I thought I would love this but I did not!
Full review:
Thank you to the author Rufi Thorpe, publishers William Morrow Books, and NetGalley for an advance digital copy of MARGO'S GOT MONEY TROUBLE . All views are mine.
It seemed improbable that men really wanted sex this badly, and yet they did, there was an entire economy based on how badly they wanted it, and for a moment Margo understood the sexual desire she felt was mild in comparison. She would never pay fifteen dollars to look at a guy naked. You could buy two, possibly three sandwiches for fifteen dollars. p71
Well, I thought I would love this one. But I really didn't. I am a huge fan of fiction books with feminist characters, storylines, or themes, and this is one of those. Sort of. But the feminism you'll find in this book is a new breed of it‐‐‐ sort of an issue feminism. OnlyFans only feminism.
Thorpe also writes a copious amount of material about the details of the character's legal troubles and how she will address them. Unfortunately, the author only provides details about the boring stuff. Well, boring if you're not using this book as a how-to manual. Her rare metaphor is interesting, so I bet her figurative writing would actually be good, but she describes exactly nothing. I would say it needs an extra 50 pages in literary description, except I can't imagine this book being any longer than it already is.
Apple TV has optioned this one for a streaming series. First time this has happened before a book was published. Considering the lack of description in this book, I imagine the series will have to be an improvement on the text.
That was how it was being a grown-up. We were all moving through the world like that, like those river dolphins that look pink only because they’re so covered in scars. p190
Reading Notes
Three (or more) things I loved:
1. She kept thinking, as she nursed him, I am so fucked, I am so fucked, I am so fucked. Because all around her she could feel the echoey space of no one caring about her or worrying about her or helping her. She might as well have been nursing this baby on an abandoned space station. p12 I'm tired of all the hero-mom narratives dominating the literary landscape right now, but I am here for the mom disaster narratives! *edit nope, just another hero mom narrative, swer edition.
2. I like intergenerational trauma story lines like this: “Look at how long and thick his fingers are.” The love-drunk look on Jinx’s face made the back of Margo’s throat hurt. Had her father looked at her like that when she was a baby? p64
3. This book goes into great detail about the family court system and how terrible it is. Well great, I guess, if you're not the one losing your kid, but still just horrifying material. I think this is a very important subject and I'm glad Thorpe decided to cover it in her cold, calculated style.
Three (or less) things I didn't love:
This section isn't only for criticisms. It's merely for items that I felt something for other than "love" or some interpretation thereof.
1. I'm in the first pages of the book, and I'm already put off by the sections of completely unnecessary and horribly executed second person POV. In this case, it's just slipshod stand-in for first-person POV and should be written in first person instead. *edit In general, changing POV feels clumsy and confusing throughout the text.
2. Dang girl, just give your poor dad some space lol! He is really fine without you!
3. "Violently" is used repetitiously and often incorrectly.
4. Thorpe spends 50 pages moralizing why abortion is selfish or at least irresponsible, then spends the rest of the book justifying (or not bothering) the main character's use of her OnlyFans account to make a living as a sex worker. These are both important women's issues, neither of which are more pious or deserving than the other. Thorpe is sending some convuluted, and some downright bad messages to the young women who will read this book. I find the narrative didactic and obtuse. Is this what passes for white feminism in 2024?
5. This book contains very little descriptive writing. It's mostly dialogue and summary of action.
6. There are pages and pages of shroom-tripping characters laying out a business plan, step by step. It's such a dry scene and it's not good fiction. It reads like a how-to book. I bet some readers will actually follow it.
Rating: 🤱 / 5 "hero" moms
Recommend? No
Finished: Aug 27 '24
Format: Digital arc, Kindle, NetGalley
Read this book if you like:
👶🏻 new mom stories
👨👩👧👦 family stories, family drama
💉 addiction recovery stories
💇♀️ women's coming of age
💄 feminism