution to the war itself, as unlikely as it seems to Killian and his tired, over-strained people.
It was obvious from their first meeting (in Sanctuary) that Killian and Hector were immediately taken with one another, so it was really no surprise that neither man did much to hide their growing interest and attraction once they were both back in Nemeda and Hector was healed from his previous poisoning. Naturally, there were things standing in the way of their easy road as a couple—pesky Avianitis to name but one potentially deadly reason—but the heart wants want the heart wants, and it didn’t take too long for these two to embrace the small joys where they could, together.
I think I actually liked Hector and Killian (as characters and as a couple) better than I liked Paris and Brett. Perhaps because they were both such protectors by nature, and smart, intuitive men, who had put others first for so damn long that I was just as desperate as they were to seek and hold on to the happiness they so rightly deserved.
The story was a little slower to grab me than book one, I’ll admit, and the ending felt a bit rushed—with a resolution that was maybe a bit too convenient, considering the high stakes that had been at play. But I was fully invested in those middle chapters, . Those moments were definitely my favourite parts of the story and I appreciated the character growth and the various dynamics with side characters that came into play in those scenes.
Overall, this was perhaps slightly less enjoyable than book one was for me, but I think that had a lot to do with how won-over I initially was by the unique world-building and all the initial bird clan/character introductions, which I just went mental for at the time, for some bewildering reason.
With the next book (Harbor) set back in Urial—following Nemedan outcast Orestes as he heads north as a new envoy—it should be interesting to revisit Paris’s old flame, the entitled Prince Tybalt, who, frankly, I’m kind of fascinated by, desperate am I to see how redeemable the authors can make his initially unlikable character. Bring it!
For the most part, I had a really lovely time re-immersing myself back in the land of Nemeda, with its awe-inspiring bird-shifter clans and the heart-weary outsiders who are finally finding a sense of home and family among them.
Crane chief Killian, an overall badass warrior and protector of the realm, was EASILY my favourite character introduced in book one (Sanctuary), leaving me very eager to read his story. As the stoic but beloved leader of his people—who carries the weight of responsibility of the entire country, fighting day in and day out on The Wall, in the ongoing conflict against the aggressive southern bordering peoples—Killian, more than anyone, was due a happy ending.
Enter Hector. As Paris’s older brother, Hector could relate, in his own ways, to Killian’s sense of duty and responsibility. Having fled the kingdom of Urial (to the north) after an assassination attempt on his life, Hector followed his siblings to Nemeda, hoping, like Paris, to find his own new sense of purpose and belonging among the welcoming people he now feels indebted to.
Desperate to prove his worth, Hector follows Killian back to The Wall, joining the fight—again, in his own unique way—to help the Nemedans, increasingly looking for ways to better protect the people and, hopefully, seek a potential resolution to the war itself, as unlikely as it seems to Killian and his tired, over-strained people.
It was obvious from their first meeting (in Sanctuary) that Killian and Hector were immediately taken with one another, so it was really no surprise that neither man did much to hide their growing interest and attraction once they were both back in Nemeda and Hector was healed from his previous poisoning. Naturally, there were things standing in the way of their easy road as a couple—pesky Avianitis to name but one potentially deadly reason—but the heart wants want the heart wants, and it didn’t take too long for these two to embrace the small joys where they could, together.
I think I actually liked Hector and Killian (as characters and as a couple) better than I liked Paris and Brett. Perhaps because they were both such protectors by nature, and smart, intuitive men, who had put others first for so damn long that I was just as desperate as they were to seek and hold on to the happiness they so rightly deserved.
The story was a little slower to grab me than book one, I’ll admit, and the ending felt a bit rushed—with a resolution that was maybe a bit too convenient, considering the high stakes that had been at play. But I was fully invested in those middle chapters, . Those moments were definitely my favourite parts of the story and I appreciated the character growth and the various dynamics with side characters that came into play in those scenes.
Overall, this was perhaps slightly less enjoyable than book one was for me, but I think that had a lot to do with how won-over I initially was by the unique world-building and all the initial bird clan/character introductions, which I just went mental for at the time, for some bewildering reason.
With the next book (Harbor) set back in Urial—following Nemedan outcast Orestes as he heads north as a new envoy—it should be interesting to revisit Paris’s old flame, the entitled Prince Tybalt, who, frankly, I’m kind of fascinated by, desperate am I to see how redeemable the authors can make his initially unlikable character. Bring it!
November 15, 2024
~2.5~
That cover looks heavily AI generated; it's either that or a Photoshop project gone terribly wrong. The face is too smooth, and the small head doesn't belong on that bulky body. The sphere and white swirls make the dude look like a demented merman.
Cover aside, as much as I loved the first book, Guardian was a letdown.
The story meandered along without exploring anything in depth. I could summarize the plot in a couple sentences. The richness of discovery apparent in the first book was missing here.
The MCs didn't have much chemistry. Hector kisses Killian, and Killian pushes him away ... until he doesn't. There was no real buildup, no tension, no spark.
Paris, who was such a joy in the first book, was a brat in this story. Both he and Helena got their bird but were so angry at Killian for "infecting" Hector, like why not be pissy with your lovers for doing the same to you?
What I liked so much about the first book were the descriptions of the clans, the multitude of well-developed secondary characters, the lore of the birds. We don't get any of that here. A couple secondary characters are mentioned in passing, but they are not present in the story. The complexity just wasn't there.
Even Hector transforming into his bird was disappointing
Then the book ended, and I seriously did a double-take, like that's it? We get one quickly summarized chapter to absorb this huge, dynamic shift in culture?
Never mind that the premise was ludicrous. I know this is a fantasy, but people are people and no way did I believe the Southlanders would have accepted Hector's proposition that quickly and easily.
ETA: Serious typos and grammatical issues. For shame.
That cover looks heavily AI generated; it's either that or a Photoshop project gone terribly wrong. The face is too smooth, and the small head doesn't belong on that bulky body. The sphere and white swirls make the dude look like a demented merman.
Cover aside, as much as I loved the first book, Guardian was a letdown.
The story meandered along without exploring anything in depth. I could summarize the plot in a couple sentences. The richness of discovery apparent in the first book was missing here.
The MCs didn't have much chemistry. Hector kisses Killian, and Killian pushes him away ... until he doesn't. There was no real buildup, no tension, no spark.
Paris, who was such a joy in the first book, was a brat in this story. Both he and Helena got their bird but were so angry at Killian for "infecting" Hector, like why not be pissy with your lovers for doing the same to you?
What I liked so much about the first book were the descriptions of the clans, the multitude of well-developed secondary characters, the lore of the birds. We don't get any of that here. A couple secondary characters are mentioned in passing, but they are not present in the story. The complexity just wasn't there.
Even Hector transforming into his bird was disappointing
Then the book ended, and I seriously did a double-take, like that's it? We get one quickly summarized chapter to absorb this huge, dynamic shift in culture?
Never mind that the premise was ludicrous. I know this is a fantasy, but people are people and no way did I believe the Southlanders would have accepted Hector's proposition that quickly and easily.
ETA: Serious typos and grammatical issues. For shame.
November 3, 2025
The second in this fantasy series was a bit more up and down for me, there were times I felt like the narrative was superbly paced and things were getting more and more intriguing, others it seemed to drag on a while.
However, I did really love that Hector's bird was an owl, albeit not the same species as his half-siblings, as I felt it provided him with the comfort that he wasn't so different from them as he'd felt growing up.
And I adored Killian, his stoic determination, his strength in the face of the odds his Crane Clan were constantly facing fighting on The Wall.
Did the way in which a peace treaty transpired feel a bit of an easy solution maybe a tad, but it also made total sense with how the Southlanders had been portrayed and I liked that it was the brother of the former commander that Killian had tried to find neutral ground with before who saw the benefits.
However, I did really love that Hector's bird was an owl, albeit not the same species as his half-siblings, as I felt it provided him with the comfort that he wasn't so different from them as he'd felt growing up.
And I adored Killian, his stoic determination, his strength in the face of the odds his Crane Clan were constantly facing fighting on The Wall.
Did the way in which a peace treaty transpired feel a bit of an easy solution maybe a tad, but it also made total sense with how the Southlanders had been portrayed and I liked that it was the brother of the former commander that Killian had tried to find neutral ground with before who saw the benefits.
October 27, 2024
3.75
This was really really lovely. I've been looking forward to Killian and Hector's story since the previous book, and their dynamic did not disappoint.
Both of them are so freaking relatable: duty-bound, forced to grow up at a young age, responsible for every single person in their lives even at the cost of their own health and happiness... I wanted to jump into the book and hide them from the world. I loved them both so much! Especially Hector: I found his struggles with his role and his need to prove himself so so relatable and really well written.
I loved their romance quite a lot: I admit, after they got together my attention started to wane (it's a thing I do unfortunately! My brain lives for the build-up; that's why I love slow-burns the best!), but I still found them freaking adorable.
The plot kept me hooked as usual, and I loved that ending: it nearly made me cry. Such a fabulous ending: I love HEAs that feel like proper HEAs.
The writing felt a smidge convoluted this time around; I usually adore Sam Burns and W.M. Fawkes' straightforward style, but maybe this book could have gone a few more rounds with an editor because it felt, especially at the beginning, needlessly chunky and difficult. It's just a small niggle though! I'm sure if my brain was behaving better, I'd never have noticed it.
As usual, I adored the world-building to absolute bits. It's such a fascinating world, and I can't wait to dive into the next book for more. I cannot wait for Orestes too: he's SO fascinating as a character, and the blurb for the next book has me frothing at the mouth already. Talk about a redemption arc *gimme gimme*
TWs/CWs: death, death of a parent, violence, injury, neglectful parent.
Many thanks to the authors for the ARC. This is my honest review.
This was really really lovely. I've been looking forward to Killian and Hector's story since the previous book, and their dynamic did not disappoint.
Both of them are so freaking relatable: duty-bound, forced to grow up at a young age, responsible for every single person in their lives even at the cost of their own health and happiness... I wanted to jump into the book and hide them from the world. I loved them both so much! Especially Hector: I found his struggles with his role and his need to prove himself so so relatable and really well written.
I loved their romance quite a lot: I admit, after they got together my attention started to wane (it's a thing I do unfortunately! My brain lives for the build-up; that's why I love slow-burns the best!), but I still found them freaking adorable.
The plot kept me hooked as usual, and I loved that ending: it nearly made me cry. Such a fabulous ending: I love HEAs that feel like proper HEAs.
The writing felt a smidge convoluted this time around; I usually adore Sam Burns and W.M. Fawkes' straightforward style, but maybe this book could have gone a few more rounds with an editor because it felt, especially at the beginning, needlessly chunky and difficult. It's just a small niggle though! I'm sure if my brain was behaving better, I'd never have noticed it.
As usual, I adored the world-building to absolute bits. It's such a fascinating world, and I can't wait to dive into the next book for more. I cannot wait for Orestes too: he's SO fascinating as a character, and the blurb for the next book has me frothing at the mouth already. Talk about a redemption arc *gimme gimme*
TWs/CWs: death, death of a parent, violence, injury, neglectful parent.
Many thanks to the authors for the ARC. This is my honest review.
November 7, 2024
the ending... the last few chapters.. it went so fast paced. its like they blinked into the future. i did not like the resolution. not to mention their relationship got kinda stale at the end when they still havent said i love you to each other after the avianitis 😬🙄😔
October 25, 2024
Guardian in the second book in this serie! This is Hector and killian book! In the previous book Hector was rescued, he was poisoned and almost died, he and his family abandoned everything so they can survive. Hector is struggling to find his own path, everything he was through is of not used in his new life. He learns that to be accepted as a Nemeda he most spend time at the wall, fighting the war against the southern. Hector is determined to serve three years so he can keep his family safe. He also has the chance to get close to Killian the chief of the Crane Clan.
Killian has been in charge of his clan for twenty years, he is all about his duty and loyalty to protect Nemeda, but now with Hector on his land he find himself protecting him even if he have to bend the rules to do so, Hector is making Killian question his own ideas about love. One thing is clear for him is that he will do anything to protect him. This was a great story, Hector and Killian are attracted to one another but they have so many conflicts but their connection is getting stronger as they get closer.
This was a great surprise because how Hector was able to make a big difference with the war. I can’t wait for the next book of the series!
Killian has been in charge of his clan for twenty years, he is all about his duty and loyalty to protect Nemeda, but now with Hector on his land he find himself protecting him even if he have to bend the rules to do so, Hector is making Killian question his own ideas about love. One thing is clear for him is that he will do anything to protect him. This was a great story, Hector and Killian are attracted to one another but they have so many conflicts but their connection is getting stronger as they get closer.
This was a great surprise because how Hector was able to make a big difference with the war. I can’t wait for the next book of the series!
October 24, 2024
Guardian is the second book in the On the Wind series. This book can be read as a standalone but I feel it is better after reading Sanctuary the first book in the series. This is the story of Hector and Killian. This is another great story by Burns and Fawkes. Like all their other stories this one has great characters and amazing world building. I love the secondary characters also. The plot was great to. I would definitely recommend this book and series.
October 27, 2024
excellent writing, beautifully executed plot and great characters
Rating: 4.5🌈
Guardian is not the book I expected it to be. Knowing that Hector was going to The Wall, with the Crane Clan, to defend the borders of Nemeda against the southerners in their never ending war, I expected non-stop battles, bloodshed, and angst.
Especially from Hector, a man who has lost everything and has arrived in a new land where he has no status, no martial skills. And the youngest, most gentle sibling he’s always protected, due to love and responsibility, is the one who has ended up rescuing not only himself but Hector and their sister (Sanctuary). He’s a very tragic, wounded figure in many ways.
But Burns and Fawkes delivers a great story and fantastic characters in a narrative that will go into a more intimate, emotionally powerful world, rather than a larger, action packed adventure.
Hector, in a story that sees himself redefining his thinking about his life and future, is paired with a man who, once the layered are revealed, is similar in his own mind and history. That’s Killian, war Chief of the Crane Clan, whose interesting internal family and child raising structure has produced a person who understands the burdens of responsibility that Hector has borne since adolescence.
Having Hector and Killian work together and struggle with their own issues as well as Hector’s need to redefine who he is as a man in a new world, needing new ideas and skills, is a brilliant way to bring them closer together and to make them relatable to the reader. Hector’s insights into why he’s so torn, unhappy, and confused are thoughts that anyone can understand. So too are those of Killian’s as he seeks to help Hector while still struggling to stay apart emotionally. It all makes sense and their relationship is one I couldn’t get enough of. The authors writing is so skilled in detailing their emotions and dynamics.
I was thrilled to see both siblings again in important roles and emotional moments together. That sister has found her home in Nemeda as the fierce consort to the Chief of the Raven Clan, is no surprise as we saw the women together at the end of the first novel. Men and women rule Clans in Nemeda, something that’s not true to the north and south, so I wonder if it will play into future plans.
The authors have created such a great background and culture for the Crane Clan (along with the many other clans) that it’s easy to get sidetracked imagining more than just the cultural tidbits that are being given out. There’s a wealth of riches here throughout the whole story and series, and it’s goes into making this a beautiful, compelling book.
The ending was as astonishing and satisfying as the storylines that led up to it. And it made me anticipate the next in this fabulous series even more.
Guardian (On the Wind Book 2) by Sam Burns and W.M. Fawkes is an excellent read as is the series. Absolutely recommend!
Cover art © 2023 by Natasha Snow Designs
On The Wind series:
Sanctuary #1
Guardian #2
Harbor #3 - November 14,2024
Rating: 4.5🌈
Guardian is not the book I expected it to be. Knowing that Hector was going to The Wall, with the Crane Clan, to defend the borders of Nemeda against the southerners in their never ending war, I expected non-stop battles, bloodshed, and angst.
Especially from Hector, a man who has lost everything and has arrived in a new land where he has no status, no martial skills. And the youngest, most gentle sibling he’s always protected, due to love and responsibility, is the one who has ended up rescuing not only himself but Hector and their sister (Sanctuary). He’s a very tragic, wounded figure in many ways.
But Burns and Fawkes delivers a great story and fantastic characters in a narrative that will go into a more intimate, emotionally powerful world, rather than a larger, action packed adventure.
Hector, in a story that sees himself redefining his thinking about his life and future, is paired with a man who, once the layered are revealed, is similar in his own mind and history. That’s Killian, war Chief of the Crane Clan, whose interesting internal family and child raising structure has produced a person who understands the burdens of responsibility that Hector has borne since adolescence.
Having Hector and Killian work together and struggle with their own issues as well as Hector’s need to redefine who he is as a man in a new world, needing new ideas and skills, is a brilliant way to bring them closer together and to make them relatable to the reader. Hector’s insights into why he’s so torn, unhappy, and confused are thoughts that anyone can understand. So too are those of Killian’s as he seeks to help Hector while still struggling to stay apart emotionally. It all makes sense and their relationship is one I couldn’t get enough of. The authors writing is so skilled in detailing their emotions and dynamics.
I was thrilled to see both siblings again in important roles and emotional moments together. That sister has found her home in Nemeda as the fierce consort to the Chief of the Raven Clan, is no surprise as we saw the women together at the end of the first novel. Men and women rule Clans in Nemeda, something that’s not true to the north and south, so I wonder if it will play into future plans.
The authors have created such a great background and culture for the Crane Clan (along with the many other clans) that it’s easy to get sidetracked imagining more than just the cultural tidbits that are being given out. There’s a wealth of riches here throughout the whole story and series, and it’s goes into making this a beautiful, compelling book.
The ending was as astonishing and satisfying as the storylines that led up to it. And it made me anticipate the next in this fabulous series even more.
Guardian (On the Wind Book 2) by Sam Burns and W.M. Fawkes is an excellent read as is the series. Absolutely recommend!
Cover art © 2023 by Natasha Snow Designs
On The Wind series:
Sanctuary #1
Guardian #2
Harbor #3 - November 14,2024
November 1, 2024
A Joyfully Jay review.
4.25 stars
Guardian is the second book in the engaging On the Wind series by Sam Burns and W.M. Fawkes. Please note that there is a reveal in the first book that this second story assumes folks already know. This book also continues story threads established in book one, even though it features a new couple. Start with book one, Sanctuary, for a spoiler-free way to learn about the series.
Read Jay’s review in its entirety here.
4.25 stars
Guardian is the second book in the engaging On the Wind series by Sam Burns and W.M. Fawkes. Please note that there is a reveal in the first book that this second story assumes folks already know. This book also continues story threads established in book one, even though it features a new couple. Start with book one, Sanctuary, for a spoiler-free way to learn about the series.
Read Jay’s review in its entirety here.
October 29, 2024
oh what a beautiful story
Ok Fawks and Burns. You two are quickly becoming favorite writers of mine. Beautifully crafted worlds filled with wonderfully complex people. And the love stories are just heart achingly perfect. I’ve Never wanted to cry at a romance as much as I have when reading your novels (this is the second one I’ve read) and in a good way. From the pining in the first book to the desperate desire for peace after a never ending war in this one. I Love the solution in this book. It doesn’t feel hand wavy and fits with the nature of what we learn about the Southern adversaries. I Adore the secondary characters, even the slimy nasty ones.
My Only issue and it’s a tiny quibble at that. How the heck do you keep feathers in your hair neat and tidy over time? Like does their long hair magically brush itself every time they shift? Do the feathers just have some kind of magic preservative? I’ve cared for parrots and even had feathers tied in my hair for a time for a theater thing and let me tell you they Don’t last for years and without preening they get brittle and break. Yeah, these are the things my brain gets hung up on but anyhow. Wonderful stories go read them.
Ok Fawks and Burns. You two are quickly becoming favorite writers of mine. Beautifully crafted worlds filled with wonderfully complex people. And the love stories are just heart achingly perfect. I’ve Never wanted to cry at a romance as much as I have when reading your novels (this is the second one I’ve read) and in a good way. From the pining in the first book to the desperate desire for peace after a never ending war in this one. I Love the solution in this book. It doesn’t feel hand wavy and fits with the nature of what we learn about the Southern adversaries. I Adore the secondary characters, even the slimy nasty ones.
My Only issue and it’s a tiny quibble at that. How the heck do you keep feathers in your hair neat and tidy over time? Like does their long hair magically brush itself every time they shift? Do the feathers just have some kind of magic preservative? I’ve cared for parrots and even had feathers tied in my hair for a time for a theater thing and let me tell you they Don’t last for years and without preening they get brittle and break. Yeah, these are the things my brain gets hung up on but anyhow. Wonderful stories go read them.
November 28, 2024
A really fun read right up until the very end. I enjoyed the characters and they felt fresh and different as well as complex. The plot was fascinating and fast, careening us towards a really brilliant climax and ending only to crash and burn and leave me absolutely bewildered and disappointed.
Knowing what I know now about this book, would I still read it if I went back in time?
Maybe. I enjoyed the book and truly hated the lack of an ending.
See below for the four criteria I use to decide whether and when to read a book
CHARACTERS: Hector and Killian are really interesting characters. Killian, as clan chief of the Cranes, has spent his entire life at war, to the detriment of actually 'living' and enjoying the beauty in things. Despite all that, he has an impressive head on his shoulders and is wonderfully compassionate. He's a true leader without needing to exert that influence, which is impressive when it's achieved in writing! As for Hector, he's the firstborn struggling with feelings of not belonging, being left behind, failure, especially when he's comparing himself to his younger siblings. What he's feeling is highly relatable and it's impossible not to sympathize with his plight. He struggles to find his place in the world and rebuild his confidence back up and Killian is the perfect help for that. They go together so well and I adored watching their relationship grow.
PLOT: On the one hand we have the personal growth journeys for Hector and Killian, we also have the romantic aspect with their developing relationship, and finally the external conflict building throughout involving incursions by the Southerners past the wall, which is where Killian has spent his entire life and focus. Fast-paced with world-building that continues to add on from book one, the stakes are high and build up so well only to spectacularly crash at the end. We crest that climactic moment only for it to basically 'poof' away in a blink. I was left shocked, bewildered, confused, and then ultimately disappointed.
EMOTIONAL INTENSITY: There is no good/bad here. Sometimes I just want a low-investment entertainment read whereas other times a high-stakes 'I need a therapist to recover' is what I need.
2:5/low. Wonderful read with just enough intensity to keep me interested and invested.
CATHARTIC FULFILLMENT: Is the emotional journey worth it? Do I finish this book feeling that I've crested the wave of the climactic moment and everything has been settled, leaving me settled and fulfilled?
25%. The MCs get their HEA. But again, the ending and lack of a climactic moment and 'final battle' per se took so much away from the story. I was so disappointed and frustrated.
Knowing what I know now about this book, would I still read it if I went back in time?
Maybe. I enjoyed the book and truly hated the lack of an ending.
See below for the four criteria I use to decide whether and when to read a book
CHARACTERS: Hector and Killian are really interesting characters. Killian, as clan chief of the Cranes, has spent his entire life at war, to the detriment of actually 'living' and enjoying the beauty in things. Despite all that, he has an impressive head on his shoulders and is wonderfully compassionate. He's a true leader without needing to exert that influence, which is impressive when it's achieved in writing! As for Hector, he's the firstborn struggling with feelings of not belonging, being left behind, failure, especially when he's comparing himself to his younger siblings. What he's feeling is highly relatable and it's impossible not to sympathize with his plight. He struggles to find his place in the world and rebuild his confidence back up and Killian is the perfect help for that. They go together so well and I adored watching their relationship grow.
PLOT: On the one hand we have the personal growth journeys for Hector and Killian, we also have the romantic aspect with their developing relationship, and finally the external conflict building throughout involving incursions by the Southerners past the wall, which is where Killian has spent his entire life and focus. Fast-paced with world-building that continues to add on from book one, the stakes are high and build up so well only to spectacularly crash at the end. We crest that climactic moment only for it to basically 'poof' away in a blink. I was left shocked, bewildered, confused, and then ultimately disappointed.
EMOTIONAL INTENSITY: There is no good/bad here. Sometimes I just want a low-investment entertainment read whereas other times a high-stakes 'I need a therapist to recover' is what I need.
2:5/low. Wonderful read with just enough intensity to keep me interested and invested.
CATHARTIC FULFILLMENT: Is the emotional journey worth it? Do I finish this book feeling that I've crested the wave of the climactic moment and everything has been settled, leaving me settled and fulfilled?
25%. The MCs get their HEA. But again, the ending and lack of a climactic moment and 'final battle' per se took so much away from the story. I was so disappointed and frustrated.
August 7, 2025
3.5 stars
Book 2 could have easily been rated a 4, but in comparison to book 1 & 3 it just didn't stand up as well for me. I loved the progression of the story. I really liked the 2 m/c's etc... but 1 thing has continued to agitate me. It was a change in 2 characters (the siblings) that seemed out of character and non-sensical. They are so supportive of their older brother especially in letting him know he will find his bird love. They know what that means. They went through the change (1 without even knowing why) themselves. When he gets the "bird flu", they act a fool. The way they as characters were developed and prior actions should have had them worried but happy for him. Instead of being supportive they alienate and attack his love. There is no record of the m/c from the 1st book acting this way with the sister, so why is he joining her extreme reaction now for the older brother no less??? How were they expecting him to get his heart's desire without going through this??? It just made no sense.
I still love this world, these characters, and I am continuing on to book #3. I found the resolution interesting and clever, but I could see how others might find it a little "too convenient". I felt the groundwork was laid for how it turned out, and that is what made all the difference for me.
Book 1 (with some comments on book 2)
Updated to 5 stars a week+ after completing series.
I typically don't review the books I give 4 stars. I also tend to read books once a series is complete, thus I'm able to get a feel for a majority of the reviews. For me the 1st book was, 4.5 stars. I seriously considered rounding up, but over the last few years - if I have to debate that much then it typically drops to a 4.
Of the negative reviews, many felt the world building was not adequate. I thought that it was incredibly well developed, but... I can see where others might not, if they DNF or were more skimming. There is not a couple of large info dumps at the start. The world, especially involving the clans, is revealed organically often subtly. Little pieces of info about their land, their lifestyle, their collective etc... The 1st book introduced us to the individual clans and the Northern Kingdom. The 2nd book focused more on the Crane's clan, but also how the collective clans worked, their beliefs, their history, and their politics - along with the always attacking Southern Kingdom.
Another issue in the negative reviews is what some clever reviewer labeled as the deadly 'bird STD". Quite a few were rightly upset (for the real world) how the m/c's life was put in danger without his knowledge. For me, I predominately read sci-fi/ fantasy to escape the real world. We were given multiple reasons why the other m/c had not even considered it a risk at that moment. This is not even counting the very dangerous political issues or the emergency situational issue. So, was I thrilled? No. But I could understand it for this fantasy world the authors built with everything else that was going on at the same time.
I loved this story. The characters, the world, the m/c's, nearly everything. If this story ends up memorable a few weeks down the road, I may change my reading to 5 stars. I will continue on to the 3rd book.
Book 2 could have easily been rated a 4, but in comparison to book 1 & 3 it just didn't stand up as well for me. I loved the progression of the story. I really liked the 2 m/c's etc... but 1 thing has continued to agitate me. It was a change in 2 characters (the siblings) that seemed out of character and non-sensical. They are so supportive of their older brother especially in letting him know he will find his bird love. They know what that means. They went through the change (1 without even knowing why) themselves. When he gets the "bird flu", they act a fool. The way they as characters were developed and prior actions should have had them worried but happy for him. Instead of being supportive they alienate and attack his love. There is no record of the m/c from the 1st book acting this way with the sister, so why is he joining her extreme reaction now for the older brother no less??? How were they expecting him to get his heart's desire without going through this??? It just made no sense.
I still love this world, these characters, and I am continuing on to book #3. I found the resolution interesting and clever, but I could see how others might find it a little "too convenient". I felt the groundwork was laid for how it turned out, and that is what made all the difference for me.
Book 1 (with some comments on book 2)
Updated to 5 stars a week+ after completing series.
I typically don't review the books I give 4 stars. I also tend to read books once a series is complete, thus I'm able to get a feel for a majority of the reviews. For me the 1st book was, 4.5 stars. I seriously considered rounding up, but over the last few years - if I have to debate that much then it typically drops to a 4.
Of the negative reviews, many felt the world building was not adequate. I thought that it was incredibly well developed, but... I can see where others might not, if they DNF or were more skimming. There is not a couple of large info dumps at the start. The world, especially involving the clans, is revealed organically often subtly. Little pieces of info about their land, their lifestyle, their collective etc... The 1st book introduced us to the individual clans and the Northern Kingdom. The 2nd book focused more on the Crane's clan, but also how the collective clans worked, their beliefs, their history, and their politics - along with the always attacking Southern Kingdom.
Another issue in the negative reviews is what some clever reviewer labeled as the deadly 'bird STD". Quite a few were rightly upset (for the real world) how the m/c's life was put in danger without his knowledge. For me, I predominately read sci-fi/ fantasy to escape the real world. We were given multiple reasons why the other m/c had not even considered it a risk at that moment. This is not even counting the very dangerous political issues or the emergency situational issue. So, was I thrilled? No. But I could understand it for this fantasy world the authors built with everything else that was going on at the same time.
I loved this story. The characters, the world, the m/c's, nearly everything. If this story ends up memorable a few weeks down the road, I may change my reading to 5 stars. I will continue on to the 3rd book.
December 25, 2024
Oh my Gosh... It was soooo gooood....!!!!! The action picks up where the first book ended, so it's smooth for the reader to understand where we are. But this time we mostly go to Crane lands, with a couple bits of travelling around Nemeda involved. The action/story is definitely packed and is building throughout the whole book, with some suspense going on in the last part of the book. The ending surprised me, honestly. But surely in a good way. There were two tiny little minuses about Hector and his siblings. In the end Hector really grew mentally and emotionally from when we met him first, and his relationship with Killian was the cherry on top for me. The second thing that I didn't really like was: All in all, I can honestly say that even if there were those two elements that were infuriating/frustrating me, there was nothing that could throw me off of reading this book. I fell in love even more with Nemeda, and definitely I can't wait to read the last book especially that it's about the big gentle giant Orestes if you can call him that, because in this book he definitely showed some claws ;).
Ranking of the pairings:
1. Hector & Killian
2. Brett & Paris
Ranking of the pairings:
1. Hector & Killian
2. Brett & Paris
January 19, 2025
Wow! Such a Great Story!
Wow. I was excited for Hector and Killian’s book but was not prepared for just how much I was going to love this book.
The book starts off a little slow, mostly because of the kind of awkward back and forth that Hector and Killian have while they both deny themselves their feelings for one another. But luckily none of that lasts too long and the way everything starts to play out once they do get together is so well done!
I love the whole timeline and how everything happened between them and with the Crane people. Especially how positive and supportive everyone was! There were a few moments where Hector or Killian were acting out of character (or at least what others thought was out of character) or moments where they were showing their true selves and characteristics, and the others in Crane were so sweet and happy for them! It was so nice to read and considering this book is about a group of people whose entire daily life is about fighting and defense, the book was super low angst!
Hector and Killian took some time to really admit to themselves and each other how they felt, but because of the dual POV, we knew before they did that their feelings were more than just attraction. The spice was minimal but good, and the romance was sweet.
The actual plot, of the Crane vs the South was really interesting. I do feel like the end was too abrupt, which is the only reason this is four stars rather than five! I wanted more detail and more scenes showing what was happening moving forward. I’m disappointed that after all of that build up, the last chapter is sort of a quick summary of what is happening. But the resolution was really well done and such an interesting take on how to handle the Southerners!
All in all, I’m so pleasantly surprised by this book and series. I’m very curious about the next book and already interested to read anything else these two authors have written if they’re even half as interesting as these books!
Tropes: Forced Proximity, Dual POV, Mutual Pining, Overprotective MMC, Hurt/Comfort
Rating: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ 4/5
Spice: 🌶️ 1/5
Relationship: MM
Wow. I was excited for Hector and Killian’s book but was not prepared for just how much I was going to love this book.
The book starts off a little slow, mostly because of the kind of awkward back and forth that Hector and Killian have while they both deny themselves their feelings for one another. But luckily none of that lasts too long and the way everything starts to play out once they do get together is so well done!
I love the whole timeline and how everything happened between them and with the Crane people. Especially how positive and supportive everyone was! There were a few moments where Hector or Killian were acting out of character (or at least what others thought was out of character) or moments where they were showing their true selves and characteristics, and the others in Crane were so sweet and happy for them! It was so nice to read and considering this book is about a group of people whose entire daily life is about fighting and defense, the book was super low angst!
Hector and Killian took some time to really admit to themselves and each other how they felt, but because of the dual POV, we knew before they did that their feelings were more than just attraction. The spice was minimal but good, and the romance was sweet.
The actual plot, of the Crane vs the South was really interesting. I do feel like the end was too abrupt, which is the only reason this is four stars rather than five! I wanted more detail and more scenes showing what was happening moving forward. I’m disappointed that after all of that build up, the last chapter is sort of a quick summary of what is happening. But the resolution was really well done and such an interesting take on how to handle the Southerners!
All in all, I’m so pleasantly surprised by this book and series. I’m very curious about the next book and already interested to read anything else these two authors have written if they’re even half as interesting as these books!
Tropes: Forced Proximity, Dual POV, Mutual Pining, Overprotective MMC, Hurt/Comfort
Rating: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ 4/5
Spice: 🌶️ 1/5
Relationship: MM
August 17, 2025
Love the Graves-Ferraiuolo duo and they did an amazing job.
Dani's review is pretty spot on on how this story went off the rails.
Hector and Killian's story left me with a conundrum of feelings. I liked it a lot and I hated it. Hector and Killian exasperated me with their inner monologues. Hector doubting everything about himself unless he's constantly doing acts of service but feeling wronged by his father as well. Killian has such an obtuse idea about avianatis which is based on his own suppositions but presents it like its a fact.
Helena pissed me the EFF off! Jeez what an unlikeable, self-righteous, judgemental character. Especially for something she got and kept a secret from Hector and when Hector was "infected" Killian was the villain.
Then what really griped me is the whole war with the Southerners. It was based on absolutely no reason at all, and no one ever thought to do what Hector did, simply talk with them. Senseless in every way and it didn't made sense to me, and it served only for a way to just resolved everything quickly and neatly.
Finally although in the first book the little world building we got, worked for it, here since Gods were mentioned, out of the blue based on the little we know from book 1, and explored more of Nemeda, the result of the little info we have is a jumbled mess.
Ughh not to mention that Killian and Hector's physical descriptions made me cross-eyed with how confusing they were.
All and all this was not very satisfactory.
Dani's review is pretty spot on on how this story went off the rails.
Hector and Killian's story left me with a conundrum of feelings. I liked it a lot and I hated it. Hector and Killian exasperated me with their inner monologues. Hector doubting everything about himself unless he's constantly doing acts of service but feeling wronged by his father as well. Killian has such an obtuse idea about avianatis which is based on his own suppositions but presents it like its a fact.
Helena pissed me the EFF off! Jeez what an unlikeable, self-righteous, judgemental character. Especially for something she got and kept a secret from Hector and when Hector was "infected" Killian was the villain.
Then what really griped me is the whole war with the Southerners. It was based on absolutely no reason at all, and no one ever thought to do what Hector did, simply talk with them. Senseless in every way and it didn't made sense to me, and it served only for a way to just resolved everything quickly and neatly.
Finally although in the first book the little world building we got, worked for it, here since Gods were mentioned, out of the blue based on the little we know from book 1, and explored more of Nemeda, the result of the little info we have is a jumbled mess.
Ughh not to mention that Killian and Hector's physical descriptions made me cross-eyed with how confusing they were.
All and all this was not very satisfactory.
November 5, 2024
The story continues in the On the Wind series. In this book, Hector, escaped from Urial, and Killian, chief of the Heron clan, get their story. Hector was a Lord in Urial. As the older brother, his was a life of responsibility and duty from a young age. Now that his family has taken refuge in Nemedan, his younger siblings have their own mates and no longer need him. Purposeless in a strange land, he agrees to spend three years at the wall to pay the service requirement for his family.
All Killian has known his entire life is war. In relentless attacks from the Southerners, he has fought wave after wave and his mother even died for the cause. He wishes for a life free from war, as his people were originally artisans. Now, his people are caught in an endless cycle of death and destruction.
Hector and Killian are attracted to each other from their first meeting. Over time, that attraction grew, but Killian keeps rebuffing Hector's advances, as any intimate contact between the two men can result in Hector contracting avianitis, a disease that will either help Hector find his inner bird or kill him in the process.
This book has action, danger, passion, and a beautiful love. I look forward to reading the next book in the series!
All Killian has known his entire life is war. In relentless attacks from the Southerners, he has fought wave after wave and his mother even died for the cause. He wishes for a life free from war, as his people were originally artisans. Now, his people are caught in an endless cycle of death and destruction.
Hector and Killian are attracted to each other from their first meeting. Over time, that attraction grew, but Killian keeps rebuffing Hector's advances, as any intimate contact between the two men can result in Hector contracting avianitis, a disease that will either help Hector find his inner bird or kill him in the process.
This book has action, danger, passion, and a beautiful love. I look forward to reading the next book in the series!
June 23, 2025
A shining example of Religious Acceptance.
Hector, older brother and defacto parent to his younger siblings and Killian, an artist forced into war at the age of 11 are two men you want to root for and the book is satisfying.
There are some glaring details, like how the story implies snowy owls are smaller than horned owls which is actually the reverse and the fact that Killian is said to be in his forties but later states it's been 30, years since he'd met a man while in his teens. It definitely could use some revision but for the most part the story is solid.
Some might roll their eyes at the idea that war was waged for generations on a misunderstanding but others who are familiar with history and how secular cultures can be will give it more grace.
It's powerful, how easily war can be stopped when people actually accommodate others and have real conversations and it's especially difficult to read given the tumultuous times we're living in right now.
But if anything stories like this offer hope, and in addition to the wonderful characters the story is, as I said, extremely satisfying.
Hector, older brother and defacto parent to his younger siblings and Killian, an artist forced into war at the age of 11 are two men you want to root for and the book is satisfying.
There are some glaring details, like how the story implies snowy owls are smaller than horned owls which is actually the reverse and the fact that Killian is said to be in his forties but later states it's been 30, years since he'd met a man while in his teens. It definitely could use some revision but for the most part the story is solid.
Some might roll their eyes at the idea that war was waged for generations on a misunderstanding but others who are familiar with history and how secular cultures can be will give it more grace.
It's powerful, how easily war can be stopped when people actually accommodate others and have real conversations and it's especially difficult to read given the tumultuous times we're living in right now.
But if anything stories like this offer hope, and in addition to the wonderful characters the story is, as I said, extremely satisfying.
November 5, 2024
I loved Hector's story but do highly recommend reading it after Sanctuary. It will definitely help you understand the world and Hector's position a lot before just jumping right in. Hector has always been the one to protect his siblings. Now that he's had to leave his home and they don't need him to protect them anymore, he's feeling a bit lost. Killian has seen too much war to believe in love...or so he thinks. I think it's more because he's afraid to loose any more people that he's close to. It was great to see a story where two characters connected over their similarities instead of differences. I love an opposites attract, but I think both these guys needed someone who can understand the responsibility they carry. This was a very well done story that kept the pace with the war on the edge that threatens everything. The solution probably felt rushed to some, though I didn't mind it. I am excited to see what the Crane's do with themselves after this! I'm not sure who's up next, but I can't wait to see more of this awesome world
November 4, 2024
Since I obviously love these authors' writing style, this surprisingly low-angst book read fast and brought me a sense of calm for the most part. By this point, we knew what to expect for most of the story, but we did get a few surprises along the way.
As for the book covers? I read a review that made excellent observations about them that I hadn't really taken the time to notice. I do remember thinking that they were basically in line with other book covers that I had seen before, so I didn't really give them any thought. Perhaps they have a new cover artist? I am totally not up to date on the whole AI situation and feel that this is something that I need to take the time to learn more about. Luckily, for me, the cover didn't distract from the story and I look forward to reading Harbor on the 14th of this month!
As for the book covers? I read a review that made excellent observations about them that I hadn't really taken the time to notice. I do remember thinking that they were basically in line with other book covers that I had seen before, so I didn't really give them any thought. Perhaps they have a new cover artist? I am totally not up to date on the whole AI situation and feel that this is something that I need to take the time to learn more about. Luckily, for me, the cover didn't distract from the story and I look forward to reading Harbor on the 14th of this month!
July 4, 2025
DNF
got about half way through when it just started to p*** me off...
SPOILERS
Paris was given the flu without knowing it even existed, but he's ok with his lover/husband. His sister goes through it, they don't even bother to let Hector know until she is 100% recovered and they happen to see each other for an all clan gathering (would Hector ever have been told if he hadn't attended the gathering?) Then having spoken with Hector about the flu and what's like... basically confirming that Hector is aware of the flu and is considering taking that step in his relationship with Killian with full knowledge of all that it could entail, Paris still accuses Killian of murdering his brother when he falls sick, thus driving him away from Hector while he is sick.... just WTF! i had to stop
I love Sam Burns solo work, when she writes with Fawkes, i get significantly less enjoyment out of the novels.
got about half way through when it just started to p*** me off...
SPOILERS
Paris was given the flu without knowing it even existed, but he's ok with his lover/husband. His sister goes through it, they don't even bother to let Hector know until she is 100% recovered and they happen to see each other for an all clan gathering (would Hector ever have been told if he hadn't attended the gathering?) Then having spoken with Hector about the flu and what's like... basically confirming that Hector is aware of the flu and is considering taking that step in his relationship with Killian with full knowledge of all that it could entail, Paris still accuses Killian of murdering his brother when he falls sick, thus driving him away from Hector while he is sick.... just WTF! i had to stop
I love Sam Burns solo work, when she writes with Fawkes, i get significantly less enjoyment out of the novels.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
November 4, 2024
Book two of On the Wind, features Killian of the Crane and Hector of Urial in Nemeda as Hector learns about his new land, a new people, and his new role in life. Wanting to prove himself, and secure not only his place but the place of his brother Paris and sister Helena he quickly says he'll do all their years on the wall to prove they're all Nemedian, so no one can whisper other wise.
What comes of this decision is of course Avianitis, learning acceptance (from others, of others, and of himself) finding there's more to him than he ever realized and helping figure things out as far as the Southerners and the never ending war goes.
It was interesting to finally learn WHY the Southerners have been at war with the Nemedean's for so long, and the how they finally get it to come to an end. I really enjoyed my ARC copy of Killian and Hector's story.
What comes of this decision is of course Avianitis, learning acceptance (from others, of others, and of himself) finding there's more to him than he ever realized and helping figure things out as far as the Southerners and the never ending war goes.
It was interesting to finally learn WHY the Southerners have been at war with the Nemedean's for so long, and the how they finally get it to come to an end. I really enjoyed my ARC copy of Killian and Hector's story.
December 30, 2024
I’m loving this series, especially the characters and world building. I enjoyed learning more about Hector and his family through his perspective, and also Killian’s past. I liked the friendships too, and seeing Paris, Brett, and Helena again.
I liked how Killian is determined not to risk Hector’s life by having a relationship, while being convinced that love has nothing to do with Avianitis. The Nemedan’s secret and their true nature is brilliant. I loved how Hector is convinced that, although his siblings survived, his won’t because they are only half-siblings. I also loved how he finds his place in the world, and his ideas make a huge difference.
I liked the confrontations with the Southerners, and how each side has its own perspective. Very nicely done.
I’m looking forward to Orestes’ story. He deserves his own HEA.
I liked how Killian is determined not to risk Hector’s life by having a relationship, while being convinced that love has nothing to do with Avianitis. The Nemedan’s secret and their true nature is brilliant. I loved how Hector is convinced that, although his siblings survived, his won’t because they are only half-siblings. I also loved how he finds his place in the world, and his ideas make a huge difference.
I liked the confrontations with the Southerners, and how each side has its own perspective. Very nicely done.
I’m looking forward to Orestes’ story. He deserves his own HEA.
November 24, 2024
I enjoyed the first book of the series and expected maybe too much of the second one, the conflict for both of the characters to not just be together is waaay to dumb, inner monologues repetitive, both behaving like teenagers and not as whole ass grown up men -
the white hair seme seems very OOC and distant from how he was depicted in the first book - hey my guy, everyone dies anyways how about enjoy relationships while it lasts?
ALSO how the sucession line from his clan works, since his mother was the leader bf him and he didnt 'believe in love' but has 40yrs old and no signal of children to inherit the leadership of the conflict, how? why this isnt part of his conflict in this book?
anyways
the white hair seme seems very OOC and distant from how he was depicted in the first book - hey my guy, everyone dies anyways how about enjoy relationships while it lasts?
ALSO how the sucession line from his clan works, since his mother was the leader bf him and he didnt 'believe in love' but has 40yrs old and no signal of children to inherit the leadership of the conflict, how? why this isnt part of his conflict in this book?
anyways
October 20, 2024
I was so excited to get this book because I devoured the first one in this series. I was so not disappointed! Lillian and Hector are absolutely divine! War has asked a heavy price of the entire Crane clan, no one more so than Killian. He doesn’t believe in love or anything soft and good anymore. Hector catches him very much by surprise. Paris’s brother has never had it easy either and just needs to feel like he has found his place among the Nemedeans. Maybe he can finally find his place on the wall at Killian’s side. And just maybe figure out why the Southerners continue to attack their clan.
November 4, 2024
I enjoyed this story a lot, as I expect to enjoy everything from Burns and Fawkes. The brilliant world building continued in this book, turning to the tragedy of the Crane having to become warriors rather than the artists they had been. Killian and Hector share several heavy burdens in common, and figuring out how to become more than the expectations of them was a key part of the story. I always love to see previous characters shown through different eyes in series like this, so it was fun to see Paris and Brett and Rosalind through Hector's eyes. Definitely an interesting ending; the Southerners are so odd to me. Looking forward to the next in series!
October 27, 2024
So excited to get Hector and Killian's book!
After the little spark of chemistry from the end of book 1, then Hector declaring he'll serve 3 years at the wall for his family, I was so excited to learn more about the other parts of Nemeda and how Hector and Killian would get together.
This is another hard-earned HEA for our couple. Killian is so hardened by battle with the South, and Hector is so new to the ways of Nemeda (and their secrets), there was so much to work through before they got together. So happy that Hector also got his bird but Paris's reaction was NOT it, and annoyed me.
Anyways, super excited for Orestes story because I've liked him since book 1, but also half dreading it because of Tybalt... who I've disliked since book 1 LOL
After the little spark of chemistry from the end of book 1, then Hector declaring he'll serve 3 years at the wall for his family, I was so excited to learn more about the other parts of Nemeda and how Hector and Killian would get together.
This is another hard-earned HEA for our couple. Killian is so hardened by battle with the South, and Hector is so new to the ways of Nemeda (and their secrets), there was so much to work through before they got together. So happy that Hector also got his bird but Paris's reaction was NOT it, and annoyed me.
Anyways, super excited for Orestes story because I've liked him since book 1, but also half dreading it because of Tybalt... who I've disliked since book 1 LOL
October 25, 2024
Aside from needing some serious proofreading TLC, this was another really great story.
Just like the first book, it had a really uplifting and inspiring story, the love was gentle and healing, the characters were fantastic and precious and deeper than the fluff, and the way the HEA encompasses the entire world? I love that. A lot. We all need this kind of hopeful, flourishing, peaceful energy right now.
4.25/5. Idk how I feel about Orestes getting saddled with Tybalt, but the redemption will either slap or flop. I’ll still love Orestes regardless, so bring it on.
Just like the first book, it had a really uplifting and inspiring story, the love was gentle and healing, the characters were fantastic and precious and deeper than the fluff, and the way the HEA encompasses the entire world? I love that. A lot. We all need this kind of hopeful, flourishing, peaceful energy right now.
4.25/5. Idk how I feel about Orestes getting saddled with Tybalt, but the redemption will either slap or flop. I’ll still love Orestes regardless, so bring it on.
October 28, 2024
“From the first time I saw him, he was my choice. Not Avianitis, not feathers or birds or loss or any of it. Just him, and knowing that he saw me as I wanted to be seen.” Aww, Hector and Killian are so cute together. I enjoyed watching Hector find his place and see himself for how wonderful he is, and I enjoyed Killian’s… emotional awakening is what my mind keeps coming back to. These two are quite wonderful and I enjoyed all the surprises they led us to. Yay for Killian and Hector, and yay for more On the Wind!
November 1, 2024
Killian gets what he wants
Hector is Paris's older brother. He's clever and strong and responsible. All those things are very attractive to the head of the Crane clan, but he worries a relationship will get in the way of his duties as general and potentially kill Hector with Avianitis.
Hector wants Killian too, and he's persistent and stubborn enough to get what he wants. He needs to prove himself worthy after losing everything in Urial, and if that means single handedly ending the war, he's willing to take a shot at it.
Hector is Paris's older brother. He's clever and strong and responsible. All those things are very attractive to the head of the Crane clan, but he worries a relationship will get in the way of his duties as general and potentially kill Hector with Avianitis.
Hector wants Killian too, and he's persistent and stubborn enough to get what he wants. He needs to prove himself worthy after losing everything in Urial, and if that means single handedly ending the war, he's willing to take a shot at it.
October 27, 2024
This was good, I really liked both MCs and laughed when Hector saw his color and thought he was a pigeon. Idk, the one thing that was weird to me was the whole religion angle, and how they were fighting to show valor. I don’t want to think they were stupid, but they couldn’t have come up with gladiator combat themselves? Wouldn’t fighting between yourselves be the first thought rather than having to travel far away? It just didn’t make sense to me
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